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After obtaining the memory of another dead self in the parallel world, Valon awakened.
He got the "script" called memory and the "pen" of the system.
The Holy Lord is resurrected! The Holy Lord betrayed! The Holy Lord... Was killed?
Vallon: "There is no need for another boss on top of the boss."
In charge of the most powerful boss system in the world, the only subordinates who can be bound at the beginning are the precious trio of the Black Hand Gang.
But unexpectedly, he discovered that these three guys, Rasu Afen and Zhou, actually had merits.
Ever since, the iron-forged trio, the iron-forged Valon.
Since then, a legend called the Black Hand has spread throughout the world.
Vallon: "Three idiots!"
Ah Fen: "The boss is right!"
Zhou: "Ah Fen is right!"
Rasu: "Me too!"
All in all, Black Hand Gang, assemble! ! !
PS: Fans would like to apologize to the second creation, everything is based on the original!
Reader comments
The black tiger rips out the heart, the black tiger flies over the vulture, the black tiger preys on the trapped lamb, one tiger kills two sheep, the tiger eats pudding with its claws, the tiger lands on the eagle's back, the crow flies on the plane, the angry crow takes off, the flying eagle spreads its wings, the flying eagle strikes the shadow, the falcon spreads its wings, the falcon lands on the ground , the lion prays to the sky, the cheetah gallops, the hungry wolf advances, the jackal hunts the rabbit, the sleeping bear wakes up, the bear paws, the orangutan breaks the branch, the rabbit punches, the mule kicks, the elephant kicks, the flying elephant steps on the mouse, the kangaroo jumps, the antelope leaps, the gazelle Leap, Ponytail Goshawk, Ponytail Swatter, Whale's Tail Wag, Angry Octopus, Small Fish Swimming, Lobster Claw, Cobra, Snake Step, Scorpion Paw, Turtle Punch, Sloth Kick, Rat Walking in the Ditch, Rat Walking astray Palace, mice steal cheese, sharks eat bait, buffalo fights mice, marmots throw weasels, herring kills, monkeys perform kung fu, stubborn monkeys magical kung fu, mantis fist, mantis god kung fu, cunning rabbit attacks, Mount Tai presses the top, two dragons play with pearls, lotus floats , Mountain Splitting Palm, Giant Ax to Cut Down Trees, Sickle to Sweep the Ground, Sickle to Goug the Ground, Melon Fist, Thunder Fist, Earthquake Fist, Asteroid Belt, Meteor Hit the Mountain, Super Planet Burning, Meteor Destruction, Spiral Scroll, Sweeping Kick, Hurricane Kick, Tiger Fighting Pose, Double Wind Pierced Ears, Eagle Claw Kung Fu, Flying Dragon in the Sky, Dragon Gripping Hands, Long Arms in the Sky, Flamenco Dance Steps, Flying Hammer, Cat Landing, Cat Shaking Water, Cat Turning, Flying Crane Catching Shrimps, Head Smashing Walnuts, Electric Eyes, Oysters shell, phoenix flying to the moon, tyrannosaurus flying, pterosaurs snatching cattle, volcano erupting, volcano burning farm, tornado destroying parking lot, caught jumping, spider eating fly, running rhinoceros, wheel hamster, wind blowing in the ears, me Become a lame goose, donkey kick, shadow run, shadow strangle, fangs of night, ghost impact, dark mist, shadow punch, black claw, night falcon dive, shadow lock, sty river collision, flying monkey clever treasure box
The writing is very good. The fact that Valon is not a modern time traveler but an original time traveler sets the tone within the world view and is not too outrageous. The American humor in the dialogue between the characters in Jackie Chan's Adventures is just right.
It's really good and very, very worth watching.
There are no annoying clichéd plots, and there are no deliberate "slobbers" to portray the image. It is very reasonable and fits the character. I like it very much. It's gold.
Oh! "Elders Never Lie" is also written by the author. They are very good, very good [Like][Like][Like]
(Chew Chew Chew) Very good, very perfect. It is a very good fanfic of Walon in The Adventures of Jackie Chan. This Walon is the real boss [Like]. The level is a large cup. If it were not for the slow update of two chapters a day, this would be a super large cup. In short, it is highly recommended to watch (Chew Chew Chew) 😋
It's so beautiful, the characters are all very realistic, and the writing is very powerful. But the author has too few updates, so I finished it in one go. There are too few updates, and it's easy for everyone to read the book if they can't get enough of it. It's also difficult to give a rating. It is recommended to update three or four times a day.
