(Knock on the blackboard~Q, I played 7495 Dark Zone Breakout games in 10 days, 6903 of which were TV stations.)
(Single female protagonist, newbie on the road, poor writing, ooc apologies)
The devil born in chaos was reborn in gentleness and courage, and gave birth to self-awareness. In an accident, he embarked on a new journey...
Xing: Xiao Ke, we are very similar~
March 7: Although Xiao Ke is dull, he is surprisingly reliable.
Dan Heng: A reliable companion.
Ji Zi: No matter who Xiaoke is or where he comes from, he is a passenger of the Star Dome Train and is our family
Walter: Clementi reminds me of some things in my hometown. Fortunately, he is not what I remember...
Reader comments
There is nothing wrong with the article. If it were divided into a novel, there would be no problem. But unfortunately, it is a fanfic, which is very difficult for historians to read. His timeline is inaccurate and inaccurate.
My suggestion to the author is to watch more Bengtie videos, understand the worldview and history of Bengtie, and understand the relationship between the characters.
Evidence: When they were attacked in space, the train and the hunters should have arrived, but they were delayed for two days, especially the hunters, who never arrived at all.
To be honest, it's a bit cloudy, the last comment is really my problem. But I still hope that the author will take a look at the way to embark on the road of destiny. Ultraman's combat power is too high, and the difficulty given is too low.
Support me, there are characters from the Ultraman universe, it's quite interesting
Boss, will you add more tokusatsu heroes in the future, such as Gullit and the like...[Thinking]
Thank you for your support. The author shamelessly gives himself a five-star rating.
You can try it. The subject matter is quite new and you can watch it.
The writing style is still relatively immature, but the plot is really good, and the handling needs to be improved. But this type of Bengtie is rare. It's either bad or just bad. This kind of tone is very good. Come on, author😋👍
Very interesting, come on, keep up the good work
The author must persevere
I want to see Liuying transform (physical) monsters!
The protagonist's combat power is too high. Can you strengthen the villain a little? [Love]
Just think it's for me, please update 100 chapters every day [crying]
A novel with a good Ultra spirit
It's good to watch and the plot is interesting. Don't stop updating.
It looks good, but some parts are too abstract. Was it bitten so hard by the fire? [Facepalm], the idea is good, but it is not suitable for appearing in Ultraman novels. I suggest that the author should be more appropriate in his ideas, otherwise he will be easily scolded.
There is nothing wrong with the article. If it were divided into a novel, there would be no problem. But unfortunately, it is a fanfic, which is very difficult for historians to read. His timeline is inaccurate and inaccurate. My suggestion to the author is to watch more Bengtie videos, understand the worldview and history of Bengtie, and understand the relationship between the characters. Evidence: When they were attacked in space, the train and the hunters should have arrived, but they were delayed for two days, especially the hunters, who never arrived at all. To be honest, it's a bit cloudy, the last comment is really my problem. But I still hope that the author will take a look at the way to embark on the road of destiny. Ultraman's combat power is too high, and the difficulty given is too low.
Support me, there are characters from the Ultraman universe, it's quite interesting
Boss, will you add more tokusatsu heroes in the future, such as Gullit and the like...[Thinking]
Thank you for your support. The author shamelessly gives himself a five-star rating.
You can try it. The subject matter is quite new and you can watch it.
The writing style is still relatively immature, but the plot is really good, and the handling needs to be improved. But this type of Bengtie is rare. It's either bad or just bad. This kind of tone is very good. Come on, author😋👍
Very interesting, come on, keep up the good work
The author must persevere
I want to see Liuying transform (physical) monsters!
The protagonist's combat power is too high. Can you strengthen the villain a little? [Love]
Just think it's for me, please update 100 chapters every day [crying]
A novel with a good Ultra spirit
It's good to watch and the plot is interesting. Don't stop updating. It looks good, but some parts are too abstract. Was it bitten so hard by the fire? [Facepalm], the idea is good, but it is not suitable for appearing in Ultraman novels. I suggest that the author should be more appropriate in his ideas, otherwise he will be easily scolded.