[Just scored! + Trait System + Immortal and Martial Arts + Nearly Invincible + No Clones + Decisive and Ruthless]
In this vast world, immortals and martial artists stand side by side, while ordinary people are no more than straw dogs.
Lin Ye transmigrates into the Duke of State’s household. He possesses a trait panel, and every time he breaks through a realm, he unlocks a source trait, each one containing the Great Dao at its origin.
[Immaculate]: A body pure as crystal, a heart like the bright moon illuminating the world.
[Dragon-Elephant]: With a thought, the dragon rises and bears the power of Heaven; with a thought, the elephant appears and subdues the Nine Hells.
[Undying]: The true spirit never perishes, the soul endures; the Great Dao lasts forever, and the self remains free.
[Reincarnation]: Command the cycle of reincarnation and traverse the Six Paths; tread between life and death to attain immortality. Traits such as [Thunder Bones], [Mortal Shedding], [Imperishable], and [Torch Dragon Pattern] are unlocked one after another.
One day, he stands above the heavens, divine markings on his brow, reincarnation reflected in his eyes, a dragon-elephant beneath his feet, his body transformed into a demon god, immortal and martial arts united as one.
Only then does the world realize that an unparalleled Martial Immortal has already come to rule the Xuanhuang Realm, transcending Heaven and Earth!
Cheating, but the protagonist practices step by step The pace is not slow, but the time span is long, it can take several years. 12 Years old is the third realm, 15 years old is still the third realm The protagonist is very strong, ranked first in the Hidden Dragon Ranking, but he didn't give his full strength The protagonist has many talents. It is known that the protagonist has both immortality and martial arts. He also won the first place in the world in Qianlong stick with kendo.
I finished reading it in one go. The overall plot was well written and there were no bad points. Even the writing skills still need to be improved. Sometimes the plot suddenly connects inappropriately, giving people an inexplicable feeling.
The writing and setting are nothing to complain about, and the author is very obedient. Except for the emotional scene with Qing He, which is a bit toxic, overall it's okay.
The protagonist should not be too obsessed with Qing He [please update] Qinghe succeeded in taking the position 🤦 This is still in the Hou Mansion, and the position is not clear. How could this family be alive until now if it wasn't a godly person? 😅😅
I have read a little less, mainly because I want to nourish myself. I think the previous writing is quite good. The protagonist has a brain, which is much better than those brainless novels. There is nothing toxic about the world view. I hope the author can keep writing, come on!
I have read more than 50 chapters, and overall it is quite good. The protagonist is not brainless, and there is no show-off or slap-in-the-face plot. The disadvantage is that the sense of immersion is not very strong and the feeling of pleasure is low.
Not bad, very well written. The protagonist is not brainless but has intelligence and strategy. Especially the part about Lu Chen, I think I can also write about the rebirth of time-travelers, the rebirth of the great emperor and the immortal king later on. Let's have a big fight. The protagonist can be the boss behind the scenes, harvesting luck, treasures, golden fingers, and mainly luck beads. You can even write a chat group. Of course, it is best to create your own characters in the chat group, such as the world of martial arts, the world of immortality, the world of technology and the supernatural world. In the later stage of writing, you can write about traveling through the heavens, etc. Of course, you will still create your own world of heavens. The self-created characters look unknown and mysterious.
🍉 You can comment below on the toxic parts. I see that they will be corrected. Many people are talking about the issue of maids being promoted. In fact, some readers have already read the latest chapters, right? Qinghe, Jiu Sui He, my original setting was that after Li Yourong died but his obsession remained, it merged with the seeds of Jiu Sui He, and after thousands of years, it became Qing He 🍉. It was originally the guardian that the protagonist Qian Qian got in the past for his future self. I don't know if I should write it now. It's hard to change the above content even if I want to. Hey, please give me your opinions. Thank you!
I quite like this book, but I don't plan to read it in the short term because I don't really like the plot of the protagonist going back to the past. I'll read it after the protagonist returns to the normal timeline [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]. I hope I can go back soon.
The writing is okay, and some details are handled well. I finished more than 40 chapters in one go. It is indeed an invincible flow. It does not overwhelm the combat power, and it is not a mindless one. When the first villain Lu Chen appeared, I thought this villain would take a long time to write. Unexpectedly, it was solved in a few chapters. It was very clean and neat, and did not give room for development. I hope to maintain it and make it longer.