At the Start, You Get a Whole School of Crazy Tribesmen

Progress: 81 The novel setting is eye-catching. All the teachers and students in the school travel to a different world together, and the heroine draws the only patriarch card. The clan leader is the only resurrection point, and death means permanent death. After clan members die, they can change their identity cards, and infinite resurrection is a bit like the fourth natural disaster. The setting is really cool, but the plot is a bit unclear. The pace is very slow, and after watching so much, I can extract very few key points, which is a bit watery. The feeling of itching in front of your feet should always feel good, but the reality is that it is a bit unclear. The heroine went to the forbidden area for the first time, and the task required clearing the ancient tomb. Two tribesmen, and a trio composed of a real and fake daughter. In the end, only one outsider survived, the real and fake daughter, one died and the other was injured. I wrote a lot of words, but I just don't know what the meaning is. The first appearance of the heroine and her clan members was a bit shocking, but the shock of being revealed in front of people was not enough, and it didn't scratch the itch. There are also two tribesmen, a teacher and a clear-minded college student. Their impressions are just that, there is no particularly vivid memory point. The same goes for other tribesmen. They didn't form a clear memory point, so they just watched it flow away like running water. Not as good as the three real and fake rich young masters. The supporting roles are only a little more distinctive than them, but it's useless. After two of them die, only one real rich young master is left. I feel like there are a lot of group chats, but I forget them once I've seen them, and they're not very enjoyable. I thought about it for a while, and I probably wanted to see the part where the patriarch and his clan members appeared in front of others. The other two hope to create a few tribesmen with distinctive personalities, such as who used to be the principal and is now the general manager, as well as old naughty elders, and professional poisonous tribe members. Third, I hope that every time I go to the Forbidden Land, it will be more exciting and more exciting, including the unknown creatures in the tomb and the thrilling background stories. Once this aspect is written, it is also a highlight.

Currently updated to chapter 57, it's super cool! ! ! One thing I like very much is that the author clearly states the gender of the protagonist at the beginning, because although there are many articles on female channels, the content he writes is gender-neutral. I don't know how to describe it. Anyway, female channels have male and female protagonists, but male channels only have male protagonists. Yes, anyway, the male videos I watch are like this, and the female videos are uncomfortable to watch like this. The gender in the introduction is not obvious, and it is difficult to describe gender in the first few chapters, such as he, she, these words, they all refer to young people and so on. This kind of male and female, it is really uncomfortable! Then the gender is mentioned at the beginning. It may be because Zhang Qiling in the original work is a male and this one is a female, but I really like this! We really need this kind of game that clearly determines the gender of the protagonist at the beginning! Really like this! Then let's talk about the content of the main text. Although I have read similar books before, this one still made me feel like I was shining in the past. The content is also very novel and interesting. Who can compete without that kind of old book? In fact, when the real and fake Qianjin came out, I frowned a little because I had seen similar national sports stories before. Finally, it no longer follows the same old routine, and many of the foreshadowings are very interesting. The shortcoming is that the character of the protagonist may not be so clear, and I feel that it is not as impressive as the few small pieces. I hope there can be more content about the protagonist [blowing kiss]. Finally, there are too few chapters [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]. It is the first time I encounter a novel that I like so much but it is such a small baby novel [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]. Oh my god, please update more [send heart][send heart][send heart]

This book is super good. The main character is Zhang Qiling, but he does not play the role of Zhang Qiling in Tomb Raiders Notes. He is a very independent individual. The author writes the part about the assimilation of all the teachers and students in the school after they obtained the identity of the Zhang family. There is no big problem. The shortcomings I think may be that the number of words is too few, and the team leader and others have too many psychological frames. It feels like more than 1,000 words out of 2,000 are devoted to description. I think we can describe the current construction status of the Zhang family more, and then discuss it with outsiders. All in all, super nice

Shocking and delicious, but the pace is slow, I really like this! Originally, I didn't really like Zhang Qiling as a girl, but after reading this book, I remembered that Zhang Qiling was originally a code name, and it didn't have to be a male. This kind of group portrait in a forbidden area is exactly what I like! Okay, they are all cute!

