[The score just came out + entry + immortal martial arts + semi-invincible style + inseparable + decisive killing]
In the vast world, immortals and martial arts stand side by side, and the common people are like cud dogs.
Lin Ye traveled through the palace of the Duke of Incarnation, carrying an entry panel. Every time he broke through a level, he unlocked an original entry, each of which contained the original avenue.
[Untainted]: The body is as pure as glass, and the heart is as bright as the moon shining on the universe.
[Dragon Elephant]: A thought of dragon gives rise to the power of heaven, a thought of elephant gives birth to suppress the Nine Netherworld.
[Immortality]: The true spirit is immortal and the soul is always there, and the great road exists forever.
[Reincarnation]: Control the reincarnation and turn around the six paths, step through life and death to achieve immortality. [Thunder Bone], [Mortal Transformation], [Immortal], [Candle Dragon Pattern] and other entries are unlocked one after another.
Until a certain day, he stood in the sky, with divine lines on his forehead, his eyes revolving around reincarnation, his feet on a dragon and elephant, his body transformed into a demon, and immortality and martial arts merged into one.
The world knows that a peerless Martial Immortal has already come to the Xuanhuang Realm, transcending the world!
Reader comments
Cheating, but the protagonist practices step by step
The pace is not slow, but the time span is long, it can take several years.
12 Years old is the third realm, 15 years old is still the third realm
The protagonist is very strong, ranked first in the Hidden Dragon Ranking, but he didn't give his full strength
The protagonist has many talents. It is known that the protagonist has both immortality and martial arts.
He also won the first place in the world in Qianlong stick with kendo.
I finished reading it in one go. The overall plot was well written and there were no bad points. Even the writing skills still need to be improved. Sometimes the plot suddenly connects inappropriately, giving people an inexplicable feeling.
The protagonist should not be too obsessed with Qing He [please update]
Qinghe succeeded in taking the position [face covering] This is still in the Hou Mansion, and the position is not clear. How could this family be alive until now if it wasn't a godly person? [Laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]
The writing and setting are nothing to complain about, and the author is very obedient. Except for the emotional scene with Qing He, which is a bit toxic, overall it's okay.
I have read a little less, mainly because I want to nourish myself. I think the previous writing is quite good. The protagonist has a brain, which is much better than those brainless novels. There is nothing toxic about the world view. I hope the author can keep writing, come on!
I have read more than 50 chapters, and overall it is quite good. The protagonist is not brainless, and there is no show-off or slap-in-the-face plot. The disadvantage is that the sense of immersion is not very strong and the feeling of pleasure is low.
Not bad, very well written. The protagonist is not brainless but has intelligence and strategy. Especially the part about Lu Chen, I think I can also write about the rebirth of time-travelers, the rebirth of the great emperor and the immortal king later on. Let's have a big fight. The protagonist can be the boss behind the scenes, harvesting luck, treasures, golden fingers, and mainly luck beads. You can even write a chat group. Of course, it is best to create your own characters in the chat group, such as the world of martial arts, the world of immortality, the world of technology and the supernatural world. In the later stage of writing, you can write about traveling through the heavens, etc. Of course, you will still create your own world of heavens. The self-created characters look unknown and mysterious.
[Eating Melon] You can comment below on the toxic parts. I see that they will be corrected. Many people are talking about the issue of maids being promoted. In fact, some readers have already read the latest chapters, right? Qinghe, Jiu Sui He, my original setting was that after Li Yourong died but his obsession remained, it merged with the seeds of Jiu Sui He, and after thousands of years, it became Qing He [eating melon]. It was originally the guardian that the protagonist Qian Qian got in the past for his future self. I don't know if I should write it now. It's hard to change the above content even if I want to. Hey, please give me your opinions. Thank you!
As a newcomer, the writing is quite good, but what can I say? Nowadays, many authors like to lift the sword as a weapon. There is no problem. However, the sword of immortality should not be held in the hand to fight with others. It should fly in the sky. If held in the hand, the sword is really useless. It is not as good as an axe for cutting, and it is not as good as a spear for stabbing.
The writing is okay, and some details are handled well. I finished more than 40 chapters in one go. It is indeed an invincible flow. It does not overwhelm the combat power, and it is not a mindless one. When the first villain Lu Chen appeared, I thought this villain would take a long time to write. Unexpectedly, it was solved in a few chapters. It was very clean and neat, and did not give room for development. I hope to maintain it and make it longer.
I quite like this book, but I don't plan to read it in the short term because I don't really like the plot of the protagonist going back to the past. I'll read it after the protagonist returns to the normal timeline [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]. I hope I can go back soon.
It's pretty good~ but it seems to be a bit too high in terms of realm. Maybe it's because of his family background. So it's not easy to operate. In summary, it is still a fine book
The author's writing skills are still a bit weak, but he already has his own style and ideas. Newcomers don't need to write books quickly, otherwise they will easily collapse. They need to enrich the content and plot, and write as if they are a real world.
Let's first look at it. It's not a big problem. It's really invincible to open it too much. Although there is no blocking point, it's too big. Tired of it? And some before. Although there won't be any bad reviews. But I don't have much desire to watch it.
You can fight across levels without stressing your combat power. It's a standard cool article, but it doesn't feel as cool as a cool article. It doesn't have too many poisonous points. It can be eaten.
It's okay. If you're a newbie and most of the fighting is done by hand, it's not bad for your debut, as long as you don't have some bad pretentious slaps later.
Very good, very good
Real review, well written, 5⭐️ no moisture, just dry stuff
So far it looks pretty good
Not bad, just a little lacking
At present, it is still acceptable as a refreshing article.
