Loli Mother, Little Witch, Can Only Act Cute, Isn't It?

Among the only 70 reviews of this book, you can find the following discussion: 1. The pace is too slow and there are too many details. 2. The pace is too fast and makes you tired. 3. What kind of world view does the author write? Is it too narrow? 4. The world view written by the author is very clear and beautiful. 5. There are so many details, it must have been written by AI. 6. The author has a unique writing style and is also good at making jokes, unlike AI. 7. The author's book title is very innovative, but the introduction holds it back. 8. The title of this book is purely a gimmick, otherwise it wouldn't be so popular. 9. Author, why are the characters you write so rigid? 10. The author established the character in three sentences, and the character is very three-dimensional. 11. The author still has a lot of room for improvement. 12. The book written by the author is already considered a masterpiece. 13. Why do you, the villain, do bad things? 15. What you wrote at the beginning is too poisonous. 16. The author's beginning is very attractive and very interesting. 17. The list goes on and on. This is the comment section of our Lily Witch Different World, and it is no less chaotic than Death Migration. It's possible to do both, here's the answer. If you have other opinions, you can like me if you post a long comment, because sometimes the comments will be swallowed and I can't see them at all! I will read every comment, and I will also change the question [Love][Love]

This book is also very delicious! [Blowing kiss] The plot is the story of an ordinary female college student in her previous life who was reincarnated into the world of witches to heal others. The author's writing skills are rare in Tomato. He not only lacks a sense of rhythm, but also portrays each character in detail. Each has its own characteristics, rather than being like a tool to guide the development of the plot. It is flesh and blood, very, very, very good^ As for the Shura field that you book friends are talking about? I saw another answer in this novel. At least in this one, I think the Shura Field should not appear. As for why? Please move to the main text. After reading it, you will know why I said this [blowing kiss] The author has a different kind of writing style. How to describe it? I think it should be a special evaluation, clean, warm and sunny. This is rare on the Tomato platform, and this is the first time I have given such an answer. This is indeed the case. The author's writing style is said to be written by AI. I feel very sad! Have you lost your sense of beauty? ! I will seriously supervise the author's updates every day Please join me! ! [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

The author's writing style gives me a feeling of sadness but not sadness. It seems that once he writes, the knife will cut us very painfully, but the author does not. What I see from the author's writing is a kind of warmth that arises spontaneously, not artificial, not deliberate, and very real. I have never thought that there can be a kind of human fireworks in the magical world view. Maybe the author still has room for improvement in the plot. But this sincere and authentic writing style is definitely one of Tomato's rare best works. In this fast-paced society, it seems that all authors are pursuing sadistic writing and knives. It seems that only in this way can the characters be three-dimensional. However, the author made me feel the familiarity and peace of mind of rural China again, and the magical worldview diluted the earthy smell of rural China, leaving the most precious warmth. In summary, after watching the corpse, I feel warm [like] [like]

The content of the book written by the author is relatively new on Tomato, and I have not read many books of this type. But the characters are well drawn, and a few strokes or a few side descriptions can make people remember a certain character. Slow pace is a characteristic. Some people just like to read fast-paced books (www, but to be honest, I don't feel the pace is very slow. Our Xiaoye has improved very quickly and is now very strong.) If you can accept this narrative rhythm, then this must be a good book that you can't miss. If you like fast-paced books, you can also read it. A loli mom with super high charm, smart, hard-working, gentle, who can also draw a book, has tentacles and slimes, are you sure you want to miss it? (Cover your mouth, www) At present, it seems that there should be emotional lines (you can come back to it when you see it), it should be Little Ghost and Xiaoye, and thanks to the setting of the witch world view, this book has a strong orange flavor, and the setting of flesh and blood magic can also be used to drive a small car occasionally [laughing]

The book is quite good, but I was a little disappointed later when I saw that the author said it was 1v1. The main reason is that the first ones looked too much like Hundred Queens, and my expectations were based on those of Hundred Queens. However, the book is very good, but I felt that 1v1 would have less fun, so I felt a bit disappointed (ps: I don't think 1v1 is bad, but when I read this book, I wanted to see Hundred Queens' Meow more. As for why, I After reading more than fifty chapters, the protagonist interacts with many characters, and most of the interactions feel like they are going to be talked about, at least in my opinion, but once I see that it is not the Bai Hou I thought, my expectations are gone, so I feel that there is a lot less fun. If there is a character who interacts with the protagonist more deeply from the beginning, then I can easily accept the 1v1 setting.)

