HP: the Legend of Veranica's Destiny

Looks good! It's not the same old story about Snape's childhood. At present, it seems that the heroine will take a more political route. What strikes me about the heroine is that she has her own opinions on social phenomena and is also developing women's equal rights. The heroine's friends are also very three-dimensional! ! ! (For both Muggle and magical societies) The previous story lines are detailed and sketchy, and nothing is superfluous. The heroine has been developing connections since school started, but there is one bad one, and it looks like her family has already ripped her off. I hope to work hard and develop my career well in the future! ! ! Merlin in the introduction has not yet appeared. Is it related to the wand? I look forward to foreshadowing. Finally, there is the emotional line. There is no best one. If there is one, don't be Snape. Please🥺

Come on! Ps. Finally there is a text that doesn't lick Snape

It's so well written, I really like the heroine, but it's really a pity that the heroine's mother and brother died. I look forward to the future development, but the heroine still has to wait until Harry is born. I feel like this plot will take a long time.

I think it's a good fanfic. The description of the heroine and the creation of the characters are remarkable. There are also relatively new points added, such as Merlin. Although there are a small number of people who can write this role, there are still relatively few people who write it. But I think the author doesn't need to overemphasize the fate-related aspects, because the more emphasis there is, the more it will make people feel like she is being pushed away. This will lead to a sense of deliberateness when seeing the death of the heroine's brother and mother. My impression after watching it is that the death of the heroine's relatives is just to promote the plot. Of course, this is indeed the case, but it is a bit too deliberate. This is very unflatteringly written. If it gets a little more popular, I think this point is quite controversial. Personally, I think the author has figured out Severus' character. I have seen many people subconsciously wash some things because they want to write Severus as the male protagonist. But Severus was like that. Even in this book, I think the ending is similar to what he should have originally.

To be honest, I really thought it was quite interesting, but there was a bit too much theoretical knowledge at the beginning, so I mostly picked it up. But things started to get more complicated from the moment when the heroine's parents had an accident. I felt that all the characters stood up, and I felt that the heroine's other three good friends were also very good. I also really liked their characters. As mentioned at the beginning, they were almost sorted into Slytherin, so there was always a little bit of it. Elise always seems to have a bit of Slytherin arrogance, while Daphne is a bit delicate, a bit like Hufflepuff. It just so happens that she wants to be a Hufflepuff like her mother in the article. In short, she is beautiful! Recommend!

It's been a long time since I read a HP fanfic to my heart's content. It's really well written. It can be seen that the author loves the heroine he created and some original characters. He has rich character creation and careful career planning, rather than just focusing on certain characters. It just feels like it's too little. The author writes 3,000 words every day, okay? [Blowing kiss]

Please, the author [cries] please don't let the heroine's family swindle. She is just an 11-year-old girl. Can Snape's mother help? His mother saved the heroine's mother and brother and hid them. She didn't say anything because she was afraid that the heroine would be implicated. Please, the heroine can grow up, but not in this way.

Finally found a career story about a heroine in HP! ! ! You must write it down! ! !

I really like the heroine's thoughts, and the politician heroine is so good! I hope the author will continue writing! (But I still don't like Snape very much..

Different from ordinary HP novels, Veranika has her own growth line and her own adventure experiences. She is a sober and independent heroine who will not be trapped in love. She is even a little stubborn, but this is good, which also shows that she is determined and hopes that she can open up a new world of her own in the magical world and leave her own glory. Finally, Mrs. Kuaqua's writing is very well written. Write with confidence and boldness. We support you ⁽⁽◝( ˙ ꒳ ˙ )◜⁾⁾so what

It's not a very light-hearted article. The current plot is a bit frustrating, but it's also quite realistic and written very smoothly. It feels like a group portrait.

Looks good! It's been a long time since hp produced such high-quality work! Come support!

It's very nice, but I don't know if some of the settings are private settings or some hidden settings of the original work that I don't know about. It's a bit strange to read.

Very nice! The heroine has a mind and a goal, and she has been working hard for it. Just move forward on her own path.

Good looking!!! Why are all the good looking HP articles I see serialized? No... Silently reminding me of updates.

Good looking, thumbs up to the foursome 👍emmm... The light will always shine on Veranika

Very nice. This is one of the few fanfics that suits my taste. I hope the author can write it down.

This greatly increases the praise, please give me more updates.