I Asked You to Write a Self-Criticism in Public, and You Wrote Luo Shen Fu?

The plot is good, but there are multiple female protagonists in a modern setting. Sorry, I am a pure fan and it may not be to my taste.

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This is an extremely romantic journey to another world. The protagonist falls into a different world with a lonely literary style, and carries the thousand-year Chinese context in his heart. When Tang poetry and Song lyrics slowly appeared in the world, the most beautiful lines throughout the ages resounded throughout the literary world and shocked the whole world. The world marvels at the young man's unparalleled talent, but only readers understand that the chapters written are not his own talent, but the accumulation of civilization spanning thousands of years. One word hides the wind and moon, and one sentence conveys the character. In a strange world, those poems we are familiar with shine brightly. The novel is not only a lively literary confrontation, but also a surge of profound cultural enthusiasm. Carrying the elegance of the ages, it shines through the mountains and rivers of other times. After reading it, my heart was stirred, and I was deeply moved by the splendid poetry civilization of China.

This novel was hand-written by the author, and since the emotions are revealed between the lines, it may be unreasonable for many book friends to criticize certain plots. However, I realized the real meaning that the author wanted to express, which is only my personal point of view and personal feeling.

Yes, the plot is ups and downs in an orderly and fascinating manner, just right, without exaggeration or vulgarity, because this is a novel, without unrealistic exaggeration, it is the kind of daily fantasy, which can well affect the readers' emotions; but the emotional problems of the male protagonist may have slight flaws, which mainly depends on the reader's personal taste and acceptance. It has been a long time since I have read a novel of this quality, so I will keep up with it!

I feel good, the writing style is very good, many classic Chinese poems are on the list, so far it is still good, I hope the author can write better and better, there are still more chapters every day, which is not enough (a thumbs up from the author)

This book is so beautiful! The plot of the story is fascinating, the characters are lifelike, and it is enjoyable to watch. Not only can you learn a lot of knowledge, but you can also experience the author's deep emotions. After reading this book, I felt a lot and I highly recommend it to all book lovers! (To put it simply: I am a local dog, I love to watch [shy])

This is the cool story among cool stories [laughs] The world that the protagonist travels to does not have the eternal quatrains of the original world, because this protagonist can show off as much as possible! [Shy] We started with "Fu of the Goddess of Luo", which shocked the whole school, and also took the innocent Bai Yueguang under his wing. [Smirking] The follow-up is about multiple female protagonists. [Smirking] The protagonist in the plot is also very awesome, because there are celebrities in the literary world who choose Thorn, saying that "Fu of the Goddess of Luo" is not good [laughing and crying], the protagonist directly angrily denounces the literary giants, and is not used to it at all [laughs] [laughs] It's very cool [licking the screen] And he got full marks in the composition of the college entrance examination in the third year of high school. Anyway, this is the right thing to watch, it is more fun than the Dragon King [Adoration]

It's good-looking, the author is honest, the plot is okay, and the ancient poems chosen all fit the bill. As for Soochow University, I personally feel that there is no need to worry about this point. The author's explanation is also quite reasonable. Anyway, she is cool but not brainless, has many girls but is not a scumbag. It is said that there is only one system option. It is just a contrast and conflict. This is a plot line. It can be regarded as if there is no system. Anyway, he only rewards some physical rewards. After all, the system's options are consistent with the protagonist's wishes. 😊If you can't stand the first chapter, your focus is not on the Luo Shen Fu, but on Jiahao's behavior. Let your brain go and read the title of the book to understand it. 😁😎

It's a pretty good literary youth novel. Those who like literature can read it, but it still has some shortcomings. The biggest drawback is going to Su University (spoilers below). It's not that I can't go, it's just that the reason is too rigid. Did I decide to go to Su University just because of a girl I met on the road? It can only be said that the author can substitute for the readers, but not the readers. This kind of writing does not focus on the campus, so why choose Jiangsu University in this way? This is my personal opinion, you readers can make your own judgment Just go for it, forget about that girl being brought into the main plot later on, she ends up being a mere passerby with no role, she has the intention to write about a harem but doesn't have the ability to control it, even a girl who comes to express her love out of nowhere can open a chapter

