Born Frail? No, I’m a World Champion!

It's beautiful and well written. I have a few suggestions. I hope the heroine will be independent and beautiful without cp.

I feel like the writing is getting better and better. There was a slap-in-the-face plot at the beginning but it didn't last very long. It didn't drag on and I wouldn't be very irritated while watching it. Later, when I saw someone in the team didn't like the heroine, I was afraid to write it as a female protagonist again, but luckily people are complicated, so I didn't write it as a female protagonist. I misunderstood the heroine at first and then became her partner. There were some who questioned the heroine later on, but the plot was all brushed off, which was good. The heroine also moved forward step by step, slowly making progress. After writing, I felt that the author was getting better. The author is afraid that the book will be boring and hesitant to write CP, but the author himself prefers no CP, but there may be extra chapters. This is better. I just want to read competitive stories. If I want to read romance stories, I can look for romance stories or romance stories. For this kind of competitive stories, I still want to read non-CP stories. In fact, I don't even want extra stories.

It's good, I just hope the author can clarify whether this book has cp or not. I really like reading competitive articles. I hope the author can decide. After all, some people like to have male protagonists and some like no cp. If it is decided, I can choose it earlier 😂 Although the team doctor appears rarely, the description every time he comes out is very similar to the male protagonist in a romance... Those who like no cp are really afraid of this.

It's very interesting to watch. The training and competition results are improved and the body is repaired. The progress is very fast. My mother loves the heroine very much. The heroine has a good attitude and the coaches are also good coaches. There is no very evil villain who looks down on the protagonist. Currently, there are two friends who are making progress together, and there is no mischief. There are just too few chapters, and I want to read them and save them. And it won't have CP in the main text, which is better. I hope the main text won't be ambiguous or anything like that. It would be better if everything about CP is placed in the extras. Come on, author, I strongly support it

Another good book, bad news is a new trap Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh on" ?? Regarding the male protagonist, the author said that he will not appear in the main text. I like this kind of thing, but don't be so resistant. If you have resources, you must learn to use them. The allocation of male protagonists in female videos is to fill in the gaps for the female protagonist.

I caught up with the latest, so I'll give it five stars first. The book is very interesting, and as long as it doesn't fall apart later, I'll give it ten stars. I am a fan of competitive literature. Before Persimmon existed, I had already subscribed to all Lujiang's sports and e-sports texts with female protagonists. At that time, I read a book called "Sprint Queen". The writing was a little immature, but there were too few articles about sports and competition, so I still enjoyed reading it. Until today I saw this article in Persimmon. It has the same theme as "Dash Queen", but the writing style is more mature and sophisticated, and the quality is higher. I am so happy. Looking forward to the completion! A small wish: the heroine is underage, so I hope there will be no love lines. If so, please wait until the heroine is 18 years old before writing. Thank you.

The first few chapters have a strong AI flavor, but I read that the comments are pretty good. It will indeed be better if you get through it. The main reason is that there are too few articles about this type of non-CP genius athlete system, especially the female protagonist. I love reading it.

Ah, it's the track and field Olympics article on a female channel that I've been looking for. I haven't read it yet. I'll decide whether to change my rating after reading it. The AI flavor is too strong. I have just read two chapters. Both chapters are full of detailed descriptions. The heroine has no emotions at all. She is like a robot. I will read it slowly and read a few more chapters before deciding whether to change the score.

It's a very interesting book about sports and competitive sports. I think it's ranked high on Tomato for the same genre. It's one of the top three novels I've ever read.

It's rare to see a competitive heroine. It's really cool. We girls just have to shine and be ourselves 🥺 and the author writes very rigorously. After reading this book, I learned a lot about the competition. It's hard not to have a bad impression of this rigorous author 🤭 🤭 🤭