I Just Want to Form a Band, How Can I Dominate the Music Scene?

Currently reading Chapter 18 First of all, let's talk about the advantages. The amount of updates every time is quite large, and the selection of music and music is very good (although I listen to more foreign rock music, and I came here for the foreign rock music). So far, it seems that there are no bad points. 🍅 There are really few books about rock music, but I still found them. But the shortcomings are also quite obvious (purely subjective). For example: I feel that the description of music is a bit sparse. Maybe I can write about the special techniques or recording techniques used (? And an analysis of the author's creative background or his personal experience Secondly, the characters of the band members should have their own characteristics. I think the characters of the other four people need to be separated a little more and the protagonist's character should be improved (of course it may be my fault, in fact, I can't really see the protagonist's character), and reading this book gave me a very difficult feeling inexplicably. . . Maybe it's because there are less dramatic conflicts or the pace is slow (when will we write Yang Yao?) Because the fever is low, I want to keep books, but I am afraid that I will die [covering my face] But I must keep writing it anyway! Come on, big brother who writes rock music! Finally, I recommend "Gimme Shelter" by the Rolling Stones

The setting is to my liking, but the writing is relatively simple, and some details are not filled in well. It can be seen that the author likes to write some repetitive words to fill in the plot, such as saying "a strong force" and repeatedly writing about the reactions of band members. I also like to write some very human-like short sentences such as "not moving", "laughing" and "not talking". I always like to summarize at the end of the chapter, and the language of the summary is very repetitive. I feel like you can read more high-scoring entertainment articles and learn their writing techniques and plot-filling abilities. Don't always write something abstract, such as "a strong force"; don't always make meaningless descriptions of the environment; don't repeatedly write about the band members' reactions (there are too many redundant and repetitive descriptions); don't always write short, human-like sentences. You can write more about the reaction from the Internet (list the hot search list directly, and write more interesting comments), the explanations of music bloggers, specific reactions to the family (don't write so family-friendly, always create some conflicts), the media's interpretation, etc. Come on, try to write more colorful articles and smoother sentences. Your book will be perfect for me. I will see if it can be changed to five stars [Shy][Chigua][OK]

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It's pretty good-looking, and the protagonist has a lot of personality

I like it very much, this is the pure band article I want

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