I think it's generally pretty good, and the character descriptions are OK, but a bit laggy. If possible, more can be done to describe the protagonists' experiences, but there may be less, so I feel that the description of the protagonists is not as profound as the supporting characters. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Shockingly delicious! Anyway, among the stolen fanfics I've read, this is the first one written from such a perspective and idea. It's so good! However, I feel that the plot is a bit delayed. The author could actually speed up the progress, and the perspective should not always be about the Zhang family. There is a lot of explanations about the feud between two women and a man. To be honest, I am not interested at all anyway, and I feel that it is unnecessary, because the focus is on the Zhang family and Zhang Qiling, and there are many people watching. This is what people are going for, so I hope the author can improve it a little bit (PS: If the author has written a good outline or has a well-conceived plot, don't make major changes, otherwise it will be easy to collapse later. The author just needs to stick to himself. Of course, I still hope to make changes if it does not affect the general direction of the plot.) Finally, I like this book very much! Please give the author a big boost and update!

I have now read and updated it to Chapter 73. At present, the subject matter of this book is particularly novel. The character description is very good and the character description is more three-dimensional. Especially in the part about assimilation and the importance of the clan leader, the reaction and thoughts after assimilation are written out, and the respect and crazy love for the clan leader are vividly displayed, which is particularly interesting. And finally it's not about real and fake daughters competing against each other, it's about working together to help each other. This is only right, this is only reasonable, no idiot would perform a celebratory act when life and death are at stake. Because I had read a story about a real and fake daughter's fortune, which made me a little stressed and scared me to death. Fortunately, I wasn't. However, I feel that the portrayal of the protagonist is lower than that of the supporting role. I hope that more highlight moments and aura can be added to the protagonist. I saw more than 20 photos and various hints and reminders from the author, and then I realized that the protagonist was Zhang Qiling, because there was too little portrayal of her, and it was a bit unclear to distinguish the protagonist. If the author wants to write a group portrait, he must first clearly depict the center. But I still like this movie very much. Although the depictions of the protagonists are relatively rare, I can still find a few. For example, Teacher Shengjie said with emotion, "This is the responsibility that the patriarch bears in this new [Zhang Family]." So I still like this novel very much. Who are you, the blooming redbud! ! ! Now everyone in 321 began to chant: The patriarch is the compass of the family [love] and the beacon of the family [love]. He also takes on the responsibility of catching their hesitating hearts [love]. This is the responsibility that the patriarch bears in this new [Zhang family] [love] Heart] is like a group of mad dogs with a chain, and the rope is tied in Zhang Qiling's hands. She is loyal in front of her, but in the eyes of others - there is no doubt that it is a crazy beast [love] The Zhang family will save people because of the instructions of the patriarch; the Zhang family will protect Protecting others is naturally due to the patriarch's entrustment [love]. The Zhang family's love and respect for the patriarch is engraved in the bones and integrated into the blood. When there is no disguise mission, there is absolutely no possibility of joining another camp. Even mentioning it is disrespectful to the patriarch. And contempt [Love] The clan leader is the soul of the clan, a being who needs to be respected, protected, and taken care of, and controls the development direction of the entire clan [Love] The Zhang family is like moths, always flying around the bright light [Love] How can the clan leader disobey the clan leader? Even if you unintentionally take drastic actions to protect the clan leader, as long as the clan leader doesn't like it, the clan members can change it at any time [Love]

Groups of people travel through groups to act as forbidden areas, and most importantly, the setting of the Zhang family in Tomb Raider Notes! It feels like my hobby has been sniped all of a sudden. Bless the author to keep updating, come on, I will start my love power generation from a new chapter!

The novelty of the subject matter is very attractive, and it is obvious that the author has certain writing skills, but the content is relatively watery. I understand that the author wants to write a group portrait, but the main and branch plots are very slow in so many chapters, making the readers unable to grasp the key points. It feels that at the current speed, at least thousands of chapters will be written to complete it. I hope the author can consider appropriately streamlining and promoting the progress of the main line. For example, there is really no need to write so many words about the inner story. One chapter is full of two male characters making jokes and fighting for the patriarch's favor + the real and fake daughter support each other, worship the patriarch and always obey the instructions + barrage bragging. There is a break in the tomb and a small amount of descriptions of tombs and monsters. Chapter fifty only fights two monsters. The real and fake daughter are given so much ink to shape but in the end they betray and die inexplicably. So far, it has not played the role it should have with so many words. The subject matter is really attractive. I sincerely hope that the author can make progress. May the author work hard and wish the fire a bright future.

