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The ideal life of a succubus in another world is to eat a bowl of green tea while standing up. You can "eat it" anytime and anywhere. It would be better if you can tease and burn it a little more.

I have finished reading it for the time being. The writing is quite good, but the characterization is so delicate that it doesn't look like an online novel. It has a bit of the character design of an ancient novel. The character who laughs at the poor but not at the prostitute should correspond to this type of character. It's just that the characters were portrayed so clearly too early and I don't know how they will grow later. If you just look at the plot alone, it should be worth looking forward to. As long as you don't commit the literary youth disease of stuffing knives with your hands, a road story like "Hao Gong Hao Hao" will probably develop relatively smoothly. But looking at the current situation, the protagonist's character is the kind of person whose one encounter can ruin a person's outlook on mate selection for a lifetime. He is too considerate.

Just to be extravagant, I guess you probably know me. The article is very detailed, and it is a story that I wanted to write but failed to write. It avoided a lot of problems with my book, and of course, you didn't forget to complain about me. Some suggestions, you can ignore them. 1. The "breaking" type is new to most readers, and it talks about being exciting, but in fact it is easy to come and go, so the follow-up and completion of reading will be very low. So look for solutions elsewhere. 2. There is something wrong with the title and cover of your book. The title and cover of the book are too similar to "light novels with little water content" and do not match your actual audience. You can't change the title of the book, but you can change the cover (if you can, you have to tell the audience what type you are, otherwise many people will come in and leave with different expectations) (for the cover, I recommend you directly use Tomato to generate the image, don't look at my one, there was something wrong with my cover, I changed it a long time ago, but the result is still the garbage cover from the reader's perspective) ps. The book is really good and detailed. Come on! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

A very true book that made me understand a lot clearly

Can you make the protagonist a little more intense [laughing]

It's okay. Will the author make a side story by then? Rand is a man with a lot of talent. Hmm, can you do a sideshow? Then talk about this kind of thing. Well, Rowling will also talk about it. With her strength, she should become a master, right?

Is Liana a good girl? Hehe

It's beautiful and very real, but I always want to see the protagonist become a good person [get it]

This book is very pure, and so is the protagonist

There's a lot of truth, and the plot isn't bad either.

The heroine's name should be changed to Liu Ruyan🤓

High-ranking women are so scary [Petrified]

It's quite good, but there are few updates. Every time I read a chapter, I waste a tissue. I am Li Bai. This is an old poem.

Come on come on come on come on

The writing is quite good, but I would like to ask what the protagonist looks like. I don't seem to see any description of the protagonist's appearance (os: If I haven't seen it, please tell me) Oh, Lianna, you are really doing all kinds of bad things [learned]

He's actually a real guy

Come on, let me see the group battle [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

Make a wish and become the protagonist

The author is powerful and would like to be called the strongest in this regard

Bad women are addictive

Finally a succubus who looks like a succubus

After reading a few chapters, although the setting is explosive, the plot is relatively bland and daily.

It's uncomfortable, it doesn't work every time