They Told You to Write a Public Self-Criticism, So Why Did You Compose the Rhapsody on the Goddess of the Luo River?

Author, Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 Hun Xi Returns... Hun Xi When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally.

I feel good, the writing style is very good, many classic Chinese poems are on the list, so far it is still good, I hope the author can write better and better, there are still more chapters every day, which is not enough (a thumbs up from the author)

I read the latest chapter all at once, and it was quite refreshing. I like Song Qingci the most, and Ailian said it suits her very well. Later, the system appeared less and less, and the rewards were gone. When the Nobel Prize was written about the three-body problem, why didn't the system pop up? It jumped out to choose the protagonist before writing, and there were rewards again. It's not a big deal, as long as the heroines have good personalities and are good at everything, you can continue to chase them, and there are no brainless villains, which is good.

This novel was hand-written by the author, and since the emotions are revealed between the lines, it may be unreasonable for many book friends to criticize certain plots. However, I realized the real meaning that the author wanted to express, which is only my personal point of view and personal feeling.

The plot is good, but there are multiple female protagonists in a modern setting. Sorry, I am a pure fan and it may not be to my taste.

It's a pretty good literary youth novel. Those who like literature can read it, but it still has some shortcomings. The biggest drawback is going to Su University (spoilers below). It's not that I can't go, it's just that the reason is too rigid. Did I decide to go to Su University just because of a girl I met on the road? It can only be said that the author can substitute for the readers, but not the readers. This kind of writing does not focus on the campus, so why choose Jiangsu University in this way? This is my personal opinion, you readers can make your own judgment Just go for it, forget about that girl being brought into the main plot later on, she ends up being a mere passerby with no role, she has the intention to write about a harem but doesn't have the ability to control it, even a girl who comes to express her love out of nowhere can open a chapter

This is an extremely romantic journey to another world. The protagonist falls into a different world with a lonely literary style, and carries the thousand-year Chinese context in his heart. When Tang poetry and Song lyrics slowly appeared in the world, the most beautiful lines throughout the ages resounded throughout the literary world and shocked the whole world. The world marvels at the young man's unparalleled talent, but only readers understand that the chapters written are not his own talent, but the accumulation of civilization spanning thousands of years. One word hides the wind and moon, and one sentence conveys the character. In a strange world, those poems we are familiar with shine brightly. The novel is not only a lively literary confrontation, but also a surge of profound cultural enthusiasm. Carrying the elegance of the ages, it shines through the mountains and rivers of other times. After reading it, my heart was stirred, and I was deeply moved by the splendid poetry civilization of China.

Yes, the plot is ups and downs in an orderly and fascinating manner, just right, without exaggeration or vulgarity, because this is a novel, without unrealistic exaggeration, it is the kind of daily fantasy, which can well affect the readers' emotions; but the emotional problems of the male protagonist may have slight flaws, which mainly depends on the reader's personal taste and acceptance. It has been a long time since I have read a novel of this quality, so I will keep up with it!

At the beginning, the storm is rising, the protagonist appears on the stage, and the passionate speech flows into the hearts of the school beauties. Everyone is silent, surprised and delighted, and talks about the evil; let's see - The elders on the side explained its meaning, and everyone realized it and paid high tributes. Those who recorded it posted it on the Internet. The wind was strong and the momentum was cloudy. Everywhere they went, his words were heard. The picture was given and continued with the words. The left picture: I want to give a good review but the content is difficult to comment; the right picture: I want to give a negative review but the content is free; Continuation of four characters Excellent book [smile]

The plot rhythm of the novel is particularly well controlled, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the foreshadowing is cleverly set up, and there is almost no redundant water content throughout the whole process. The immersion is so strong that once you pick it up, you won't be able to put it down. You'll still be recalling the details of the story long after you finish reading it. It's one of the most eye-catching works I've seen recently.