Among the many books, one can highlight one in particular, among which I think 1. There is no similar direction like other books. 2. From the perspective of the protagonist, there are many events but they are connected together, such as the fragments of stars to the recognition of March Xia, which has a sense of story. 3. In terms of character creation, many passers-by praised Xiao Miye for being cute and good-looking, and she appeared many times, but I didn't find it disgusting, and felt that it was reasonable. Summary: It has the pressure of real society, a reasonable world view, and many jokes are very interesting. The live broadcast software is really made with a certain look and feel. It has the fantasy of the magical world and the rigor of the story. I read more than a hundred chapters in one day, which is highly recommended. The update speed is also very fast. I posted 4 or 5 chapters in one day without paying attention. Big boost to the author! With such a big world view, I have to finish it even if I stay up late [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

1 On 1 is good, this is great. I think that as long as the writing and plot setting are good, I can watch it no matter what the subject is. But I am physically and psychologically disgusted with things like harem, and I can't stand it at all.

The protagonist is cute and the story is interesting. Oh, by the way, when will Zuo Ai be left? [Laughs] When will the identity of March Xia be confirmed? I want to see sweet love [crying] Ounegai [crying] After reading the latest chapter, I can't help but imagine the game journey of the protagonist and March Xia, imagining killing everyone, imagining the final stage, imagining the sweet and subtle love, imagining the discovery of identity, imagining the scene of confession, imagining the "heartthrob" dandelion being killed by a "fragrant" plant. "Grass" attracts people to stop, and finally it falls to the ground and sprouts... I used to be attracted by interesting scenes when reading novels, imagining the development of the story, but as the reading age increases, I haven't had this feeling for a long time, it's been a long time... So can the author surprise me with ten updates a day [laughs]

Good book, clear world view, but I feel that Xiao Miye's life has become so rushed. After entering the main line of the academy, the branch lines of the bar and being an anchor have been written a lot less. However, I feel that this book is a very long chapter. I hope it can be updated all the time. Come on.

A good new book, I look forward to the follow-up plot. Some people in the book review actually think that the description is too detailed and was written by AI. When did the advantages of writing become a reason to judge AI? Will all authors with this style of writing have to be appraised for AI in the future? During the AI ​​barbaric period, I also read a few books that liked to describe and embellish in large sections. Will they also be hunted across time and space? People who make false claims about AI are extremely harmful to the market and public morals. They are essentially the same group of people as the "Brother Jianchao" who appeared before. There are many minor language errors in this book. There is a paragraph with a word missing in the latest chapters. Currently, AI will not make such mistakes. Moreover, there are many clever uses of words in the book, which cannot be written by AI.

I have been following this book for a long time, but overall it seems there are a lot of shortcomings. First of all, the plot narrative of the article is confusing. Except for our little ghost March Xia, all the characters before the Moon Forest are one character and one plot. (It is also possible that these people will start the main story after entering the Moon Forest) Furthermore, I can't find the main line, and the world view is too big. On the surface, it seems to be on the right track, but in fact, it is still in Novice Village. I don't know whether the main line is to be an idol band or to become stronger. (Maybe it's just daily writing) Finally, our lovely Xiao Miye's love for March Xia only stops at lust, which is really abominable. Hurry up and write more about the deep friendship between them! ! Although, this book is very beautiful. It seems that the author may have added something to his writing style! An ordinary but not boring daily life, a gentle and motherly sinister protagonist. (The slander may be for the effect of the show, but it doesn't look like an act.) There are also warm daily interactions, and the plain but full of humorous writing style makes people stay and read chapter after chapter. Reading it too much makes me feel destitute and can only sigh that there is no other literature like it. Is the author too kind to his characters? It's so good that I always wonder if Lao Da wrote a shocking article and regretted it later. From then on, Zhuijiao Crematorium began to reform and achieve repentance for the characters in the novel by not writing about the knife. (I mean no knife in the whole article, feel free to eat. But I want a bare knife) Personally, I mainly feel that the author's writing style does not describe knives, which is a pity.