I feel that the writing is quite good. I responded to the author's request to give a good review. When I saw it, wow, there are so many negative reviews, and they are all related to the choice of school. Is this really so poisonous? The development of the protagonist hardly requires the help of school resources, and there are also negative reviews for many female protagonists. Don't you read the labels? I used to read the negative reviews for reference when reading books, but now I feel that most of the negative reviews are very misleading. Anyway, I feel that the content structure is pretty good, so good luck to the author. Let me add another positive review, and now there are 280,000 people reading it. I don't know if this data can be improved. Anyway, it is quite rare.

I think it's very interesting, but there is one thing that I dislike. This book is about soul travel, so I gave it four stars. Although the author didn't write it clearly at the beginning, you can tell from the lines that it is soul travel. I don't know when soul travel became synonymous with self-greening. I also searched and found that it started 20 years later, but at that time I didn't pay attention to whether it should still be read or not, but later I saw the comments Some people say that Soul Crossing has been disgusting since it was released, because I think what those people said is reasonable (this only represents me personally), so as soon as I see Soul Crossing, I basically stop reading it. Even if it is Soul Crossing, as long as you don't explicitly write about it, or skip it, I will still stop and read it. This book is not explicitly written, so I don't think about this issue when I read it. It is still very good to read, and the author's writing style is very good [Like]

Not bad, come on author, I think a lot of negative reviews seem to be just negative comments? Isn't it normal for the protagonist to be a bit romantic as a talented person? There's nothing wrong with having many female protagonists. What's so pointy about this, I don't understand! Except for the rash choice of school which made me a little unhappy, everything else was pretty good. Basically, you can only see me criticizing the author in book reviews. I will only give four or five stars to other books unless they are particularly outstanding! Or just don't comment. This five-star review is my tenth five-star review after reading 5,000 books and 7,600 hours on Tomato. You are proud enough [Cool] [Cool]

I just read the first few chapters, and I feel that the writing is very good, without that weird feeling. Some novels have a weird feeling at the beginning, like AI writing or something. At least this novel is much better than most. I don't know how the writing will be in the future. If the writing is good, I will not change it. If the writing is not good, I will change it. I just write it quickly, it is not good enough [laughter]

Great, come on, update quickly, burst out. Our country's culture is truly profound and profound, the kind that we must protect even to death. I also like the character design of the protagonist Keep it up, not sluggish at all, not watery at all.

What should I say about this book? There are no particularly gorgeous scenes, and there are no grand battles. Occasionally there are some show-offs, and it is quite comfortable to watch. What I like the most is the poetry. I may not have understood it when I was in school, but now that I am older, I can gradually understand it. Each poem has more or less insights. I read it word by word slowly and translated it naturally in my mind. Combined with the author's description, it feels like being there. It is a great novel. It is suitable for one to read in one's leisure time. It is fun and has connotation. It is great.

Nothing to say, this is a purely enjoyable article, just stop being crazy [laughs] Relax your brain and just read

It is indeed a good article, but you have to read it later. There are very few poisonous points. I hope the author will change this university. After all, it is a fast-paced world now. I hope more people will read it. I also wish the author good health, keep updating, and continue to work hard.

Being able to write in a straightforward and protruding way is a magic pen. As a 20-year-old bookworm, I can still see the immersive experience of a college entrance examination boy making up for my past regrets. Why Tudou is successful is such a simple, straightforward and just-in-place feeling. 😄

I've just read the latest chapter, and I don't understand why this book has so many bad reviews. I think college is dispensable, and if you have to go to Peking University and Tsinghua University to get a perfect score in the college entrance examination, you are a bit too old. It is okay to go to 211 to let Su University shine. I think, and the author also said that it is his alma mater, and it is more emotional to write, so the plot is definitely better than writing about an unfamiliar environment. Why would anyone give a negative review because of this? . . There is also the harem issue. What do people think when they read it without reading the introduction and then leave negative reviews? . And it's so cool, why don't you open a harem? . . . How shameless is it to read a book without reading the introduction and then leave a negative review? . Of course, I can't compare to you, the Internet Emperor. All in all, this book is by far the most palatable of all the literary works I have read. I hope the author can keep it up and update it well.

