The Outbreak of the Apocalypse: Starting from the Instinct of Swordsmanship

I'm just a stranger, I personally think the writing is quite good, I support it with five stars. The first volume was written in 26 chapters. The plot is full of ups and downs, and the whole text is never laggy. The protagonist is not a reborn person. He is suddenly in the end of the world and experiences various things that push him to quickly adapt to this cruel world. The protagonist's growth line is clear and the transition is smooth. His perseverance and will to live towards death deeply moved me. I must watch the advertisement to support the author. Now I catch up to the latest news in one go. Unexpectedly, the IQs of all the staff are still online. The changes in the top management of the safe zone are also unconventional. There is no unexpected new official taking office. The three things that are inexplicable are targeted at the protagonist. This is something I did not expect. Moreover, the creation of the new character was also very successful. In just a few sentences, a proud, resolute and bold image emerged on the page, which made me open the advertisement again. There is too much written, which is a bit like a pretense, and that's all. I'm going to watch a commercial. It's really hairless

Better than most apocalyptic stories I've read. The writing doesn't look like it was written by AI, the words and sentences are good, and the idea is good. The early stage also showed the despair when the doomsday breaks out very well. The characterization of the protagonist group is also very good, they all have their own characteristics, each one is very useful, and they are not the kind of people who will only hold them back. Moreover, there are also mouth substitutes (who complained about everything we readers wanted to complain about) which slightly eased the apocalyptic atmosphere, and the overall integration was very good. The protagonist also has a very good personality. He is a person with upright views. Of course, he is not a bad person. In the early stage, when he had the power, he would help the people around him to the best of his ability. However, as the apocalypse spread, he gradually realized that some people were destined to be eliminated by the doomsday, and this era could not tolerate them (the protagonist was not a virgin in the early stage). The transformation of the protagonist's personality was very well portrayed. So I give it a five-star review, it's worth a look, but there are too few more [Like] AI article, not much to say. Brothers, stop talking about me [crying] I'm sorry for everyone, tricking everyone into killing them [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's okay, but the AI ​​smell is too strong. The genius is so smart. In the later stage, human beings will become extinct [face covering], and there is basically no rest, and they are always fighting. .

It's good to watch, and the protagonist is not a lone wolf. He is half a great man, has leadership skills, is passionate, and is willing to give opportunities to people who make small mistakes. I quite like it. Irritated players who like to kill the sky and destroy the air should be very uncomfortable to watch. I will give you some protection in advance. But this survivor is too human-like. He is either a super hero who dares to break through the blockade or a virgin who has to save others even though he cannot save himself. He does not have the complex character of a real person.

I have read most of the apocalyptic articles on the market. Let me briefly talk about my personal views. Well~, let's talk about the brilliant part first. The framework of the novel is very catchy. The zombie apocalypse is combined with the setting of sequential lottery, and the hard-core survival route is integrated. There is no cliché and cool writing routine of brainless crushing at the beginning. The first volume has a tight rhythm. It only takes 26 chapters to complete a complete plot. The plot is constantly ups and downs, and the crises are progressive. You can feel the author's intention to write group portraits and pay attention to plot logic. The survival atmosphere is acceptable, and the pressure of survival is always online. Compared with many homogeneous apocalyptic novels, it has a bit more tense realism. The opening chapter is easy to immerse people in. However, there are many problems in the book that hold it back. First of all, the character creation is a bit thin, and the character motivations are not delicate enough, making it difficult to create empathy; secondly, the balance of the sequential lottery system needs to be polished, some abilities appear slightly abrupt, and the rules are not spread out step by step. At the same time, the conflict design in some bridge sections is slightly deliberate, and the resolution of individual crises lacks foreshadowing, which reduces the sense of immersion in hard-core survival. The narrative rhythm is occasionally unbalanced, and the transition between tense plot and daily life is blunt. Although there are some minor problems, I personally think it is still worth reading. Considering that the author is a newbie, it is already well written like this. I would like to give you five stars for encouragement.

Awesome, I really enjoyed reading it. With my personality, I would have scolded the protagonist when I saw him leaving those who were holding him back, but I didn't want to scold this book. The plot is too tight, with one wave rising after another. It's awesome. I must give it five stars.

