Bai Tang, an acting student, binds himself to the [Superstar Looks System].
[Overall rating: 68.3]
[Current ranking: Top three among 100,000 people]
[Mission: Eye training. Unlock passive skill: Killer Gaze (No one can withstand the devastating power of meeting your eyes!)]
[Mission: Vocal training. Unlock passive skill: Voice of Heaven (The moment you speak, everyone will be spellbound!)]
For the rewards, he starts practicing his acting, posture, and line delivery...
Until the System notification appears again.
[Current ranking: Top ten among 10 million people]
He walks into the classroom, and the noisy class falls silent in an instant. Everyone's eyes follow him.
"Gulp."
In the silent classroom, even the sound of someone swallowing is amplified.
The haughty campus beauty's dark eyes seem never to reflect anyone.
But today, Bai Tang sees his own reflection in them, clear as day.
Later on,
his score keeps rising, and his ranking keeps climbing...
He gets more acting offers than he can handle, and his fame grows by the day.
A reporter interviews one of his classmates: "What do you think of Bai Tang? Do you remember what he was like at school?"
His classmate replies, "At 16, he stood there like a nobody. At 18, he descended like a god!"
Although the beginning is slow, the rest is still good, the rhythm and the cool points are all there, but the cool points of the system are not so good. It feels like I am resting on my laurels. The upgrade points are not written out. If this part is written in place, it will feel more fun. The relatives part is a headache to read, don't do these confusing operations to filter readers... The rest is so boring, why do you want to do a romance drama? The traffic is so huge...
It's really good. I feel a little inferior in the front, but it's much better in the back. The boy doesn't need to be submissive. It's really good. But the name is a bit off topic. It feels like I'm forcing myself to hold my head. It's a bit unreasonable. Even if I like it in the back, it's probably because of my appearance. What does it have to do with anything else? Department, my singing skills are still killer, and I am proficient in musical instruments. I hope to improve my personality and charm. Come on, the author, the writing is very good, but there is still room for improvement. I just have ideas and what I want to write, but I don't have enough culture, and I still have some improvement in terms of vocabulary and description.
I came in here to read cool articles 😢 Why do you have to describe emotions so delicately? 😢 I can't stand it anymore 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
It's okay. The advantage is that the protagonist's character is a normal person with good looks added by the system. He has a refreshing outlook on life, and doesn't have the feeling that his morals are inappropriate, nor is he a loser. The shortcomings are not obvious at the moment. I will modify them after seeing the subsequent development.
The plot is okay, and there are no bad points so far. Maybe it's because I've read too many cool articles, so I feel the pace is a bit slow and the writing is immature, but the impression is pretty good.
Okay, okay, the author will give me an update soon, and I will give you five-star praise. It was originally 5 stars, but now the content makes me want to give it two more stars. I started reading it when there were only a dozen chapters, and I have seen more than 220 chapters. I really don't understand what you are writing now 🙂🤮The main plot is so grinding and grinding to death, writing a lot of irrelevant things, and you have to describe all the other people to make a love story, then why don't you just write a love story, it's so boring.
Let me give you a suggestion. I have read more than 130 chapters. Only the brightest star in the night sky can be heard in the song you choose, and the rest can only be heard in fragments. Select more songs with popular aesthetics. Generally, readers who read novels with songs will search and listen to them. In fact, listening to the songs in the article will only produce a strong sense of disparity. If you really don't know how to choose songs, just look at the collection. At least there are millions of collections. I don't say it will definitely meet everyone's taste, but at least it will meet the taste of the public. In the early stage, as a newcomer, if you can't arrange too gorgeously, then you should play emotional cards, such as (My Paper Plane) (Both of Us). In the middle and later stages, you can definitely make gorgeous arrangements like (I Can Only Leave) (Only) (Phoenix) (Hollow).
I think the author is also thinking about whether this book has a female protagonist, but he is not very sure. The author will answer more or less other questions, but the only question is whether there is a female protagonist. He never answers when there is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists.
Update soon, the writing is very good, but I hope that some of his system rewards can be more reasonable by then, such as musical instruments. Don't just get them all at once. Instead, you can show your genius. For example, when you learn an instrument, you can learn it in a short time. Don't be awesome as soon as you get started. It's illogical.
Come on, author, in the first stage of writing a book, you must control the volume, otherwise there will be no traffic. Hurry up and follow.