It's okay, but the chapters are still too few and not enough to read.
Super cool! It's rare to see good writing on the subject of immortal martial arts. Come on, author!
It's okay. Overall, it doesn't seem to be toxic.
Very beautiful and unique in concept. Highly recommended.
Wow, okay, okay
Overall, good
It's okay, nothing poisonous, and it doesn't put too much pressure on the combat power.
The writing is indeed very good. The recommendations I saw today should make things better during this period. Good luck to the author [laughs]
It's okay, not bad, but there are areas that need improvement. Overall, it's a good article, but nothing exciting.
Cheating, but the protagonist practices step by step The pace is not slow, but the time span is long, it can take several years. 12 Years old is the third realm, 15 years old is still the third realm The protagonist is very strong, ranked first in the Hidden Dragon Ranking, but he didn't give his full strength The protagonist has many talents. It is known that the protagonist has both immortality and martial arts. He also won the first place in the world in Qianlong stick with kendo.
I finished reading it in one go. The overall plot was well written and there were no bad points. Even the writing skills still need to be improved. Sometimes the plot suddenly connects inappropriately, giving people an inexplicable feeling.
The protagonist should not be too obsessed with Qing He [please update] Qinghe succeeded in taking the position [face covering] This is still in the Hou Mansion, and the position is not clear. How could this family be alive until now if it wasn't a godly person? [Laughing awkwardly][laughing awkwardly]
The writing and setting are nothing to complain about, and the author is very obedient. Except for the emotional scene with Qing He, which is a bit toxic, overall it's okay.
I have read a little less, mainly because I want to nourish myself. I think the previous writing is quite good. The protagonist has a brain, which is much better than those brainless novels. There is nothing toxic about the world view. I hope the author can keep writing, come on!
I have read more than 50 chapters, and overall it is quite good. The protagonist is not brainless, and there is no show-off or slap-in-the-face plot. The disadvantage is that the sense of immersion is not very strong and the feeling of pleasure is low.
Not bad, very well written. The protagonist is not brainless but has intelligence and strategy. Especially the part about Lu Chen, I think I can also write about the rebirth of time-travelers, the rebirth of the great emperor and the immortal king later on. Let's have a big fight. The protagonist can be the boss behind the scenes, harvesting luck, treasures, golden fingers, and mainly luck beads. You can even write a chat group. Of course, it is best to create your own characters in the chat group, such as the world of martial arts, the world of immortality, the world of technology and the supernatural world. In the later stage of writing, you can write about traveling through the heavens, etc. Of course, you will still create your own world of heavens. The self-created characters look unknown and mysterious.
[Eating Melon] You can comment below on the toxic parts. I see that they will be corrected. Many people are talking about the issue of maids being promoted. In fact, some readers have already read the latest chapters, right? Qinghe, Jiu Sui He, my original setting was that after Li Yourong died but his obsession remained, it merged with the seeds of Jiu Sui He, and after thousands of years, it became Qing He [eating melon]. It was originally the guardian that the protagonist Qian Qian got in the past for his future self. I don't know if I should write it now. It's hard to change the above content even if I want to. Hey, please give me your opinions. Thank you!
As a newcomer, the writing is quite good, but what can I say? Nowadays, many authors like to lift the sword as a weapon. There is no problem. However, the sword of immortality should not be held in the hand to fight with others. It should fly in the sky. If held in the hand, the sword is really useless. It is not as good as an axe for cutting, and it is not as good as a spear for stabbing.
The writing is okay, and some details are handled well. I finished more than 40 chapters in one go. It is indeed an invincible flow. It does not overwhelm the combat power, and it is not a mindless one. When the first villain Lu Chen appeared, I thought this villain would take a long time to write. Unexpectedly, it was solved in a few chapters. It was very clean and neat, and did not give room for development. I hope to maintain it and make it longer.
I quite like this book, but I don't plan to read it in the short term because I don't really like the plot of the protagonist going back to the past. I'll read it after the protagonist returns to the normal timeline [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]. I hope I can go back soon.
It's pretty good~ but it seems to be a bit too high in terms of realm. Maybe it's because of his family background. So it's not easy to operate. In summary, it is still a fine book
The author's writing skills are still a bit weak, but he already has his own style and ideas. Newcomers don't need to write books quickly, otherwise they will easily collapse. They need to enrich the content and plot, and write as if they are a real world.
Let's first look at it. It's not a big problem. It's really invincible to open it too much. Although there is no blocking point, it's too big. Tired of it? And some before. Although there won't be any bad reviews. But I don't have much desire to watch it.
You can fight across levels without stressing your combat power. It's a standard cool article, but it doesn't feel as cool as a cool article. It doesn't have too many poisonous points. It can be eaten.
It's okay. If you're a newbie and most of the fighting is done by hand, it's not bad for your debut, as long as you don't have some bad pretentious slaps later.
Very good, very good
Real review, well written, 5⭐️ no moisture, just dry stuff
So far it looks pretty good
Not bad, just a little lacking
At present, it is still acceptable as a refreshing article.
It's okay, but the chapters are still too few and not enough to read.
Super cool! It's rare to see good writing on the subject of immortal martial arts. Come on, author!
It's okay. Overall, it doesn't seem to be toxic.
Very beautiful and unique in concept. Highly recommended.
Wow, okay, okay
Overall, good
It's okay, nothing poisonous, and it doesn't put too much pressure on the combat power.
The writing is indeed very good. The recommendations I saw today should make things better during this period. Good luck to the author [laughs]
It's okay, not bad, but there are areas that need improvement. Overall, it's a good article, but nothing exciting.