Chen Zhiang penetrated into the Kowloon Walled City and obtained the Ding Crab body in "The Great Era". He learned how to make pissing beef balls from Man Han Lou Ou Zhaofeng, and the tornado allowed him to set up a stall in Tuo Di. On the first day, he gave away two hundred bowls to establish his reputation, and smashed the stone mill to knock out the gangsters in the robbery, and gained power from Awu. In the troubled times when the four detectives fell, I relied on cow pills and fists to open a path between black and white.
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The idea is very good, and there is a lot of scope for writing later, but the problem is that what you write is not like a novel, like a manuscript, or Ai. There is basically no plot, it is completely episodic, one line for one picture, and I would jump to another scene completely in another line. It can be concluded that it was written by AI.
The content is quite good, but there are too many confusing spaces, which makes it difficult to read. You have to guess at some places, which greatly affects reading.