Edge: Start with Four Cats and Build a City with Your Hands

I have never played games or read related novels. This is the first one and it is very interesting. The first part was quite interesting, but until Chapter 57, it was... Boring and I didn't want to read it. It's not just a broken hand, it's just a little bit broken, so it won't make me change my evaluation. But the entire fifty-seven chapters are very poor. All the plot design and all the character creation in this chapter are very poor, so bad that it greatly eliminates the desire to continue reading.

If you know how to write, write more. Update when you are hungry. Update when you are bored. Update when you are happy. Update when you are sad. Come on and update. One star for the broken hand. I am a carnal purist. One star for the prosthetic limb.

It's pretty good to read, and there's nothing major about it. Just write it as normal from now on. Don't pay attention to those who say they can't accept modified arms. This thing is at most a personal preference, and it's not a bad point for the novel. This novel is at least pretty good on Tomato. It's overall very comfortable to read, and the characters' personalities are okay. There's no plot that's obviously offensive.

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The book is very good. Regarding some of the recent rhythms and disturbances in the book, I am personally opposed to the current mainstream "flesh and blood purists" opinions. Mechanical ascension, genetic ascension, or psychic abilities should all be based on the author's own ideas. Readers can only provide suggestions. The cheating itself does not necessarily have to be a cool article. If you really like it, watch the Dragon King with a Wrong Mouth. But in this regard, there are two parties: radical and moderate. Radical is the mainstream among the current rhythmic factions. It is the most irritating and irrational one. It is also the part of the "flesh and blood purists" that I criticized earlier. The moderates are more likely to simply dislike it and make suggestions. These members are not criticized by me. As for why the moderates also come forward, my personal opinion is that the severed hand is indeed a "poisonous point" The reason is because there is no foreshadowing. After all, it is unexpected. An enemy that cannot be dealt with suddenly comes. The "Goldfinger" becomes a decoration. He forcibly cuts off his hand and self-destructs, or even loses. Then a man comes from the sky to save the situation. Not only that, he is also the murderer of all tragedies. The reason is almost equal to fun. It is also inexplicably important to several people in the colony. Then he obviously does bad things, but those people have a blood feud with him but easily forgive him, and even have a good relationship. It is difficult for me to understand this. I hope the author can pay more attention to the true emotions of the characters in his novels. They should be written as flesh-and-blood creatures rather than machines that advance the plot. Of course, this kind of problem also widely appears in major works, such as the anime "Zero Starting Life in Another World". The plot about Rem is also controversial in this regard, so the author does not need to blame himself for this. He only needs to pay attention to relevant aspects after discovering them and correct them accordingly.

No matter what I say, I would like to support the book around the world. Abominable bad cat

As a ring-world fanfic, it's okay. Personally, I can't accept the plot where the protagonist is plotted by the brave cat from the beginning of the time travel. This type of story usually has the identity of the villain. Although there are various patches, the four cats, the whole family, and the protagonist being forced to have his arm broken have a lot to do with her arrangement (although the patches say that it was accidental, out of control, restricted from taking action, and given in vain) But this kind of cat, usually in other books, is a cat that is going to be made into a carpet, along with the Midi forces who made related arrangements.

It's really good. The characters in the second Huan novel I've read are pretty good. As for the severed hand, I don't think it's a big deal. It may have something to do with me playing Warhammer [smile] [smile] [smile] I've never played Huan, but after reading two Huan novels (the other one is Jiang Ling's), I also want to play it. This game, the author has introduced me to the game in disguise, right? [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] Although after seeing the back, I feel that there are a lot of cheaters and the author, but I think you just need to maintain your own rhythm. In the end, I can only give a five-star praise as support [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

New book around the world, good👍🏻 Hello cats! Free-range chickens, please show up quickly Damn it, why can the protagonist be accompanied by a tender cat girl? I don't even have a tender cat lady. I wonder if there will be Collim?

All are luxury cats +8 Haki +8 Good book +40 Sitting on the floor and reading -3

Fringe World, I almost forgot when I saw this kind of video. It's really beautiful. It contains both daily life and battle. You must keep writing. Author, I can't keep writing. I can only rape you. I may keep books in the future, but not now.

