A cup of coffee, with...
[1/2 scoop of creation fantasy] [1/2 scoop of Western fantasy] [1/2 scoop of Cthulhu] [1/2 scoop of behind-the-scenes scheming] [finish with 1 scoop of humanity]
[The simple version: I fell from a higher dimension, became a meteorite, and brought the Triassic to an end. Thus began the sacred tale.]
[The cryptic version]
My name is Lin Yi. By the time you read this, I will probably be dead. But not entirely dead. I am alive, yet not entirely alive.
I am a man far from home, come to a completely unfamiliar world in an utterly strange era. Sometimes I am fire, sometimes light, and sometimes I am nothing at all.
But they say:
[In an age without year or month, the fire of all fires, the light of all lights, descended from the heavens, and all beginnings began.]
But I do not think so. I am a prisoner, perhaps a prisoner who fell from a higher dimension? Having lost my home, I wander through all the worlds.
I descended before the fires were kindled. The ancient dragons have passed away, the age of the First Flame has turned to dust, and Abraham follows in my footsteps...
The path to salvation! It lies within!
It is currently the best Tomato novel of the same type. It can be seen that the author has read the Bible and part of the gospel, as well as Esoteric Cult and Blood Origin, and has also smoothly and naturally passed the turning points of other similar books. If this style can be maintained, the outline is clear, and AI is not used, it will definitely be a masterpiece of the Western mythology genre. It turns out we are old acquaintances, no wonder the writing is excellent and the style is familiar, and we will create greater glory again.
I have caught up with the main force. I feel pretty good. I have stitched a lot and the logic is basically self-consistent. However, there are still some problems in some places. For example, the part about the son of the Sun King. I felt that I wanted to write him as King Solomon at first. He was given a blessing when he was a baby. It is logical that he will conquer all nations. However, this line ended inexplicably. It is indeed a bit regretful.
[Compared to the previous book, the stitching is more detailed and reasonable, and the protagonist is also very humane. I didn't give it a big philosophical chapter at the beginning, but it was good after skipping. I only gave four points for Tomato's boutique article. If this book is optimized, it may jump to 5 points. [It seems that I have some understanding of Buddhist scriptures, but my integration into the Esoteric Jewish spiritual system is not very good. Many of them directly transferred the corresponding descriptions and sentences. The result is that the Chinese-style sentences and Western-style situations are very awkward. Wouldn't it be better to refine the translation? [Secondly, the speed of change in each age is too fast. It is obviously a story behind the creation of the world. Each age may only last more than ten years, and more than twenty years have passed. It has grown a bit recently, reaching about a hundred years. In total, it may take less than 500 years, and there will be a lot of people who don't believe in God. However, books written like this are very rare, so I will give it four stars. Three and a half stars may be more accurate. Three stars is too unique, and four stars is not precise enough. Many things have not been translated at all and have been directly transferred from the Chinese perspective. The details of the description of civilization are also very poor.
It's beautiful, very epic, and gives me the feeling of watching ancient mythology. Although it occasionally contains some words or meanings that only come into being in the middle or late stages of the development of historical civilization. But that's quite normal. After all, we will never be people of that era, so forcing it won't work.
Very beautiful, has an epic feel
It's quite possible. It looks better as you go to the back, and there are no obvious traces of AI for the time being. I also hope that the author can grasp the distribution of chapters between the protagonist and the group portraits. It is always right to write more protagonists. At most, it will not reflect the flavor of the creation story. However, writing supporting roles is very risky although exciting, and it will test the writing skills. [Please update]
Myths and epics are a delight. I just hope that the protagonist will be strengthened when he wakes up from his long sleep. What a tragedy. For example, even if the previous book "Odin" cannot compare with the tragedy of..., It is still epic and mythical enough.
Very good, the plot is not too poisonous
It's very beautiful. It would look even better if you add some biblical elements.
Not bad, but I wish it was more religious and magical