Feng Jin, Just a Cute Anchor Passing By

It's okay. The first incident was well written, but the anchor career was a bit lacking. I originally thought there would be some content, but it turned out that it was just a background board setting. There was only one live broadcast and no content was written [Thoughts]

As long as the train set doesn't appear, I'm guaranteed to chase you.

It feels good overall, but the pace is a bit slow when writing about Hongyan, because the author has given too much information earlier. As a God's perspective, it is easy to think of the general direction of the plot later, which makes me seem a little uninterested. The author should try not to write so much off-site information, and write them as foreshadowing until the appropriate reveal. , But this seems to be a bit of a test of the author's writing skills. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. The author should not change his style just because of my opinion, and then make other readers uncomfortable (mainly because I have actually encountered it). Currently, the author's style is already very good. I hope the author can maintain his current writing strength.

The writing is very good. You can tell that it is purely handwritten. There are just a lot of typos. There are no other big problems.

Supreme! Zhiyang! The incarnation of the sky! Exterminator! The result of Yang Lei's karma! The eye of twilight! Hyacintes

Please forgive me for writing this for the first time. I feel like I can still eat it. At least it's not shit. I hope the author won't cut it. After all, this is your own debut. It doesn't matter if you take it slow. Slow work will produce fine work, and you can also hone your writing skills [laughs]

The dim light protects, the dim light chases the fire, the rainbow light helps the world, and the pansy gate lasts forever! The dim light protects, the dim light chases the fire, the rainbow light helps the world, and the pansy gate lasts forever! The dim light protects, the dim light chases the fire, the rainbow light helps the world, and the pansy gate lasts forever! The dim light protects, the dim light chases the fire, the rainbow light helps the world, and the pansy gate lasts forever!

I've finished reading it. It's very well written. I hope the author Baozi can finish it. I personally think that a book can have a beginning and an end, which is amazing in itself [top post]

Overall dull, with occasional fights Personally, I feel that the mini-BOSS mechanism is slightly stronger. It's okay to watch the daily show

A mediocre novel [Chigua], nothing special about it

Unfortunately, Jacinthes still can't change the fact that Australia has 42 million kangaroos and Jamaica only has 3 million. This means if kangaroos invaded Jamaica, each person would have to fight 14 kangaroos

It's okay, acceptable.

I want to read the stories of Fengjin's communication partners.

A very good book with great creativity. Although the combat power system is a bit strange, it is very understandable for a newcomer. As long as you stick to it, it will definitely become a very good work.

Very good. I'm a little curious about how the other 12 demigods will be summoned later, as well as everyone in Bengtie

Not bad, I hope I can keep writing

OK but a little bland

Personal evaluation is okay

Good looking, very good

Pretty good

Not bad, keep up the good work! ! !

The writing is quite good, I think some knives can be added (the kind of knife for the protagonist)

Very good, high-quality grain. Come on, the author [blowing kiss]

The plot is pretty good.

Very good book

Very well written, meow~

Ok ok ok

It's very daily, with occasional fighting

Come on more, Fengbao is so cute

I hope it won't be written that the villain cult is omnipotent, and the official version will only be late.