Gu Gu Gu Gu Gu, I haven't seen any poisonous spots so far, it's a good grass. Can you get some Qiluo little lolita, either 0.6 Or 0.7 Body size? [Laughing evilly]

It's a decent novel, but it's well written in some places [Thoughts] Author, you'd better update more, otherwise Fried Rice Intelligence will educate you with the great hand of God and the three-letter mod [laughs]

Come on, come on, the writing is good, I like to read it, the author's rhythm is still acceptable, and there is a growth trajectory even if it cheats. If you become invincible with just one click, it will be completely uninteresting, so ignore those people and just write your own.

A very interesting edge world novel,

Just don't do it. So far, it looks like there's nothing wrong with it, it's just that I'm not having enough fun, but as long as there's nothing like "I can't save my girl", it'll be fine. Don't write any "grievance" plots if you are already playing around with the world; since you want to be the golden lover Wang Xueniu, don't let your girls down.

It's pretty good to read. Most of the people criticizing this book basically regard it as a completely original work, but this book is essentially a derivative of Ring World. In Ring World, it's a good thing to cut off limbs and replace organs. The problem with hang-up is that there is no character who is the avatar of the player in the original work. It is a management type from a God's perspective. The protagonist's hang-up is a modifier in the game. Most of the functions must be used to develop the overall development and personal abilities. The increase in power is also based on the improvement of the skill level of the original work. The author has made some magic changes so that the protagonist's numerical value can also be improved. I agree with the author's point of view that the story is inversely proportional to the intensity of the hook. I have also read some really mindless and cool novels, and some of them are cool without overpowering the combat power. It is really cool, but after reading the first 60 chapters of 200 chapters, there is basically no new plot. This book is not a cool novel, and it is worth reading for a Rim World fan.

Ah, first of all, it's very nice. I've never heard of this game before. After reading the novel, I've learned a lot about it. If you haven't heard of this game, you won't understand anything about it. The broken hand that many people mentioned before and the addition of prosthetic limbs can only be said to be different preferences. Anyway, for me, this can only be worn. It's a very, very small poisonous spot. After watching 60 Dorn in one breath, it's pretty good-looking.

It's one of the best-written stories in the world of rings.

It looks good, but the author is too short, which made me want to play the game, and then my villain was kidnapped [crying] Damn Alwu, if I had been slower, the second one would have been kidnapped too.

I watched it for a long time. One bad thing is that the plug-in is not very powerful. Let me first explain that I have never played Ring World. I just feel that this plug-in is not very powerful compared to other novel plug-ins. The author keeps up the good work. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is good, Hao Mao Hao Mao, but starting to click on the mechanical ascension, the purity of flesh and blood is slightly uncomfortable. I still think the original one is better, but it's a pity.

Meow, meow, meow, meow, meow (affirmation from the home of cats and cats)... The plot of the chapter about the severed hand is very poor, not only because of the deliberate arrangement of the severed hand (but you are too deliberate, at least be more natural), but also because the plot design of the entire chapter is poor, and the originally whitewashed plot is not easy to write. The key point is that this plot is caused by a future pig teammate (this person joins the gang instantly). Don't I want to ask the protagonist that he doesn't have any temper? My house was bombed to the ground, I guess I can't stand it. After it's over, I have to ask the protagonist to help me apologize and wipe my butt. I have stacked so many debuffs. If this can be written well and not cause resentment, you are this [like] Author, why don't you please change this chapter when you have time? Later people may be poisoned when they see this chapter.

The broken hand part is still too sudden, it would be nice if it could be smoother. It doesn't matter if I switch to a newbie. I wish I could play the ring myself with super bionics and a bunch of chips.

Very nice book. Leave a comment. Hey hey, Capas and Casper are often confused, no big problem

It's the first time I've seen Qiluo's start. Although it's not absolutely invincible, it's very good-looking. They are all good cats, very good-looking [already planted] [like]

The content described in this novel shows how a kind-hearted extraordinary intelligence leads cats and cats to live, including cruel battles and gentle daily life. In short, come to read the World of the World novel!

It can be seen that it is not an AI. Every few pages I write the wrong name, but the writing is quite beautiful.

Fighting is fun. The book I'm currently following is Fringe World. It develops slowly, but its technology is ridiculous, so it develops very quickly. The book's initial hooks are also ridiculous. The body is sanctified, but the plot is very attractive. The most important thing is that the beast-eared girl is invincible!

I found a good edge world novel, my mood +10