[The rating just came in, so it should go up from here]
[A pure band story. The band won’t break up. The author won’t pick overly obscure songs, meaning songs with fewer than 10,000 saves on music platforms. They’ll sing pop songs! They’ll write songs for other people too! (Not many.) No female lead, so don’t read if that bothers you.]
Yi Lin, a struggling composer, accidentally transmigrates to a technologically advanced world, only to discover that its entertainment industry lags far behind Earth’s. As high school graduation approaches and the school music club is on the verge of disbanding, the club president actually invites him to form a band!
With the Chinese-language music scene so barren, Yi Lin naturally has to come up with a debut song explosive enough to blow up the entertainment industry!
“Mountains and Seas” sets the social media world ablaze!
“Killing That Man from Shijiazhuang” sings straight into countless hearts!
“Golden Age” captures the struggle against time!
After bringing the domestic entertainment scene to tears, they’re looked down on by the supposedly highbrow Western music world. Yi Lin simply gazes at the audience below and smiles.
“Next, we’ll perform a new song of ours.”
“It’s called ‘Hey Jude’!”
“Next up, ‘In The End’!”
“And ‘Beat It’!”
From rock to folk, from pop to heavy metal, from domestic charts to the Billboard charts, this five-member band climbs, step by step, to the peak that belongs to them!
Many years later, during an interview with a reporter:
“Mr. Yi Lin, what would you say is your greatest contribution in life?”
“My life can be summed up in one word: music.”
(The blurb doesn’t do it justice. Please read the story itself.)
The setting is to my liking, but the writing is relatively simple, and some details are not filled in well. It can be seen that the author likes to write some repetitive words to fill in the plot, such as saying "a strong force" and repeatedly writing about the reactions of band members. I also like to write some very human-like short sentences such as "not moving", "laughing" and "not talking". I always like to summarize at the end of the chapter, and the language of the summary is very repetitive. I feel like you can read more high-scoring entertainment articles and learn their writing techniques and plot-filling abilities. Don't always write something abstract, such as "a strong force"; don't always make meaningless descriptions of the environment; don't repeatedly write about the band members' reactions (there are too many redundant and repetitive descriptions); don't always write short, human-like sentences. You can write more about the reaction from the Internet (list the hot search list directly, and write more interesting comments), the explanations of music bloggers, specific reactions to the family (don't write so family-friendly, always create some conflicts), the media's interpretation, etc. Come on, try to write more colorful articles and smoother sentences. Your book will be perfect for me. I will see if it can be changed to five stars 😳[Chigua][OK]
It's been a long time since I've seen such a pure music article. There is no bloody love ex-girlfriend or disgusting system tasks. The protagonist brings the earth's music library and his friends to make music peacefully.
To be honest, this one is not too unpopular and is actually no different from being unpopular.
I like the band article very much. We New World also wants to go global. I recommend ten songs. I hope the author can consider We New World. 1. My songs know what you did in dark 2. Heat Waves 3. Maps 4. Shots 6. Believer 7. Bones 8. Viva La Vida 9. Payphone 10. The Other Side Of Paradise
It's a good-looking story. There's no messy story about male-female relationships and emotional entanglements. The protagonist's band has a male and a female who have a good relationship and they happily and purely make music together. My body felt warm when I saw it.
Band... Band... Please... Form a band for the rest of your life, I can do anything 😢 The following is a serious statement: I was a little hesitant at first when I found out that there was no rating, but after reading one chapter, I kept reading for no reason, and even logged into NetEase Cloud to listen to music (? It's so amazing. The author listened to the advice, the writing style is okay, it is a refreshing article, and I can feel their importance to each other, and the writing was explosive (for me). In short, author, please continue writing, as long as you continue writing, I will do anything 😢
Currently reading Chapter 18 First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The amount of updates every time is quite large, and the selection of music and music is very good (although I listen to more foreign rock music, and I came here for the foreign rock music). So far, it seems that there are no bad points. 🍅 There are really few books about rock music, but I still found them. But the shortcomings are also quite obvious (purely subjective). For example: I feel that the description of music is a bit sparse. Maybe I can write about the special techniques or recording techniques used (? And an analysis of the author's creative background or his personal experience Secondly, the characters of the band members should have their own characteristics. I think the characters of the other four people need to be separated a little more and the protagonist's character should be improved (of course it may be my fault, in fact, I can't really see the protagonist's character), and reading this book gave me a very difficult feeling inexplicably. . . Maybe it's because there are less dramatic conflicts or the pace is slow (when will we write Yang Yao?) Because the fever is low, I want to keep books, but I am afraid that I will die [covering my face] But I must keep writing it anyway! Come on, big brother who writes rock music! Finally, I recommend "Gimme Shelter" by the Rolling Stones
What I wrote in the early stage was quite rock and roll. His kind is almost a classic in Chinese rock music. Later, I felt uncomfortable doing pop and folk songs. I mean for me. Because I play in a band, and several of my friends and I used to be in a band. In the beginning, we were playing hard rock. Later, the band transitioned into folk and pop music, and we all quit.
It is recommended that the author put nevergonnagiveyouupn in, this is a classic, as long as anyone who has been online has definitely heard of it, or has been tricked into it [laughter][laughter][laugh][laugh][laugh]
Yes, there is finally a band article! I don't care if it's pop or rock, as long as it's about bands, I love reading it! Come on, you must keep writing.