Fate: Onii-Chan, There Are Too Many Bad Guys!

Isn't it considered a kind of awesome writing in a sense to only have a fate line?

It's a very interesting fanfic. Please update more, but it's not enough. I still hope to be able to summon the idiots from the fate line, or maybe stay in Avalon. After all, I am Shirou from the fate line. I still hope to reunite with the idiots who have the same memories. I must continue to update in the end. Come on.

I really feel that the writing is okay. The main reason is that the author should update it more. Among Fate fandoms, it is now quite enjoyable for the whole family to read [laughs]

There is no obvious OOC at present, but the traces of AI polishing are obvious. It is recommended that the author only uses AI to correct some sentence errors. The writing style can be gradually improved, otherwise the context understanding of AI will be broken later, making it harder to read later. I myself also used AI to write a 300,000-word fate novel. Due to text volume limitations and the fact that it was completed in multiple conversations, even with keyword prompts, I felt extremely fragmented when I read the 300,000-word novel together. I hope the author writes better and better

Let me give you 4 points first. It started very comfortably. The rhythm is pretty good. But there are too many AI polishes, which sometimes affects the look and feel (it's not... But... [Smile]). If the latter situation is improved and the AI ​​is reduced or even not used, there is potential for freedom.

I read two pages on the home page and felt an inexplicable sense of déjà vu. Then I read the author and found out that the author's previous book was Shiken. I felt uncomfortable when I finished reading it because of the sudden ending. Personally, I liked the moment when Shirou and the idiot Mordred brought up the baby. Mordred is super cute. I wonder if I, Mordred, can return in the new book [eating melon] I saw Xiao Mo, it's oily [top post]

There must be more, and the author shouldn't mess with that um, crappy author, that one I was for Miya Shirou, what's wrong? Alas, I really enjoyed reading it, but I only updated it a little bit and finished reading it in one day. Author, you must keep updating, I will support you! ! ! ! ! Don't be like Snowflake Barbecue! ! ! If you keep following him, you will definitely surpass him.

Great, no need to say more, just take a look and cherish it!

It's great to read, especially the whole family is alive. This is a very good review. As expected of you, it's a masterpiece, and it's just as the author said. The Ilya in this book is not as unruly as the previous one. This is a great review. The younger sister's version of Ilya is very good.

The author's book is a good book, and I feel that the author is also a pretty good person. So I won't give this book a bad review because of personal grudges. So keep writing. Great author! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

It would be great if Fate's silly hair could be summoned normally.

It's a pity that it's a stand-in literature, but overall it's okay. I'll support it with 4 stars.

The writing is indeed beautiful, but if you can read it, I would like to give you some advice. When Qiandai came into contact with Lungominiad, his humanity had been eroded. Author, you seem to have written it too humanistically. Logically speaking, Qiandai should be a king whose divinity is greater than humanity. However, this book is not ugly, and the writing is good.

I really like this comedy style. I feel that Lord Coyote will develop into a lover of Superman, and I feel that there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope they won't break them [I understand][I understand]

It's better to be Shirou

Will Illya win this time? Illya: I will win!

It's great. This kind of daily novel is simply great!

Delicious, shocking and delicious

It looks good, I love watching it, I love watching it.

Awesome. More updates. Not enough. Please add more, it's not enough

The best Xingyue novel! ! !

It's well written, but will the original Saber appear?

Has this Shirou's strength surpassed that of Red A?

Full of meat, full of meat, sir, that's a lot of electricity [thinking][thinking][thinking]

The author writes very well, please update soon

I'm surprised that the characters are not broken, and the plot is also good. Has the author considered adding Gold Diamond and Miyou?

I hope the author can work hard! Can write better plots [Like]

Long time no see, author, I came to see your new book. The author's writing has improved a lot, the plot is good and the emotions are rich, but then I can't continue writing anymore, so that's it.

It's very beautiful, and I want to know how to beat cp in the end? Otherwise, just collect them all.

Full marks! Although the plot hasn't unfolded yet, it's already delicious [Sending Hearts]