It's great to see, a very novel angle, please keep updating, teacher.

It's not bad, the capitalization is OK, it's very detailed, and the setting is also very novel. More than 3,000 people from the entire school dress up to play the role of the Zhang family. There are live broadcasts of the national games and psychological descriptions of the characters. However, the pace is indeed a bit draggy and slow. This is probably because there is a lot of content in the early stage that needs to be introduced one by one. There is not much content about the country at the moment, and it is probably still being laid out. Let's take a look, it's only about forty chapters now, I hope it will be better in the future [Sending my heart] Come on! ! ! [Like][Like][Like][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Bird Food Masterpiece][Add One to Bookshelf]

This family story is well written, but the pace is too slow, and there are too many supporting characters and chat rooms. I didn't finish it until chapter 30, and it's estimated that it would take chapter 80 to complete one level. If it's too slow, you need to consider the pace.

I really, large-scale real fragrance scene [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] Originally, I didn't want to watch it because the introduction said that Zhang Qiling is a woman, but I didn't expect it. It's such a slap in the face. It's so good-looking. I highly recommend it. The only drawback is that there are too few! ! ! It's not enough for me to watch [crying][crying]

Overall, it's okay. You can take a look when you're bored. There are brainless plots, and both men and women have their moments to shine. But one thing is very obvious. The protagonist basically has no highlight moments. After reading the whole story, it is difficult to tell who is the protagonist. I even feel that the one who impressed me the most after reading the movie is the wealthy brother, who is a very typical brainless and vicious character. I don't know if it's because the author wanted to write a group portrait and give the protagonist more space and highlight moments. There is a live broadcast in the forbidden area, the barrage is a little brainless, and there is a lot of inner drama. Adding the two together, it feels like the inner drama and the barrage are the main text. You can take a look when you are bored. This is how I felt when I read more than 40 chapters. This is just my personal feeling. Happy reading next Overall, the setting is very novel, but the writing style, plot setting and character creation are a bit stiff and flat, perhaps because of Xiaobai. Of course, this does not mean that this is a very bad article. I also hope that the author will keep writing, keep going.

1. The writing is smooth and natural, and the story has a strong sense of picture. 2. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, with full empathy. 3. The foreshadowing is exquisitely designed, and the plot is captivating. 4. The text is delicate and warm, leaving you with a long aftertaste after reading it. 5. The narrative rhythm is just right and there is no sense of delay. 6. The words and sentences are well chosen and the atmosphere is created perfectly. (Reproduced version) Please give the author more than 100 chapters a day

Cats are vivid and three-dimensional. They are brave, weak, persistent and compromised. They are in the torrent of time and destiny, struggling, searching, and sticking to their true intentions. The rhythm of the story is relaxed and moderate, and the plot progresses layer by layer. It has both ups and downs of conflict and gentle and healing details. It is not eager to give answers, nor does it forcefully instill truths. Instead, it leaves the thinking to the readers, allowing us to feel and grow, understand the choices and trade-offs, and clearly see the gains and losses in the text.

It's very beautiful, I hope the author won't stop updating it! ! ! You must keep writing! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Ask for explosive updates][Ask for explosive updates][Ask for explosive updates][Ask for explosive updates]

Current progress: Chapter 123 The idea is really novel, and the setting of 7,000 teachers and students playing the role of the Zhang family really struck a chord with me. When the clan leader dies, everyone is buried with him, so everyone supports the clan leader, and because he will be assimilated, it is really cool to use the clan leader as an anchor to let others see this kind of twisted love! And no one has ever seen all kinds of "living creatures" in the world view of Tomb Raiders. The Zhang family defeated them all at once. It was really cool. The plot of building the Zhang family from scratch, spreading the Zhang family's abilities to the outside world bit by bit, and quietly changing the whole world has a feeling of being a saint in front of others, and I like it very much! There is a lot of foreshadowing in the story. The author writes it very carefully and the content is very comprehensive. It can be seen that he has put great care into it. But the overall pace is slow, and some plots that I think should be exciting and exciting are not really enjoyable. Even though there was a barrage to describe how shocked and overwhelmed everyone was, the excitement was never quite there. I don't know if it was because the pace was too slow or because of the narrative. They want to teach ordinary people in this world to know how to protect themselves when they encounter weird things that go against common sense in the future. It makes me feel a little bit like a nanny, but not a lot. I just feel that the supporting characters are not very powerful and their abilities are not up to par. The Zhang family has to protect them, and they don't get anything in return, so I feel a little bit uncomfortable. And the forbidden area is obviously a place where people will die, but I didn't feel any sense of urgency when I read it. People in this world rarely see any practical responses to this kind of disaster. They all seem to be watching the excitement and watching the barrage. The danger seems far away from them, and it is difficult for me to take part in it. It always feels like I am watching something that has nothing to do with this world. Although the official has been in contact with some Zhang family members, the number of chapters may be too few and it did not make me feel that they are very urgent. Overall, the idea is outstanding, the framework is attractive, and it has full potential. I look forward to adjusting the narrative rhythm in the future and arranging more highlight moments for the Zhang family. With such a good foundation, the subsequent writing will definitely be more exciting, and I will continue to pursue it! Big cheers for the author!

