Family Cultivation: Become the Zongzong Strange Fire at the Beginning

First of all, the overall quality of this work is average. There are two core problems. The first is that there is a contradiction in the narrative setting. In the early stage, the sect setting was introduced, but in the follow-up, the family content was focused on. Moreover, all the protagonists belong to the same family, so the sect setting is completely unnecessary. The second is the lack of functionality of the protagonist. Looking at the whole story, the protagonist does not play any role in promoting the development of the plot, and the value of his existence is completely invisible.

It's so boring, and the classic scene must be when a girl has an accident while taking a shower. Then I saw it again, do you really think that no female readers are willing to watch male videos? I won't even talk about the plot behind it. The whole process is the same as water mosquitoes.

What a mess

Are you a family or a sect? It looks really awkward

So boring, so noob

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