I transmigrated into Zhao Yiniang, determined to change my fate against all odds. I didn't come here to be the Jia household's free, self-sacrificing mom!
Laugh at me, look down on me, go ahead. While you enjoy romantic moonlit evenings, I'll save money. While you feast on delicacies, I'll make do with meat and broth. While you indulge in wine and women, I'll watch you make fools of yourselves. While you lose yourselves in luxury and romance, I'll coolly watch you reap what you sow.
Redemption? If someone can be set straight, I'll try. If they can't, and insist on jumping into the fire, then I'll leave it to fate and give up completely.
All I want is to save money, stay alive, and get out.
My daughter thinks I'm an embarrassment? Fine, I won't bother her. If I can take my son with me, I will. If I can't, so be it.
No heartache, no pointless self-torment, no forcing things.
She chose her own life. She can enjoy the riches or suffer the tragedy. It has nothing to do with me.
No pointless self-torment, no forcing things, and no playing the self-sacrificing saint.
Whoever loves whoever.
It looks good, and somehow fits the character of Aunt Zhao very well. I hope I won't get mixed up with Twelve Hairpins in the future and focus on planning my own way out. The more I write, the more bugs there are. Since I am writing a Red Mansion fanfic, I still need to do my homework on the basic character information of Red Mansion. Baoyu is older than Miharu. Mrs. Wang is too shy to be so impulsive.
Since you are writing fan fiction, you should at least clarify the original work. Tan Chun is the younger sister, younger than Jia Baoyu.
The writing is very nice, and the story is very interesting. The wife Jia He remarried should be the Xing family, and the You family was the wife Jia Zhen remarried.
Super pretty! Analyzing Dream of Red Mansions from different angles, I have read a lot of fanfics, but few people have written about Aunt Zhao, who has thoroughly understood the background of the character, and explained why a helpless aunt in the back house was so careless about face, and even went so far as to fight with the servants to tear each other apart. The root cause is clearly stated, one word is poverty, the man does not care about the backyard and does not provide money, the mistress is vicious and jealous, it is not easy for Aunt Zhao to raise Jia Huan, if the child is sick or injured, she has to ask the mistress if she wants to hire a doctor, otherwise she will not be able to get out of the courtyard.
It's nice to look at, and it's not so sad. Without knowing the future, I feel uneasy every day and feel helpless. It feels very personal, and the angle of writing about Jia Zhengjing is also very novel. The middle-aged man is actually written in a way that doesn't sound so old. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope my wife will produce more food every day. I really want to read it in one sitting. It's really beautiful.
I've read Chapter 100. So far, it's good to read. The heroine's character is very good and she doesn't let herself be wronged. She treats her original daughter like you look down on me and I don't really treat you. This attitude is really great. If you don't lick it, you won't be a saint. As long as you don't write about it in the future, I will keep chasing you 😄
It feels pretty good-looking. Mrs. Wang has many tricks and is easy to get offline. Now that Jia Jing is still alive, the Jia family should be saved. The characters are all well written, except for Aunt Zhou who is a bit silly sometimes. But everything is still under control. The male protagonist is like a love brain. Just what I wanted.
Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking I've read more than one hundred and ninety chapters. Actually want to introduce the master's concubine to his brother? Is the author crazy? I don't know what he thinks.
It's still pretty good-looking at the moment, and the heroine has a lot of personality, but as an improvement, the text can be divided into more paragraphs. The text is a bit blurry in a large piece. You can refer to the paragraphs of works with a high number of readers.
It looks good, I hope it won't be mixed into Twelve Hairpins