According to the light-hearted writing, this is already very good, just throw it away and enjoy watching it. Occasionally, I read it and it reminds me of my playful days in junior high and high school (memorizing poems, if I can't memorize them, I read them outside in the morning), so this book is already full marks. I give it 4 points, not because this book has 4 points. It should be a perfect score, but My Youth is not a perfect score. He has regrets. By the way, this Hongbulaji novel seems to be worth more than five points. I don't know if it's true or not. It doesn't matter. Come on.

I really don't know that it's so good-looking but the rating is so low. I prefer no-brainers, but this article is not just no-brainers. From the shallower to the deeper, it's really good. I hope you'll be patient and read it, not just the ratings. You have eyes that are good at discovering beauty. I also hope that the author will not pay too much attention to remarks without substance. You are awesome, come on.

I have read more than 60 chapters so far, and I feel that it is quite good. The writing style in the book I read is also quite novel, but the emotional scenes are a bit too anxious, but if you are a newcomer, it is already very good.

Therefore, the responsibility today does not lie with others, but with my young man. A young man's wisdom will bring wisdom to the country; a young man's wealth will make his country rich; If young people are strong, the country will be strong; if young people are independent, the country will be independent; If young people are free, the country will be free; if young people make progress, the country will progress; If the youth is better than Europe, the country will be better than Europe; If a young man is strong on the earth, his country will be strong on the earth. When the red sun rises, its path shines brightly. The river flows out and flows into the ocean. The hidden dragon soared into the abyss, its scales and claws flying. The tiger roars in the valley, and all the beasts are frightened. The falcon tests its wings, and the wind and dust spread. The first birth of a strange flower is so beautiful. The cadres have hair and their awns are shining. The sky wears its green color, and the earth wears its yellow color. Even though there are thousands of years, there are eight desolations. The future is like an ocean and the days ahead are long. How beautiful, my young China is as immortal as the sky! How majestic, I, a Chinese boy, have no borders with my country!

Brother, I have nothing to say. There are so many books on the bookshelf. Originally, even if I liked reading, I would read dozens of chapters at a time. But when I came to you, I found that I just read it. Three chapters and five chapters were enough for me to taste [crying]

This is my first time commenting on a novel that I have read for a long time. I spent one night reading the existing chapters. I can only say that it is wonderful. I couldn't stop reading it. There is no poisonous point so far. 90% Of the climax and the rest of the transitional content are not blunt. The only negative review is that it disappears as soon as I look at it. Author, you can't keep updating it. I saw I fell asleep at around 4am, and now I think of commenting [shy] The only thing that seemed awkward was the black-skinned senior. Most of the times she appeared, she didn't have a good impression. When we first met, the protagonist was asked to apply to Suzhou University, which felt like she was taking the blame. When I was writing a book later, I originally planned to have a tight time schedule and no heavy classes. Others would not disturb me if there was no big deal, or they would take care of the protagonist's daily life. But it turned out that the senior sister knew that he was writing a book, but she still wanted to drag him to participate in some campus singing competition selection? It's just that compared to the other two heroines, I don't know the general picture. Jiang Yu is a sweet girl, a clear-cut lady, and a lively senior, each with their own characteristics.

Highly recommended. The author's writing style is good and there are many touching things in this book. It also praised my poetry culture and interpreted many meanings. I feel that the rating of this book should not be so low. Anyway, it is finished in one word. I am not satisfied with it yet.

It looks good. I hope Lu Li and Jiang Yu will be together forever. They are both beauties and there is no bloody plot about betraying the heroine.

Very good, very much in line with my expectations. Don't underestimate this book just because of some people's bad reviews because they don't like poetry. Even though it doesn't have a single heroine, it's still a pretty great book. Good luck, author.

The plot is very good, the protagonist is also good, and the language is lyrical.