Question: Is there anything that can make me fall into the trap instantly? Answer: Protagonist, live broadcast, drawing book... Do they count? 1. The author is alive 2. Updates are fierce, so the push is slow because it is slow to read. 3. As far as changing Baiwen is concerned, whether it is pure or not depends on the ss part! [Smile] 4. At the same time, upgrading and becoming stronger is not just a background (this is quite rare). 5. Don't change the plot or map too quickly! Things like live streaming, maid work, college life, etc. If you write about the things you don't want in the front, you won't write in the back. There are only over 100 chapters! 6. It is recommended that the author change the cover, some. Don't look at the title of the book, just the cover. It's best to be a high-quality, cute loli! 7. The writing style of this book is acceptable 8. I am exhausted from writing so much. Needless to say delicious. After reading it, I found that this book still has the issue of whether it is AI or not. There is no problem: it does not look at the format, sentence structure, or whether there is a description of the environment, but only whether it is interesting to read. ... Needless to say delicious. I have also read AI articles, and the obvious ones are like chewing wax. It sounds even more so. The text of ai is meaningless and empty.

This book is the most special novel I have ever read. It does not have the two protagonists meeting, getting to know each other, and falling in love at the beginning in traditional novels. The author first writes the protagonist's daily life from a single perspective, and then it is like a deviation suddenly appears in our ordinary life, colliding with another deviation, like a destiny of destiny, intertwined, and it seems to me that the gender of the previous life is male or female. The writing is also very good! The story is very detailed! ! The following are my feelings: It is 1v1 true love. From now on, it seems that the rest of the game will be mainly about emotions, which will make me very touched. Big cheers for the author, pay attention to your kidneys!

Ending evaluation of Chapter 35: The plot is not cliche, the level can be seen to have improved, the writing is smooth, the writing style is comfortable, there are no inappropriate scenes, and the character creation is also more delicate. Good luck to the author.

It's quite healing, but I want to mention two points. First, the plot is too messy. In the latest chapter, the story about Jian Qiuluo's organization is mixed with the story about Stars Falling into the Sea. It also inexplicably introduces a plot involving Kotoko and the others to perform. It seems very fragmented and feels like the author is writing whatever he dreams about [staring] Second, the pace of the plot is too fast. The rest of the story has nothing to do with what was introduced in the introduction. Remnelle has barely appeared. The plot of the astrology club, various characters in the bar, and a bunch of supporting characters have all been forgotten after seeing it. There is a lack of memory points. It is too wasteful to write a plot for one character [grievance] This comment is only temporary. I will read the book first and then read it later. I hope the author will work hard and update [please update]

It's good to watch. Except for some problems at the beginning of the plot, the interactions between Miye and her are very good. The protagonist should be a growth-type numerical monster. I hope that there will be no pressure on the numerical value in the future. For example, nothing happened before the protagonist came. After coming, in order to suppress the protagonist's growth, war broke out in less than two or three years. Disasters happened and everything else came out. There was not much that allowed the protagonist to grow steadily for a few years. I watched a story that lasted hundreds of chapters and fought several bosses. It was compressed into 3 months. I am speechless. I hope the author can grasp the flow of time well.

The subject matter of pjn is not bad. I read half of it and it felt very good. I read this novel without reading the book review. I stopped reading when the author said it was 1v1 at the end. In this setting, writing 1v1 would be wasteful. When writing about singles, I only post about the inconveniences and half a hundred people. I feel more attractive than 1v1.

