Game Invasion: A Random Lucky Guest Is Taken Away

The story is pretty good, but I recommend using less AI. Originally, in the first few pictures, the heroine's emotions could be seen and felt as if she was filled with hatred. However, in the later pictures, she became more hypocritical and indifferent in everything she did and said. And that kind of AI's parallelism is not so-and-so but something-and-so. It's very uncomfortable to watch.

The plot is very novel and unique, but it is very strange. I feel that it is not clearly written. The first picture mentioned that the heroine was reborn at the beginning of the game. Then according to the memory of the heroine's previous life, the so-called ex-boyfriend planned to steal the heroine's talent from the beginning of the game. Someone else told him that the heroine's talent can cure diseases when she upgrades to S level. How did others know this? After all, everyone is still relatively low-level. It has only been a few days since the beginning of this life, and various guilds have united to recommend some people. Aren't all guides and things based on human lives? The progress feels a bit fragmented. If there were already these dungeons before, and now they are just a global series, it seems to be explainable, but it seems to be a sudden global arrival, which feels very strange.

I suggest you revise the article significantly. The heroine's profession is very novel, she is a Nanyang head-dressing master, and the dungeon is quite interesting, but there are some contradictory descriptions in the article. For example, the above suddenly calls Ghost Mantong Yinyin, and the next paragraph is about naming Ghost Mantong. Another example is that it was just said that Popo was asked not to bring the housekeeper into the dungeon, and the following paragraph describes the food that Popo brought to the dungeon, and analyzes how Popo's skills can be used in the dungeon. It's a very novel subject matter, but I suggest you revise it to make it more readable [Sending my heart]

The heroine's profession is quite niche, but the language is too confusing, and the characters are too flat. Everyone should have a profession, but it is written as if only the heroine has it, and the plot has no sense of space. The environment and combat descriptions of the dungeon are beyond imagination. It is very broken. Not to mention that the supporting characters all look like tool people, and the heroine does not feel alive. The dungeon goes by very fast, there is no battle of wits, and there is no intrigue. The supporting characters fulfilled their obligation to receive lunch and went offline one by one. It's almost like not watching it after watching it.

Overall, I think this book is quite good, but I don't know why there are so few people. The heroine's profession is very novel. She was a Nanyang head-beautiful master at first, and now she has become a folklorist. Anyway, she specializes in some witchcraft, head-beheading and the like. I think it is quite powerful, killing people invisible. The copy is also quite interesting. The heroine is really, very smart and very powerful.

Come and see. Pure no cp heroine

Very nice looking

Overall it's pretty good looking, but it's always written that it's not... It's... It's a bit uncomfortable to look at like this