The Legend of Luoluo: The Warring States Reboot!

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

This is really good. The protagonist is not too big, and the supporting characters also have IQs. They are not the kind who just do it when their brains are hot. The supporting characters can think, and the map is very big. I hope the author will work hard and never be a eunuch.

The design and world view of the data are quite good, but the plot is average and a little off track. Other robots are too intelligent, and wars on larger maps will be difficult to organize. Seeing as the settings are good, I can get 💜70-5💜, but the tone is a bit high, I'm afraid the author doesn't have enough experience.

It's a slow-burning, non-refreshing story. The system only checks the opponent's level and qualifications. The supporting characters are also well designed. Whether it's the fox clan itself or other clans in the snowfield, at least they all have brains, which is much more comfortable than having no brains.

Except for some places that are a bit complicated, overall it's still very good. I've read a lot of books about this cartoon. It's the first time I've seen such a big world view. It'd be better to have pictures of each race, and even better if there's a map [laughter]

It looks really good, but I would like to make some suggestions In this general context, although there are few S-level qualifications, they are not completely absent. If so, there are too many war kings. I think there should be some restrictions to break through the war kings. Otherwise, if there are several war kings in one ethnic group, then who has the final say? For example, for war kings, in addition to S-level qualifications, I think it is more appropriate to add some thresholds, such as what a group needs to inherit. The above are just personal suggestions

It is a rare high-quality Lolo adventure fan novel. The world view is more grand than the original work, and the characters are vividly depicted in three dimensions, fully demonstrating the loyalty and responsibility in the original work. Overall, highly recommended viewing!!!

It's nice to watch, the setting is complete, the background is well done, it's quite grand, and it's much more interesting than the few races in the original show. The author has added many details, especially numerical calculations. Support it! Breaking news

I have caught up to the latest, and I have read several fanfics. I feel that the plot of this one is the least brainless, and it is not too boring. The only thing that makes me feel a little bad is that the protagonist and the new outstanding tribesmen are upgraded too fast. I hope the author can control the upgrade time. You can be faster but the time span should be longer. The life span is long. You don't have to do it for a month or two at a time like humans.

There are really many updates, and only about 100,000 will be pushed to the stream.