Master, I Don't Want It. I'm the Disciple You Raised.

A good book with great potential To put it simply, I personally think that the current advantages and disadvantages are as follows: 1. The portrayal of the male protagonist Jun Tian is a bit lacking. He lacks the charming qualities that readers can get. He lacks his own highlight plot and is a bit flat. 2. It lacks some attractive conflicts and is a bit bland, but it has that anti-routine feeling. The pace of the plot is a bit slow, but the author also marked the daily routine in the early stage, which is acceptable. 3. The setting is interesting, there are many foreshadowings and foreshadowings, some plots have unexpected developments, but now there is less content, and I feel that the current plot rhythm cannot keep up with the foreshadowings. 4. Well, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is a bit lacking. Nowadays, the interaction between the two lacks sweetness and refreshing feeling. The description is slightly insufficient and it is relatively repetitive. That's probably all for now. I'll put it on my bookshelf and wait for the author to update it a lot. (More than 30,000 years old and teenagers, how much voltage do you want? Quickly select, I will really shock you, the author is great (▼ plate ▼#) )

Author, please keep updating, it's so beautiful [Admiration] I would like to make a few comments: 1. I hope that we must continue to have a single heroine. The protagonist will not be ambiguous with others. The protagonist and the heroine must always be together and talk [shy] (the most important thing) 2. I hope there will be no big sword [crying][crying][crying] in the whole text. The protagonist and the master should not be separated by life and death. It is best not to be separated. 3. Write more sweets and daily life. Everyone likes to see the sweet daily life of the protagonist and the master [Adoration][Adoration] 4. Please update more, I will keep reading [shy][shy][shy] Finally, I wish the author good luck and update well [laughing][laughing]

Please comment, please [cry] I have watched it several times, but I always feel that it lacks the feeling of pleasure and stealing [Thoughts]

I just read some of the chapters. It is a very good article about cultivating immortals. I would like to give it a five-star review! Then slowly look at [shy]👀

There is a single heroine. The beautiful master likes his little apprentice. It feels like a very bland daily narrative. I can't feel what the main plot is. Daily practice is the main focus. There is nothing poisonous about it.

Because I want to change my taste, this is my second book, so it feels good.

It's pretty good among master-disciple stories. It's more everyday, quite calm. The male and female protagonists are both local, and there's no time travel. It's bland, but too little [smile]

Okay, okay, author, please keep updating [Like]

A masterpiece written by a high school classmate [Adoration]

It's rare to see a single female protagonist who is a disciple, long live pure love.

More sweet articles soon [punch out]

Is there a knife in the back? If there is a knife, I won't watch it [Thinking]

I hope there will be a single female protagonist in the future

I won't say anything anymore. The author himself said how many volts are needed. He is over 30,000 years old and a teenager. How long does it take to prepare for electricity?

Good looking, love to watch, more updates [sending heartfelt wishes]

More sugar, more sugar

The protagonist is the young body of Great Master?

So far, the look and feel is okay. I think most readers are attracted by the title [face covering]

Looks good, looking forward to the follow-up foreshadowing recycling