The Evil Young Master Was Taught a Lesson by His Brothers Again

I just love to read some brotherly stories about the elder brother being punished by his younger brothers😋😋Boss, write it quickly😋

? ! Xiangxiang? ! It's so exciting! ! ! ! I hope the male protagonist and his brothers don't have CP✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺

Very attractive setting and plot. However, I have some personal thoughts that I would like to share. After reading the latest chapter and reviewing it in my mind, I felt that the previous background was a little lacking or that it felt very fast. It was good to mention the relationship between brothers. Wen Zhe missed him very much after traveling for more than a year. Then I dreamed that I was going to die, so I started to discipline and fight. It always feels a bit stiff, just for the sake of beating. (Stacked Armor: I quite like watching XJ movies) Another issue I saw raised by many readers was that there was very little comfort afterward. During the fight, the elder brother's description was spot-on, and the readers were very distressed. But it's a bit weird to just leave the four younger brothers alone every time they beat them. I understand that they want the eldest brother to become better and not have to die. But I didn't feel much brotherly love throughout the whole process, it was very light. Although the author wrote a few words about it but said nothing about it, he was actually soft-hearted, but there was a sense of separation. Also, the reaction of the four and five people who were beaten earlier was also relatively dull. After reading it, I got the impression that the younger brother didn't feel sorry for his elder brother at all, and the elder brother suffered a lot of grievances. I saw a reply from the author saying that the second and third parties must be dignified and not OOC, but it feels a bit strange for brothers who have grown up together and have a good relationship to do this... The above only represents my personal thoughts and is not a suggestion for revision to the author. The author can just write according to his own ideas. The setting is really nice, but tomatoes are relatively rare. I hope I can write better and better.

It looks good, but I hope the male protagonist will resist. After all, he is an elder brother and cannot be controlled by his younger brother all the time.

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Big cheers for more updates! The protagonist's character is very much to my liking, and I'm looking forward to seeing what's in the introduction! [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] I am looking forward to the following plot, [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] The only flaw is that there are too few chapters. I finished reading it in a while. I hope the author will update more, faster, rhythmically, and with quality. 100 Chapters in one day scares me to death [Like] [Like] [Like]

What I saw was that he felt a little aggrieved, and he didn't comfort him when he was beaten. His hands were so painful that he couldn't hold the chopsticks, and he even asked him to stop shaking his chopsticks. Forget it, it's okay. I don't really like reading texts about teachers being angry. I feel like he's been getting beaten all the time. He's been getting angry. Even when he's beaten, they don't comfort me. I feel bad every time he cries. They're always awkward, as if they can't speak. I'm really convinced (; 1_1)

It's really cool. I really like watching the clips of younger brothers beating older brothers. Please update it more, please [laughs][laughs][laughs]

The author's writing is very interesting, but I felt that the protagonist suffered a lot. I cried twice when I was brought into the protagonist's perspective.

If this is a group favorite, can it be done without cp? I don't want to see my brothers falling in love with others [crying]

So beautiful [admired], so in love. After lemon, the second thing I fell in love with was tomato. [Blow a kiss] I will always pursue Dada's books, as long as Dada is still writing [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]

Xiangxiang's article, I have never read this type of article before, I love reading it, it's good-looking, Zhebao is like a kitten that only cares about eating and not playing, wandering crazily on the edge of death.

Wow, the author's subject matter is very novel. It's really beautiful. I beg for updates. I couldn't help but tie it up [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

This is the first time I've seen this type of food on Tomato, it's so delicious [lick screen]

Wen Che's "Family Love Essay" Very nice, highly recommended. I just like how my eldest brother is being trained [Adored][Admired] Cheche is so cute, please come on and update [please give me more updates][please give me more updates]! ! !

Very fragrant. . . The eldest brother is like a little angel, and his concern for his younger brothers is very touching. Personally, I don't really like XJ type, but I think this is not too much. It is better than the kind of fighting without eating on time or sleeping on time (only personal opinion). After all, the eldest brother really made a mistake, but he was a bit frustrated in training and racing. Racing can be said to be the only area where the eldest brother shines. Fortunately, the second brother finally relented. In terms of character creation, I think the most outstanding one is the eldest brother. I like him so much, followed by the second brother and Xiaolan. The fourth brother is pretty good. I think the third brother's character is not very distinctive and he doesn't seem to care much about the eldest brother (in the breakfast chapter, he said that the eldest brother didn't eat well and I resented him for a long time). Maybe it's because his character is too restrained. Also, I'm actually really looking forward to the BE line. Hehe, the eldest brother who has always been a waste and needs his younger brothers to wipe his ass, finally uses his life and strength to support his younger brothers. When he is about to die, he will say again: "I am the eldest brother... I also want to do something for you" and the like, it is very delicious. Of course, this is just for my own enjoyment, and the author can write whatever he wants. It seems pretty good so far, worth a look

It's really beautiful⊙∀⊙! I would like to ask the author if he has no cp? ? ? @52 Is it without cp? ? ?

Dada's new book still attracts me! Who can resist the love of four younger brothers~ Although I am under control, my life is so exciting! Come on Dada, more [blowing kisses][blowing kisses]

Yeah, yeah, yeah, I finally found another book that suits my taste [already planted]. Come on, author [add one to the bookshelf] [please update], I'm optimistic about you [blowing kiss]

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The writing is very good and very beautiful. Why did I encounter this book at chapter 30? It's so painful. Boss, can you update it to chapter 100? It scares me to death [crying]

Super nice. Please update the author soon!

It's really beautiful. Be sure to keep updating.

Haokan. This is my first time reading a novel of this type. I look forward to the follow-up.

It looks good, the author must not stop updating it [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's very beautiful. Please update it.

It's very beautiful. It's a long-awaited reunion. You must come and see it. The only drawback is that the update is too slow. It's only one chapter a day. I hope it can be upgraded to ten chapters a day.

I love reading this type of novel, it's very delicious

Very nice, I like it very much

It's so good, so good, but it's not enough. I'll write more [please update] [Bird Food Masterpiece] [I also strongly recommend]