I, the Supporting Character's Mother, Return After Ten Thousand Years of Cultivation

It's okay, not bad. I will continue to pursue it. But the characters still need to be polished, and the plot is not exciting enough and has loopholes. What you say and write may not necessarily be cool, but it must be logical. When I mentioned maternal love in the comment section, some people refuted it. The heroine is strong but does nothing against the villain. This needs to be improved. You can write down what restrictions there are. The heroine needs to be weakened, and she can become stronger step by step. As for what they said, killing all those people is completely undesirable. They just watch it to complain and feel better. But being cool can also attract readers. You need to know what readers like to read? This needs to be explored slowly. In short, there is a lot of room for improvement, and you need to improve slowly. You cannot make no progress at all. If you want to make money by writing

It's so touching, and I also like the heroine. It's best not to form a cp later, ball ball! !

I hope that without CP, Qiao Qiao and Shen Li can focus on their careers

Not bad, not bad, the rhythm is just right! ! It's not overwhelming, nor is it frustrating. It's all stuck just right. It's just that there are too few chapters, oh oh oh, it's gone as I look at them.

It's pretty cool. I hope the bad guys get their comeuppance and the pace can be faster.

I've read Chapter 19 and I still haven't found out who the male protagonist is. It's just a bit sparse and updated too little.

It's nice to watch, the setting is very novel, and the heroine, as a strong person who traveled to the world of immortality to become an immortal, traveled back to the modern world and actually knew how to act according to contemporary rules for her daughter, instead of being as crazy as some heroines and male protagonists in some novels, which only caused their relatives to be criticized. The author's imaginative logic is so to my liking.

The plot is very attractive, the themes are rich, and the characters look good to the senses. I immediately saw Cui Geng

It's good-looking, and with a mother with such a powerful background, Qiao Qiao can finally escape from the sea of ​​suffering.

Traveling back through time and space to save his daughter's troubled life?