It's quite good-looking, and it's considered to be in the first echelon of apocalyptic literature. The plot is compact and the stages are clear. Each character has his or her own highlights. It depicts the despair and gloom of the end of the world, as well as the struggles and arcs of the characters. The process from the collapse of the old order to the establishment of the new order is also very real. There are no brainless idiots (who would die soon if they were). The protagonist is capable but not arrogant, has the pressure and confusion to face responsibilities, and has the courage to protect his companions. The supporting characters also have their own merits. The group portrait is very good. As for whether there are multiple female protagonists, in the apocalypse there is a captain who is strong and does not abandon his teammates and has saved many lives. It is normal to have dependence and affection. It is not necessary to regard the previous relationship between a man and a woman as love. You should pay attention to the friendship between teammates who support each other in the apocalypse. In short, it is a very beautiful and logical post-apocalyptic group portrait novel. I highly recommend [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

The plot of the first volume is compact and not procrastinating. However, after only thirty or forty chapters, there are already three female protagonists who are attracted to each other and have different personalities. I hope it is not a harem story (I personally prefer no female protagonists, because not many Tomatoes can write good emotional dramas) Chapter 57 was so amazing, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist fought tooth and nail to kill Level 4 just to save Lin Tan. Then he passed out after the fight. Lin resisted him and said "You owe me once." It was really hard to stand up. If the protagonist hadn't run far away to save her, I could still hold on due to my high poison resistance.

Except for a little bit of embarrassment in reading it when I can't find it, other aspects such as characterization and logic are better. At least the writing style of the tomato novels I have read is relatively high. I read the comments and said that AI was used, but I didn't feel it. Maybe the author used it better. Moreover, although this article is not brainless, it is also a steady and refreshing kind (here I I don't know how to describe it), some people say that this protagonist is a bit of a virgin, but I think this protagonist is based on his own ideas. After all, he was an ordinary college student before the disaster, and he cannot be so ruthless. And I guess the five-star rating for the savior route is because the rating of this book is too low. I think the perception is better than most 9-point poisonous books on Tomato. I hope more people will see it.

It's so well written, I just finished the first volume. The protagonist is decisive and charming, the supporting characters also have distinct personalities, and Fat Brother also has a character development arc. The description of the battle is very graphic, and all the players have online IQs and work together to survive. The monster is too strong. In addition to having mutants, it can also learn, but it will ambush and trap it on the first day of the mutation. Fortunately, human mutants who are not the protagonist appear in the first volume. I am very curious about the subsequent plot development. I hope you will be rewarded for your popularity! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It gives people a sense of solidity, there is no visible progress bar, just a little bit of exploration. After watching Campus Escape, I actually accepted the idea of ​​having a female protagonist. (Not sure if there is a female protagonist, if there is, I hope it is Lin) Each one is well shaped and every coin has two sides. The government also fulfills its due responsibility and protects the weak. There are some ordinary people who have not realized the cruelty of the apocalypse, but they have been made real by the environment or the protagonist.

People who were overwhelmed by the battle in the early stage were out of breath, and the pace was relatively fast. I felt that I couldn't get out easily and got injured again. I felt that there were a little too many women. In a 6-person group, 3 women seemed to be interested in the protagonist, which was a bit of a drag (the 3 women were more support and had no fighting ability, plus 1 man was also a support, and the battle relied entirely on the protagonist and a helper). The book is still very good, come on.

I really think it's good. There are some small flaws in some details, but the flaws are not concealed. It's very comfortable and refreshing to read. The story is coherent and the rhythm is tight. The protagonist's mind is not like that of a student. However, it is normal for a post-apocalyptic novel to give the protagonist some trouble. The person who can lead everyone to survive is destined to have a will and spirit that others do not have. I hope you can keep up the good work and continue to make more updates.

For now, the doomsday genre is pretty good. The protagonist grows up from a college student. The content is tense and exciting, but also humorous. However, the updates are a bit slow. I hope there will be some stable updates or burst updates. Not to mention other readers, I may just want to stock up on the chapters and read them again, and eventually forget about this book over time. There are no obvious bad points (for me), and the plot is ups and downs and compact (otherwise I wouldn't watch the updates in a day). It seems like there are multiple female protagonists, but the female protagonists are quite useful, and the male supporting characters are also good. The first volume is from college to the military gathering place, the second volume is from the military period, and the third volume should be about preparing to go solo.

It feels good. I see that it is not poisonous to me now, nor does it overwhelm the protagonist's combat power. The characters are well created, and the teammates are not mentally retarded. I see that now I am starting to form my own force, and I hope it will not become homogeneous. Surprisingly, the military was not directly banned. It was handled very well. AI should be used, to what extent I'm not sure, but sometimes the characters' dialogue makes me feel like I'm watching a short play

Full marks, the plot and character settings are very good and very realistic. There are no brainless villains, and the average IQ of everyone is online. The real apocalyptic atmosphere is well rendered, not the kind of mindless killing plot. It's just that I personally feel that it lacks description of the characters' faces and lacks some color. Looking at the plot, the protagonist should have to form his own force later on. If he forms his own force, it will be less relaxing and more heavy and responsible. I personally don't like trouble or even hate trouble. I feel that having my own team that can continue to grow stronger and survive in the apocalypse is enough. Finally, I hope it has more female protagonists. I really like all the female characters in it. Especially Xiaotang, who fell in love with this arrogant but wise girl when they first met. Get rid of get rid of

