[Multiple Heroines] [Genius] [Redemption] [Sword and Sorcery]
The child of destiny who evades fate
The self-conscious maid
The knight sacrificed for politics
The [Tower] in pursuit of knowledge
The nihilistic mercenary
The goddess of love who doesn't understand love
Lainer is powerful: an absolute defense no one can approach, and the power to make two realms collide and crush everything.
What he seeks is to tear apart the web of fate, take care of everything around him, and save the world along the way.
Yet this very ambition draws more eyes, more desire, and more expectations toward him.
He always says, “Just along the way, just along the way.”
But he never turns away from those watching him.
“Young master...”
“Boss!”
“Sage.”
His titles grow in number until he becomes the only sun in a darkened world.
Even then, he stubbornly insists:
“I’m only saving you all along the way.”
I rarely write book reviews, really. It's rare to read a novel with a well-developed plot without such stumbling. I hope you can pay attention to the use of punctuation marks when writing, which means this is not an AI article. But the impact this has on reading is still quite uncomfortable. Secondly, I hope you can give some characters interesting memory anchors in advance when some battles occur. In order to reduce the chance of thinking when seeing some names: Who is this? Problem arises. With its unique memory anchor, for example, it prefers to curse secretly during battle. Little habits like this can help people remember more quickly which character this is. Your plot advancement is coherent and not laggy. The character descriptions are also interesting enough. I wish you success.
It's pretty cool, but the author is a bit slow in updating it.
Very nice, has a unique style. The only drawback is that I can easily not tell who is speaking in this dialogue. Sometimes I have to read a passage several times before I know who is speaking. I often cannot tell the difference between the mental description and the dialogue. Even so, as mentioned in the introduction, this book gives people a feeling of warmth like the sun.
It's very delicate and non-routine. I like the previous article very much. Even if there are long paragraphs, it's not verbose. The magic system is also very innovative. 👍 👍 👍 I'm looking forward to it.
Rare writing style and comfortable plot
The plot is good, come on
The emotions are very delicate, there are no so-called routines, don't lose the emotional description because of the update, the gain outweighs the gain in updating the word count [Thoughts]
It's not that I thought it was just the happy tug-and-pull between the tsundere male protagonist and the female protagonist. Why is it so heavy behind? Humanity loves it! 😢😢😢😢