The Last Glow of the World Has Yet to Fade

The writing style is natural and the writing is smooth. The storyline has ups and downs, and the description of the dungeon can be more detailed and comprehensive, and some supporting characters can be added to explore the perspectives. The first small dungeon has just ended and the world view has just been laid out. The next two or three dungeons should be even better. Come on, author!

Good. . .

Simple and clear, the writing is rich, the plot is connected, and it has an immersive feeling!