"Why! Kazunori, Asami... Why are there evil ghosts that eat people! Why am I still alive. Teacher Bei Mingyu, I want to join the Demon Slayer Squad, and I want to kill all the evil ghosts. I want to have dinner with everyone again. Even if I can't fill my stomach, that's enough!"
"Shinobu, I want to join the Demon Slayer Squad. I want families like ours to stop suffering such tragedies. I want to take revenge on evil spirits. I want to protect you."
"Xanahu, when I knew our names, I vowed not to let us be hurt again. Let me bloom a dazzling sea of flowers for you."
"Don't be secretly sworn friends in Butterfly House! What should I do if I get injured?" Kanzaki Aoi
"Yin Yuchen, when can my sister and that piece of wood get together?"
Butterfly Ninja
"Oh~~ Let's eat together, everyone"
Shanahu smiled and looked at the trio.
Reader comments
Well, for now, I have finished reading it, Ku Ye, and I stayed up until one or two in the morning...
First of all, I am very sure that this novel is purely handmade, because AI cannot do the abstract segmentation like the previous chapters, and individual parts can be written in an abstract style like a composition (of course, it is already great as a first time writer).
The protagonist is a native, there are no cheats, and he is pure and powerful.
Then, although the writing in the first few chapters is a little immature, starting from the part where the protagonist learns Yanhu from Beiming Island (about a dozen chapters ago), the look and feel is obviously much better (at least there is no abstract segmentation).
Secondly, regarding the plot, 1: Let the protagonist first try to learn Shui Hu and make friends with the righteous Qiu Rabbit. Later, it is found that the protagonist Chun Jinda starts to learn Yan Hu. It makes sense (after reading this paragraph, you can just read the first two chapters and jump directly to the part where the protagonist learns Yan Hu).
2: It can be seen that the pace of the article should be relatively slow. Unlike most Demon Slayer fans, the main plot of Demon Slayer is written at a fast pace in hundreds of chapters. This book is currently more oriented toward daily life. Fifty chapters and over 110,000 words, the protagonist is still forming a team in Fujiknee Mountain, and there are even short stories to read. I spent tens of thousands of words writing about the protagonist's training, but I found that the result of the training was to make him stronger, more stamina, and more explosive. As a result, Iwazuki still couldn't breathe, so the teenagers trained for a few months and then climbed to Wisteria Mountain in about a year and a half. The result was that on the first night, he was surrounded and killed by six ordinary ghosts who looked like ordinary ghosts (who had almost the same combat power as zombies) and whose styles were different. Tanjiro had been practicing for two years, chopping the little ghosts like vegetables. The protagonist was directly injured and started to form a team.
3: How was the first week of Yanhu practice, how was the second week, and how was the third week? The practice process was extremely detailed. The same goes for Wisteria Mountain. How it was on the first day and how it was on the second day was described in great detail. It follows the usual formula of Wisteria Mountain: chopping up imps like vegetables, rescuing the rabbit, and killing ghosts with all your strength. It's different. It can be seen that this part has an independent plot design.
In summary, it's frustrating and has an independent plot design. The only drawback I think is that the rock pillars let a teenager who doesn't know Rock Breathing and has only practiced it for less than a year go up to Wisteria Mountain. (In fact, it can be explained. After practicing for a year, he is already strong enough, so I believe him. Moreover, Zhen Shi can still be saved, and the hand ghost still has to fight) Well, look forward to a wave. I believe you, boss.
Well, for now, I have finished reading it, Ku Ye, and I stayed up until one or two in the morning... First of all, I am very sure that this novel is purely handmade, because AI cannot do the abstract segmentation like the previous chapters, and individual parts can be written in an abstract style like a composition (of course, it is already great as a first time writer). The protagonist is a native, there are no cheats, and he is pure and powerful. Then, although the writing in the first few chapters is a little immature, starting from the part where the protagonist learns Yanhu from Beiming Island (about a dozen chapters ago), the look and feel is obviously much better (at least there is no abstract segmentation). Secondly, regarding the plot, 1: Let the protagonist first try to learn Shui Hu and make friends with the righteous Qiu Rabbit. Later, it is found that the protagonist Chun Jinda starts to learn Yan Hu. It makes sense (after reading this paragraph, you can just read the first two chapters and jump directly to the part where the protagonist learns Yan Hu). 2: It can be seen that the pace of the article should be relatively slow. Unlike most Demon Slayer fans, the main plot of Demon Slayer is written at a fast pace in hundreds of chapters. This book is currently more oriented toward daily life. Fifty chapters and over 110,000 words, the protagonist is still forming a team in Fujiknee Mountain, and there are even short stories to read. I spent tens of thousands of words writing about the protagonist's training, but I found that the result of the training was to make him stronger, more stamina, and more explosive. As a result, Iwazuki still couldn't breathe, so the teenagers trained for a few months and then climbed to Wisteria Mountain in about a year and a half. The result was that on the first night, he was surrounded and killed by six ordinary ghosts who looked like ordinary ghosts (who had almost the same combat power as zombies) and whose styles were different. Tanjiro had been practicing for two years, chopping the little ghosts like vegetables. The protagonist was directly injured and started to form a team. 3: How was the first week of Yanhu practice, how was the second week, and how was the third week? The practice process was extremely detailed. The same goes for Wisteria Mountain. How it was on the first day and how it was on the second day was described in great detail. It follows the usual formula of Wisteria Mountain: chopping up imps like vegetables, rescuing the rabbit, and killing ghosts with all your strength. It's different. It can be seen that this part has an independent plot design. In summary, it's frustrating and has an independent plot design. The only drawback I think is that the rock pillars let a teenager who doesn't know Rock Breathing and has only practiced it for less than a year go up to Wisteria Mountain. (In fact, it can be explained. After practicing for a year, he is already strong enough, so I believe him. Moreover, Zhen Shi can still be saved, and the hand ghost still has to fight) Well, look forward to a wave. I believe you, boss.