You Promised to Be a Good Sister, Why Did You Lock Me Up?

OK, I'm here to comment. I wrote this book to my heart, and it may contain some spoilers. For example, the heroine's anti-detection ability is still not good. From the second heroine coming out of the ninth district, you can know that he is not a simple person. Even if he climbed up from there, he is at least good at acting. Not to mention the news that the second heroine must be at the top of the food chain. There's nothing else about it. My sister's acting skills are pretty good, she's a typical yandere. If you like to watch Counterattack at the end of the year, you can give it a try. It's this kind of acting type, and it's a real or fake daughter. It's very good to watch, but there are a little few people. I don't know why. In fact, I personally feel that the author's writing style is okay, but the description of the younger sister's acting skills and the description of the yandere are awkward, and the plot can have some twists and turns. I haven't finished reading it yet... Anyway, a little twists and turns are always good. Perhaps the only thing that makes people feel weird is that the heroine is malicious to the second heroine one second, and then starts to carelessly dote on the second heroine when she sees the frightened look the next second. This may be a bit strange, but it does not affect the reading experience. [Sending Hearts] It's very beautiful, the author can work hard to make more updates Uh-huh, let me correct what I said before. The twists and turns are quite ups and downs, the kidnapping and drugging are quite exciting, and the author also responds to fans' requests. Very amazing [laughs]

Zhongji Acting: I can still steam... No, I can't hold her down anymore

Overall the article is pretty good, the characters and plot are acceptable. Regarding the characterization, the younger sister's portrayal is actually quite good, and the contrast is quite large. The design is very good, but the portrayal of the older sister is actually not that good. The fear and "threatening language" deliberately described when facing the younger sister's threat are actually somewhat uncomfortable. How can I put it, it just doesn't feel in line with how normal people behave when they are afraid, because people should subconsciously resist when they are afraid, and Rather than always using "verbal threats", "verbal threats" are the lowest and earliest step of resistance. After that, there should be physical resistance, fierce verbal resistance, emotional fluctuation resistance, etc., Rather than simply describing fearful expressions and language, such as not daring to look at the sister, stuttering, etc. The description is too simple and it is difficult to highlight the psychology of the characters at that time. This is a lack of character description and situation description. (There are still some shortcomings in character description, such as lack of detailed descriptions, side descriptions, etc.) Let's talk about the plot arrangement. In fact, the plot arrangement is very reasonable, but the overall progress rhythm is not particularly comfortable. (Maybe it's because the author hopes to listen to readers' opinions, but I think writing a novel must first have his own ideas, and he doesn't have to completely follow the readers' ideas. Before referring to our opinions, the author must first have a rough idea of the plot we may want to see in the future.) This is actually difficult to explain in detail, but the overall feeling is that the front does not fully pave the way for the following, so I can't say that the arrangement of the plot is unreasonable. I can only say that it is lacking but not very obvious shortcomings. At the end of the writing, this book still has a lot of room for improvement, and I also look forward to the author writing better.

Hao Kan Hao Kan Hao Kan😋😋😋

It would be better if there were pictures of the two of them. I want to see Wan Ning's eyes and Wan Wan's gentle look.

Okay, okay, this novel is also very delicious. Did they know each other before?

Beautiful, so beautiful

Okay, I hope you stick to it

Very nice. Love watching. So beautiful.