The unlucky kid Lu Mingfei thinks the world must have gone mad. Every night when he falls asleep, he dreams of the same mental hospital.
Uchiha Sasuke, dressed in an Akatsuki cloak, swings his blade wildly, insisting that he must kill that man and avenge himself.
Sosuke Aizen puts on the mild-mannered, gentle air of a Fifth Division captain, yet keeps muttering about standing above the heavens.
Donquixote Doflamingo shouts that anyone who refuses to obey him must be made to submit through sheer strength.
Faced with a whole crowd of lunatics, Lu Mingfei scratches his messy hair.
“Well, since you’re here, we might as well chat.”
“Huh? How did I get this strong?”
Lu Mingfei opens the final door. Inside the room, a little boy silently watches him, Golden Eyes flowing like molten lava.
“Big brother, you’ve finally come.”
It's pretty good. The writing is relatively smooth. So far, it doesn't seem like there's much of a problem. It's not good enough...
The writing is okay @ a cup of toast to my hometown. When are you going to show Sasuke Naruto?
Not bad, the bad guy is still there, and the settings are good, but there are too few.
Well written, worth reading