[Fetal Puncture + Daily + Fun + No System + Multiple Heroines + Reversal + Later Shura Field]
My name is Chen Mo, this is the way of heaven next to me, I am very panic now.
She came up and said that I interfered with the plot line and wanted to kill me. How should I deceive it so that I can survive.
My name is Tian Ling, and today is my first day at work. As soon as I opened the script world, my sky fell.
Why is there a bug before the plot even starts? The world just loaded doesn't have enough energy to handle him.
How should I fool him so that he can leave the game honestly?
………
Chen Mo: The change in the protagonist really has nothing to do with me.
Tianling: You have ruined it, and you say it has nothing to do with you? Get out of here and stay away.
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Tianling: You touched the plot line again, I will kill you, believe it or not!
Chen Mo: Sister Ling, I didn't mean it. Give me another chance and I can bring you back.
...
Chen Mo: Sister Ling, one win and one loss, the progress is solid. I have a reason to participate in this new theater. Just let me fine-tune it, maybe it will explode.
Tianling: Just this time, if it doesn't explode or falls below expectations, you can enter a certain heroine's dark room and play games with her for the rest of your life.
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This article is contrary to the routine, and it is a mindless crushing and slap in the face. It focuses on the plot and character changes. If you don't mind, please don't enter (´▽｀)ノ♪
Reader comments
Su Nian's writing is really good, but Lin Xiangqing's writing has always been about the daily life of the male protagonist and Shen. One or two chapters were okay, but the rest (I've read seven or eight chapters so far) are all about the male protagonist redeeming Shen. I thought it was a two-male protagonist novel. I came to see the sweet love and the Shura field behind it, not to see the daily life of the two men. A good book is a good book, but the author really likes the two male protagonists. I can understand and respect it, but please don't intersperse so much space in the story with multiple female protagonists. After all, I came to see the love between Shura Chang and Tiantian. [Sad]
Although there are situations where the plot is forced to be followed, the author uses Tiandao interns and manages many plot settings at the same time, which is much freer than the system (Are you really not conquering the male and female protagonists at the same time?)
It's funny and well-written [exploration], but the plot behind it is like giving away a girl. Many people may leave in the middle of watching it. It's really a bit incomprehensible. I can only say that it's like being suppressed by the cs heavenly law and not intervening, but it's still too frustrating for those who intervene and don't make a decision [poke].
Everything will be successful if it is prepared in advance, and it will be ruined if it is not prepared [eating melon]
Having so many photos has always been frustrating. I'm being played all the time, being watched all the time. You can easily use permissions to find out where the protagonist is
Okay, I feel like the author is a newbie, and it's very good to write like this. Five-star praise should encourage me. I just want to know how many heroines there are, and whether Tian Ling will also be accepted. If you want to leave people in suspense, pretend I didn't ask.
The quality is good and the plot logic is flawless. I found it quite interesting.
Very good, worth seeing
Well written, funny and sweet
Absolutely high quality, but the data is not very good. I don't know if the author can persist.
I think the writing is pretty good and I can read it.
The plot is good, but looking at the current situation, I feel that the effect of the system setting in the book is average.
I like this ❤️
This theme is okay
It's also a place where books can be found
Very beautiful, but unfortunately there are too few
The male protagonist with a good outlook on life and good character not only deceived the intern Tiandao sister, but also really redeemed the female protagonists of various novels. Even though his appearance has been reduced, his soul still shines. He unknowingly took over the role of the male protagonist of God of War, which is quite interesting.
It's pretty good. It's not that the story is very good, but it's just that you can be kind to others without any precautions. I like heart-warming stories. Support a wave
The subject matter that I haven't seen before is simply not enough to watch [laughing and crying]
It's quite novel, you can read it
Not bad, worth a try. The author would like more, but it's not enough.
It's beautiful, funny, and sweet. It's really beautiful.
I just saw the latest chapter, it's great (♥∀♥), I hope the author can stick with it until the end.
Su Nian's writing is really good, but Lin Xiangqing's writing has always been about the daily life of the male protagonist and Shen. One or two chapters were okay, but the rest (I've read seven or eight chapters so far) are all about the male protagonist redeeming Shen. I thought it was a two-male protagonist novel. I came to see the sweet love and the Shura field behind it, not to see the daily life of the two men. A good book is a good book, but the author really likes the two male protagonists. I can understand and respect it, but please don't intersperse so much space in the story with multiple female protagonists. After all, I came to see the love between Shura Chang and Tiantian. [Sad]
Although there are situations where the plot is forced to be followed, the author uses Tiandao interns and manages many plot settings at the same time, which is much freer than the system (Are you really not conquering the male and female protagonists at the same time?)
It's funny and well-written [exploration], but the plot behind it is like giving away a girl. Many people may leave in the middle of watching it. It's really a bit incomprehensible. I can only say that it's like being suppressed by the cs heavenly law and not intervening, but it's still too frustrating for those who intervene and don't make a decision [poke]. Everything will be successful if it is prepared in advance, and it will be ruined if it is not prepared [eating melon]
Having so many photos has always been frustrating. I'm being played all the time, being watched all the time. You can easily use permissions to find out where the protagonist is
Okay, I feel like the author is a newbie, and it's very good to write like this. Five-star praise should encourage me. I just want to know how many heroines there are, and whether Tian Ling will also be accepted. If you want to leave people in suspense, pretend I didn't ask.
The quality is good and the plot logic is flawless. I found it quite interesting.
Very good, worth seeing
Well written, funny and sweet
Absolutely high quality, but the data is not very good. I don't know if the author can persist.
I think the writing is pretty good and I can read it.
The plot is good, but looking at the current situation, I feel that the effect of the system setting in the book is average.
I like this ❤️
This theme is okay
It's also a place where books can be found
Very beautiful, but unfortunately there are too few
The male protagonist with a good outlook on life and good character not only deceived the intern Tiandao sister, but also really redeemed the female protagonists of various novels. Even though his appearance has been reduced, his soul still shines. He unknowingly took over the role of the male protagonist of God of War, which is quite interesting.
It's pretty good. It's not that the story is very good, but it's just that you can be kind to others without any precautions. I like heart-warming stories. Support a wave
The subject matter that I haven't seen before is simply not enough to watch [laughing and crying]
It's quite novel, you can read it
Not bad, worth a try. The author would like more, but it's not enough.
It's beautiful, funny, and sweet. It's really beautiful.
I just saw the latest chapter, it's great (♥∀♥), I hope the author can stick with it until the end.