It's a cute succubus and a dark loli maid mother. I look forward to more TieTie plots. Update it soon

The early part is mediocre but the later part is really nice [Sending Hearts] The emotional line is a bit slow and I don't even know who the other heroine is without reading the author's comments [face covering] And this is the most updated book I've seen so far [Adoration] The author is awesome [Lick the screen]

I didn't get into it after reading the introduction three times, until I clicked in to read it during the book shortage. The whole thing is very delicious, the daily interactions are very spiritual, the protagonist's character is very exciting, and although the world view is a classic witch, its content is very rich and innovative. Come on boss, the ratings will definitely increase in the future. I wish this book will get better and better. I will update my mouth and teeth more often after finishing my busy work [already planted]

It looks good. The author is good at describing the environment and character creation, and the writing style is also very comfortable. The protagonist is a king of all women, but the author does a good job in grasping the distance. Because the identity of the protagonist is coupled with the mode of getting along, the close interaction between the protagonist and other characters focuses on showing the personality characteristics (charm) of the protagonist and the characters (I said the protagonist Loli's mother is the best, do you understand)? (Maybe it's because I usually eat too much) I'm more of a vegetarian... One thing worth noting is that the eldest lady in the introduction is not the heroine.

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After watching Li again (Sad Why can birds fly in the sky? 🐦✨ Why do cats always sleep non-stop? 😴🐱 What kind of day will you spend today? 🌞💫 All All All 🎁 Let's go find it 🔍💨 Why does the dawn shine on me? 🌅💛 Why do people feel lonely at night? 🌙🥺 If sorrow could be shared in half 🤗 That would be great 🥺💧 Laughter and sadness intertwined 🎭 In this small corner of this vast world 🌍🌸 Let's do it together 👫 Let's unlock the secrets of the universe 🚀🔮 What stories do you want to share today? 📚✨ What kind of song do I want to sing with you? 🎤🎶 There are also unknown little flowers 🌸🌼 All All All 🌈 Let's go find it 🚴 All All All ✨ Let's go find it 🛤️💖

Tomato doesn't have many witch novels, but this one is one of the few witch novels. The relationship between the protagonist and other characters is very comfortable and relaxing, and the plot progresses step by step very well. And as of now, there are no surprises in Chapter 86 (how can a witch novel have any surprises). It is the best among the best. It's a pleasure to read 😎👍👍👍

Among the transformation stories I read in Tomato, there are not only 50 but also 40. This one is ranked in the top three. It can be said to be of high quality. The author's writing is excellent and the plot is also good. Mainly, hehe, I like the setting and the protagonist. Hehe, after reading this book, I have been transformed into a thunder and lightning archmage [laughter]

Four stars, it looks very comfortable, and the writing is also very good. It is a rare breath of fresh air in this era of AI overflow. But I feel that the biggest problem is that this book is 1v1, which is not friendly to people like us who like to read hundreds of posters. It was slow to pick up in the early stage, and the protagonist was still working in a bar, so he got to know various big sisters. When I saw Mebius, I thought it was a hundred queens, but when I read the reviews, it was a single hundred. If you like to read a single hundred, this is a good choice, but if you read the introduction and think it is a hundred queens, then you don't need to read it. I hope this book becomes popular ( @storm The author should label her as a single heroine [Sending my heart]

It's very interesting to read. Different from other cool articles, the slow pace can be said to be an advantage of this book. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. The reason for giving less heart is to hope that the author will avoid arrogance and impetuosity. I have been reading the last book, and I hope the author can finish this book. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I was attracted by the cover at first, and when I saw Chika I was curious and clicked in [face covering] Unfortunately, the content written has nothing to do with Sansakura. The book is pretty good. I haven't found any obvious poison points so far (maybe it's because I have a relatively high poison resistance). The description is relatively detailed and the plot is quite interesting.

This is the world's new little witch masterpiece, it's so delicious😋😋😋

It's beautiful and delicious! So pinching. I hope it's a pair of multiple cats! I don't know which one I started from, but it seems to have some AI modifications (I'm not sure, maybe I've read too many AI articles recently, and I'm a little nervous. If not, I'll say sorry in advance, meow!), But the overall rhythm is still pretty good, but is the protagonist's combat power expanding a little too fast? From D level to B level in an instant? I don't know what the author will write next.