It's so good, the plot went smoothly and gave me an unexpected ending. This is my trumpet account. The duration may not be too long, because my phone is broken and I can't log in to the big account. I think it will be repaired in two days. I will use this to comment for the time being. This book is the best I have ever read, both in terms of writing and emotion. It really spoke to me. I can only say that the person who came up with the cat sculpture is a genius. The Zhang family's kitten is so cute. It makes me so cute. The patriarch is also cute. Everyone is so cute (*/∇＼*)

It's always good to watch. The relationship between the big and small cats is also very interesting. The patriarch has a little bit of social fear. The plot is very smooth, but sometimes it's funny. It's the kind of story that flows slowly.

I think it's really good to read. The subject matter of this article is very novel. When I read the introduction to this article, I thought it was not good to read. I wanted to give up on it, but I read it and found it to be good. I haven't found any bad points so far. But I still prefer the Zhang family, who are more decisive in killing. Xi (the male) in the article did this and was so provocative, but he still didn't give up or solve it. I personally don't like this. The author's writing style is not only very good, but he also listens to my advice. He listens to all my suggestions. I'm really touched ꒰づ≧ω≦ づ꒱～♡

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Nice! Finished the chase in one go! This is the best forbidden live broadcast I have ever seen! ! ! It's fun to show me! ! ! Teacher, you are really amazing! ! ! I beg readers to read this book! ! !

It's so beautiful! It's so beautiful! ! ! ! ! Xiao Zhang is very funny and has great acting skills. He owes the Zhang family a lot of Oscars. The clan leader is also very interesting. To be honest, I didn't expect that the clan elder would be rejected when he ran for the principal. After all, the clan leader wanted the principal to take charge of the overall situation for him. Anyway, it's very interesting, very interesting, very interesting. I hope the teacher will never stop updating. I hope the teacher will update it quickly, 10 chapters a day. Goddess, as long as you renew, I will follow you forever! ! !

The idea is quite interesting. The first few chapters seem to be a bit interesting, but after that, it becomes obvious that it lacks that flavor and drags on. Basically, every person and every behavior has a psychological reaction described. The Zhang family's psychology was repeated several times, with no priority. Now the part before and after the principal appears is better.

It's okay. The characterization is quite good. Let's write more scenes for the clan leader later on. The supporting characters have more scenes than the clan leader.

The logic is clear, the world line is clear, traveling in other worlds, the new Zhang family is growing stronger and prosperous, the themes are novel and unique, and the appreciation is excellent. Three thousand lanterns are for one person; or one person is for a thousand people.

The description of this book is great. Girls are not brainless. On the contrary, they are very rational and smart. And here, Zhang Qiling is a girl. Every character is perfect. It is not particularly perfect, but very good. It makes people feel very comfortable. Everyone is very distinct, and it is not blind that one person is vicious or someone is too kind. It makes people feel that the characters described are very distinct. I highly recommend it.

Damn, this is really awesome, awesome, awesome, the acting skills are soaring, really, this subject matter is very good, I recommend reading it, the patriarch still retains his humanity, the others are really crazy dogs centered on the patriarch, the chain is only in the hands of the patriarch, this one is particularly recommended, ahhhh, the little brother became a woman in this fanfic, but the description is really delicate and beautiful

So beautiful! But the pace is too little and too slow. Zhang Qiling has no sense of presence in the previous chapters. He only moved his hand in the last few chapters without going into details, as if he just slaughtered a chicken () but I really like the theme of group wear. Hehe, I will look for similar articles.