A Deal Across the Line

The storyline is too natural, and I like the geographical setting of the protagonist, a handsome guy from Guangzhou and a straight man from Shandong... Is it true that Shandong can't produce O? Ha ha ha ha

It's so appetizing. The author's writing is very touching. Whether it's Daishan from Shandong or Chaosheng from Guangdong, they are both awesome and real. After I fell in love with it, I couldn't stop reading it. Even if I have to go to class tomorrow and sleep less, I still have to finish it. So the gold content is too high. I like it.

It's nice to look at, and actually it's relatively realistic. I have only read a little bit, but I feel sorry for Lin Daishan because he is already very helpless and has not taken any step by himself. For now. (I knew what happened to him was really disgusting, and I had to do it.) Although I opened the comments, I don't know why there are so many joking comments. Because we know from God's perspective that they will definitely be together. But it's not from God's perspective, especially from Xiaolin's perspective, it's really disgusting and aggrieved. So many things happened in the past, and it took three days to finish several chapters, and I had to be oppressed by my heart and reality. Chen Quanquan took it hard, relying on Lin Youqiu to ask him, and said hurtful words. You said he didn't like it, but he looked closely, but he liked it, and so on. Of course, the author's writing style is quite good so far, and the plot development is quite reasonable. After reading the current one, it's a bit hard to say. It seems rather distressing...

First of all, Chen Sheng and Dai Shan are very sweet [sending my heart]. They are my favorite characters. They have a lot of sexual tension together and are particularly tough and mature men. The relationship between the two is delicate and sincere. Chen Sheng should have fallen in love at first sight and then fell in love from the outside to the inside. Daishan is a slow-warming type. Maybe he is too innocent and is easily attracted. Of course, Chen Sheng is also talented. [Bookshelf plus one] Chen Sheng has a charlatan attitude, is gentle and loyal to Daishan, and is very reliable. Daishan is calm and mature, very innocent, and just the right amount of cuteness inadvertently. The author's writing style is very good, especially the emotional and linguistic parts of the two people. The logic is smooth, consistent with the characters, and very comfortable to watch. From the communication between the two people, it can be seen that they respect each other, care and support each other. Having a mouth and being able to talk are two different things. The writing is very close to reality and it is very beautiful. 🧐 The article is written very fluently, and the regional culture of the families in Chaoshan and Jinan is well written, and the differences between the families can be seen clearly. The other characters are also created with flesh and blood, and they are all collisions between different positions, but when they are bad, they are really bad. Family fighting is an old routine, but it is well detailed, not eye-catching, and written in a eloquent way, which is very good. The fact that Chen Sheng is not just aloof makes him come alive 👍 The very novel part is that it is written directly in Cantonese, which aroused my curiosity. It is still very interesting. There are generally many Cantonese parts, thank you to the royal translator [sending heartfelt wishes] Finally, the author please continue to update, and I hope the article will become more and more popular [Learned] I wish Chen Sheng and Daishan lovers will eventually get married in the future ❤️

This is the first time I read this kind of article with a clear regional setting (no intention or malice), and it's quite attractive. The two of them get along without being pretentious or pretentious, and their daily interactions are more in line with reality. They don't directly express their love, like, etc. In lengthy speeches, but they can feel that they love each other and tolerate each other. I also learned to understand some Cantonese, which is pretty good. Although there was a little bit of abuse in the back, it was okay, neither party gave up, and Daishan's cowardice was also very cute. The deputy CP is also quite interesting.

Delicious, who came up with this combination? Why did you actually write it down? ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

It's really beautiful!! Lin Daishan's character and design are really good, and his Cantonese is also very boring! Big cheers for the author! Looking forward to future developments! Good works must be seen! Keep going 🥺 [sending heart] 😘 😘 😘 😢

It's so beautiful. Although I couldn't understand Chen Sheng's dialect at first, luckily the author has a translator 😄. The more I read it, the more interesting it becomes. I want to say I miss you every day and you care about me. The waxy voice I use to speak in dialect is really touching. And the plot is also amazing. Xiaolin's little bits and pieces gradually fall into I like you so much and I like you so much, the emotions change from qualitative to qualitative, and Xiaolin's stubbornness is wrapped up well in the endless love! It feels very special. Recommended 👍👍👍 Why did I see where my dialect was around Chapter 60?!! Why did it become Mandarin!! Ahaha and the dialect is back! Author, why do you give me a slap and then feed me a sweet date, and you keep spreading salt over and over again 🥺 You are bad, I want sweet dates

This article is good to read, and it doesn't feel awkward. It comes naturally. I accidentally saw the latest chapter, and then I was so confused that I was flustered. I didn't rush to update it, and I wrote it slowly, hahahaha

It's super charming. The emotional development is very natural and not stiff. The young couple is so sweet. The Cantonese part is also a plus. It's really good.