The Edge: Four Cats from the Start, and I Build a City by Hand

I have never played games or read related novels. This is the first one and it is very interesting. The first part was quite interesting, but until Chapter 57, it was... Boring and I didn't want to read it. It's not just a broken hand, it's just a little bit broken, so it won't make me change my evaluation. But the entire fifty-seven chapters are very poor. All the plot design and all the character creation in this chapter are very poor, so bad that it greatly eliminates the desire to continue reading.

If you know how to write, write more. Update when you are hungry. Update when you are bored. Update when you are happy. Update when you are sad. Come on and update. One star for the broken hand. I am a carnal purist. One star for the prosthetic limb.

It's pretty good to read, and there's nothing major about it. Just write it as normal from now on. Don't pay attention to those who say they can't accept modified arms. This thing is at most a personal preference, and it's not a bad point for the novel. This novel is at least pretty good on Tomato. It's overall very comfortable to read, and the characters' personalities are okay. There's no plot that's obviously offensive.

The book is very good. Regarding some of the recent rhythms and disturbances in the book, I am personally opposed to the current mainstream "flesh and blood purists" opinions. Mechanical ascension, genetic ascension, or psychic abilities should all be based on the author's own ideas. Readers can only provide suggestions. The cheating itself does not necessarily have to be a cool article. If you really like it, watch the Dragon King with a Wrong Mouth. But in this regard, there are two parties: radical and moderate. Radical is the mainstream among the current rhythmic factions. It is the most irritating and irrational one. It is also the part of the "flesh and blood purists" that I criticized earlier. The moderates are more likely to simply dislike it and make suggestions. These members are not criticized by me. As for why the moderates also come forward, my personal opinion is that the severed hand is indeed a "poisonous point" The reason is because there is no foreshadowing. After all, it is unexpected. An enemy that cannot be dealt with suddenly comes. The "Goldfinger" becomes a decoration. He forcibly cuts off his hand and self-destructs, or even loses. Then a man comes from the sky to save the situation. Not only that, he is also the murderer of all tragedies. The reason is almost equal to fun. It is also inexplicably important to several people in the colony. Then he obviously does bad things, but those people have a blood feud with him but easily forgive him, and even have a good relationship. It is difficult for me to understand this. I hope the author can pay more attention to the true emotions of the characters in his novels. They should be written as flesh-and-blood creatures rather than machines that advance the plot. Of course, this kind of problem also widely appears in major works, such as the anime "Zero Starting Life in Another World". The plot about Rem is also controversial in this regard, so the author does not need to blame himself for this. He only needs to pay attention to relevant aspects after discovering them and correct them accordingly.

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No matter what I say, I would like to support the book around the world. Abominable bad cat

As a ring-world fanfic, it's okay. Personally, I can't accept the plot where the protagonist is plotted by the brave cat from the beginning of the time travel. This type of story usually has the identity of the villain. Although there are various patches, the four cats, the whole family, and the protagonist being forced to have his arm broken have a lot to do with her arrangement (although the patches say that it was accidental, out of control, restricted from taking action, and given in vain) But this kind of cat, usually in other books, is a cat that is going to be made into a carpet, along with the Midi forces who made related arrangements.

It's really good. The characters in the second Huan novel I've read are pretty good. As for the severed hand, I don't think it's a big deal. It may have something to do with me playing Warhammer [smile] [smile] [smile] I've never played Huan, but after reading two Huan novels (the other one is Jiang Ling's), I also want to play it. This game, the author has introduced me to the game in disguise, right? 🤔 🤔 🤔 Although after seeing the back, I feel that there are a lot of cheaters and the author, but I think you just need to maintain your own rhythm. In the end, I can only give a five-star praise as support 💕💕💕

It's well written and worth reading. Let's take a look at the comment section. Some of the negative reviews in the comment section are too outrageous to be used as a reference. This book is not said to be an invincible book. How could someone insist on saying that it is an invincible book? 🤦

It's a decent novel, but it's well written in some places [Thoughts] Author, you'd better update more, otherwise Fried Rice Intelligence will educate you with the great hand of God and the three-letter mod 😄