Three Kingdoms: Taking Charge of Yizhou at the Beginning Was in Trouble

The overall writing is okay, but some parts are incoherent, and some names, such as Zhuge Liang and Liu Feng, are very abrupt. They haven't met at this time, or were they copied and pasted by the author? It's best to go through it yourself and tidy it up will be better

Down syndrome. . . .

It's okay, but I don't know why. Why is there not every one? Zhang Ming felt like he had read a long novel. In the end, you can't even bother to write a chapter title with so many words? Just get up casually.

Well written and interesting