Daddy's Little Ogre

The author's writing is superb! I feel a little sorry for Yali, like a stubborn cat, gentle and with his own bottom line. In fact, when I saw that there were only 29 chapters, I was still worried that it wasn't enough. It wasn't until I read Chapter 17 and realized that my reading speed was so slow that I felt something was wrong. When I looked at the number of words in each chapter, I realized that the author was really great.

The author's writing is so good. I have finished reading the author's other novel and am about to read the remaining two. The author's writing style is very special. The characters and personalities are very good. Yali is a bit miserable. She hopes to be redeemed and have her own life. She no longer only considers others [almost crying] [almost crying]. Moreover, Yali has double standards and is quite cute towards his father.

The writing is very good, and the characters are well developed and distinct. 1. First of all, let me explain. I have only heard the name Hell Inn before, and have never been exposed to any fan fiction plot introductions, etc., But it is quite easy to watch, and there is nothing that I need to know to understand it. 2. Personally, I feel (I'm not sure if this is true) that there is a little bit of a dual-line narrative (it feels like it's mainly the protagonist's line, and part of it is the father's line). Most of the stories are about the protagonist's side of things, and occasionally there are a few interspersed with the father's side of things. 3. The personalities of the father and son are not the common adjectives of politeness, rules, or crazy. They are very novel personalities (you have to read the book to feel for yourself, so I won't go into details here). When I first looked at the cover, I thought it looked like a beautiful, strong, miserable, crazy person. Or based on the title and the cover, I thought it would be the kind of person who takes pleasure in killing and cannibalizing others and then mindlessly dedicating loyalty to his father. However, after reading the introduction, I found out that it is not the case (anyway, this makes me feel more novel, I have rarely seen this kind of thing before). 4. Then others' friendship, family affection, etc. Towards the protagonist are also particularly delicious. They know that the protagonist's concept (toward his father) is problematic, but it is not the kind of correction that is eager to refute, but guides the protagonist to discover the problem bit by bit and analyze the problem bit by bit, so that the protagonist can better accept his over-exaggerated emotions due to lack of it. 5. There will be more dialogues (although I think this is not a shortcoming, but a highlight of this book) and will involve some repeated questioning, mainly because it is necessary to guide the protagonist to discover problems with his own concepts, so that the protagonist does not over-beautify his father, and is not so stubborn in criticizing himself (I personally feel that this really shapes the character of the protagonist) 6. Finally, and what I think is more important, is that the author's updates are really large and of good quality. Although there are less than 50 chapters (as of when I posted this comment), each one has at least 5,000 words, and some chapters have reached 10,000 words. Sorry, my language expression skills are not particularly good (and some of my nagging likes to add my own complaints and feelings) (I really didn't get to the point at all), but in the end, I wish the author good health and all the best, and the subsequent writing will become more and more high-quality (please don't stop updating, keep up the good work) [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Yali is miserable. The characters of both father and son are quite rare. Are they more novel? The updates are stable and the volume is large. This is my current favorite Hell Inn fanfic! Believe me, you won't lose money by investing! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

This is not a fanfic to show how powerful your OC is. Respect the character of the original character It's not about inserting a dispensable character into the original storyline.

Really. I suspect that one chapter has more than 100 pages. It feels like one chapter has more than 10,000 words.

Wow, wow, wow, such a delicious thing, of course I have to eat it vigorously. I am a bit protective of my food, so please delete all the tomatoes😊 (You must come on, such a delicious meal will definitely burst👍🏻🤗)

The plot of "Teacher" is very smooth, the character's personality is captured very accurately, and the protagonist is very vivid. It is my favorite inn fanfic I have seen on Tomato so far. It is really good-looking! ! ! ! ! !

This character creation conquered me. After reading it, I realized that it was only 16 chapters. The characters written are really full and distinctive. I am looking forward to the plot direction in the future.

Great character design, looking forward to the next chapters

Super super super invincible very good looking

To be honest, this is the first time that I am completely conquered by the personality charm of the protagonist of a book. Must give a five-star rating!

Really, I like it very much, the concept and emotion are so good

I like it very much. The author writes it very well and the characters are very cool. I hope the author can continue to update it! ! !

I feel like the characters are rare, but I quite like them

It's very interesting. I look forward to finishing it and keep updating. [Learned] [Learned] [Learned] Come on, Mrs. Author

Three-dimensional character creation The plot is reasonable

Good-looking≧∇≦The teacher is great

A very good book

It looks good. I love watching it. I keep watching it.

Everyone came to see me immediately! I don't think it's OOC at all

It's so beautiful. It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject.

It's so delicious ꒰^ↀωↀ^꒱It's so good. I'd love to watch more. Sheng Xizhi

I really like watching this type of movie. The protagonist has a calm sense of madness [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The character descriptions are rich and beautiful!

It's okay, but it feels like most of it is dialogue.