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I think it's one of the more interesting post-apocalyptic stories I've read. The protagonist is not a virgin, and he doesn't kill like a murderer. Some people may think that if there is a problem, just kill him, but I think the protagonist is more in line with the real situation. Who would kill someone for nothing? When reading the commentary, he killed his roommate (mutated one), and Zhou Ye wanted to stop him. Some people thought that Zhou Ye's behavior was wrong, and if there was a problem, he should be killed, and even wanted to kill Zhou Ye. But I think normal people would not believe it when they saw his roommate mutated, and they would not be cruel. I think this book is very well written, and it is in line with my views on apocalyptic literature. I have always wanted to find a book like this, and I hope the author can persevere [Blow kiss]

It's a very good post-apocalyptic novel. The writing is mature and the characters are well drawn. It's a pity that it's too late. If you, the author, had written this book ten years ago, it would have become a huge hit long ago, and you would have made a lot of money. I read the second volume and gave up [face covering]

The author's skills are very solid, and the sense of crisis is very strong. It doesn't have the cool features of Tomato. The plot has twists and turns, and the protagonist is well-shaped. In the early stage, people were stupid and the protagonist was not killed. It was quite uncomfortable to watch at first, but after thinking about it, this is indeed the right thing to do, but there are too few chapters. However, after seeing the latest chapter, I feel that the style is more relaxed and leisurely. After all, the protagonist is really a big deal.

Nowadays, it is rare to see the character of the protagonist Han Guangweizheng in the apocalyptic theme. In fact, I feel that it is not bad. Not only the character creation of the protagonist group, but also the style of the entire article is difficult to find an alternative. However, for the kind of pure people who like to watch people who just don't agree with each other and kill the whole person. Readers of Shuangwen may find it uncomfortable to read, so let's avoid it in advance, so as not to feel uncomfortable after reading it and start to give low scores. However, it is still too short. It is very painful to keep up with it. I want to keep the book but I am afraid of dying [laughing] Author, please keep updating, don't be tired, but don't rest either [laughing]

The plot and setting are okay. It combines sequences and zombies, two of my favorite themes. The pace is always tense and the plot is always pushing forward. Let's talk about the protagonist group again. The protagonist's three views are very upright, neither selfish nor holy. In addition to the dormitory roommates and classmates from the next class, the remaining members of the protagonist team are all auxiliary female characters who are added later. They are similar to the protagonist jungler, Zhou Ye is the confrontation, and the rest of the members are auxiliary. It seems that they are using female characters to open a harem (currently Lin Tan is the one-way protagonist, and Shen Xiaotang has a superb appearance description of 100 words). The character setting is too facial, Xu Man is always a virgin, Zhou Ye is always the protagonist and the mouth substitute, and Shen Xiaotang is always a squeamish young lady.

You can really watch it, I recommend watching it in the middle of the night👀

A post-apocalyptic novel worth reading. The first volume of the campus chapter is very fast-paced. You are escaping, killing monsters, and getting injured all the way. It only takes one night, and the protagonist has to keep breaking out. His physique is simply superhuman [facepalm]. But other than that, the protagonist and the protagonist's group's characters are pretty good, and they have their own character arcs. The writing style is remarkable. It can be seen that it has been polished by AI. The description of some dialogues is really weak, but it is better than those novels with a lot of grammatical defects.

It's so good that I can't sleep at night. It's rare to find a fairy tale among the apocalyptic novels with the same template. Author, you must not stop updating. Oh, no, if there is no such novel, wow Darcy... [I'm about to cry]

It's very good-looking, high-energy throughout, and the main characters are all capable and intelligent people! ! ! Highly recommended, it's really fun to watch [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

I read 68 chapters in one go, it was great. There is no obvious poisonous point, not so far anyway. And the number of words in each chapter is sufficient. The plot is tight and the content is ups and downs. Haha, although this description sounds like a brush-up, it's really good-looking. Author please update soon

Surprisingly, it's a bit good-looking. At first, I thought it would be the kind of game that starts with an invincible sequence where you mow the grass and collect supplies frantically. However, it turned out that it was relatively light on that aspect and focused more on plot-level description. At least so far, I think it's pretty good.

The writing is very good, the plot is very continuous, and unlike other apocalyptic novels that make the army invisible, the protagonist's combat power will not increase too quickly, but I don't know why the rating is very low. I hope that the subsequent plots can also maintain it.

It's really good. It's rare to find apocalyptic novels these days. Apocalyptic novels don't require a lot of effort. It's rare to be able to maintain a logical chain and keep the basic narrative. It's obviously a popular theme for so many years, but there are not many that can really be written. I hope the author can update it steadily.