Five-star food, the author writes about Boss Walong's temperament, and his behavior is very well-organized, which is very enjoyable. I almost want to be Boss Walong's younger brother [face covering]. Boss Walong, Ah Fen, Zhou, and La Su have a high degree of trust in each other. Even if he confessed the secret that he had obtained the memory of another world and could travel to another world, the brothers still chose to follow him unconditionally. The writing was very good and was not estranged or inconsistent at all.
The rhythm is very comfortable and the laughs are dense, so I give it five stars.
Very good. Keep it up. This book is the best one I have read among Jackie Chan's adventures.
The writing is quite good, but there are too many sensational parts.
Objectively speaking, the content of the book is quite good. From the perspective of fan fiction, there is no character breakdown. However, the process does not develop quickly enough. There are too many descriptions of inner thoughts and shocks. There are only two updates per day, resulting in a slow development of the story. Every time you enter a new world, you have to waste a lot of pen and ink to write about other people's reactions. It is not very friendly for follow-up, but it will be smoother when you read it after one or two hundred chapters.
It's far north. Why can I write two pages of a conversation when I enter the office, half aura and half psychological description? The soul egg must be detailed and proper. The previous books actually had this problem, but when I read it, it was 200 chapters long and it wasn't so obvious. Now that I see the story development speed is really ridiculously slow, I suggest you keep reading.
The theme of the novel is very good. I have wanted to read a novel with him as the protagonist for a long time, but I can't find it. Now it is available. The author please don't stop updating it.
Valon is indeed one of the most charismatic villains in my opinion [laughing]
This book is really good. I personally feel it is better than the Cursed Blue book. I hope the author will work harder and look forward to the next article.
It turned out to be the author of the book Curse Blue. I said it was so well written.
The five stars will not be included in the rating until the rating comes out (if I remember correctly), and the five stars will be changed after the rating comes out [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Please update me quickly, Kouya! ! !
It's very cool. The main thing is their brotherhood. The boss is loyal to his subordinates, and the subordinates are loyal to the boss. Then it's normal, you know [face covering]. There are funny parts, but it doesn't break away from the logic of his world. Now, I have entered a new world. In Jackie Chan's world, I think the logic is quite self-consistent. What is very funny is that after he finished what he wanted to do, he patted his butt and left, and changed to another world. It was so cool.
Well, I hope that there will be some more familiar worlds in the follow-up world, whether it is a magical world or any other world, something that is familiar to the public, because I haven't seen the New World, and I have to go to Douyin to find clips to preview [face covering]
A friend recommended me to read this book, and I came here because of its reputation. I originally thought that the characters in the author's writing might be different from the original work, but now that I see it, there are no bad points, and it is highly consistent with the characters in the original work. It's like reading the extra. The Adventures of Jackie Chan in Tomato is a good book.
The author turns out to be you
He is simply superman
The beginning is considered complete, maintaining the original flavor of the author. Looking forward to future updates
It is indeed much better than other Jackie Chan Adventures fics in Tomato. The author's last book was very good. I hope this book will continue to be great.
The author, the elder, is the first and only one of the three adventures I have read. When I first started reading this book, I thought it was rare to encounter a book with the same high quality as the elder. When I looked at the author's name, it turned out to be you. Big brother, I will always support you!
Super urgent magazine, Wallon's life speed. Change the name of the proposal to something nicer. This name is too common. Change it to "One Hundred Contingency Plans for Time Travel, Big Brother Valon Teaches You How to Speed Through Life" [laughs]
It's unexpectedly good. It's not a time travel, but it's a local. The fact that it's not a time travel, but a local is particularly good. Before those women come over to kowtow to Nantong, and the atmosphere in the comment area is still normal, this is one of the few, extremely rare novels without mushrooms. The descriptions are very graphic. I hope I can keep writing.
I feel like it's a well-written novel.
Although the protagonist chosen is Valon, the image created in the original work is a bit too strong. But it was well compensated in terms of subsequent plot development.
That's about it. I think the novel is quite good and has no obvious shortcomings.
It looks good, but still tastes the same
It's so perfect, I hope it stays
For me, I like articles that are sure to win without setbacks and experience life. Peace of mind and peace of mind. Plus, elders are great
It's great, the taste is familiar and the characters fit perfectly. Do you know why it's only about six o'clock? [I understand] [Attention] Because there are too few, so I'll update it quickly [please update]
Written by an experienced author, guaranteed [Like]
It's so embarrassing bro, looking forward to the update
The black tiger rips out the heart, the black tiger flies over the vulture, the black tiger preys on the trapped lamb, one tiger kills two sheep, the tiger eats pudding with its claws, the tiger lands on the eagle's back, the crow flies on the plane, the angry crow takes off, the flying eagle spreads its wings, the flying eagle strikes the shadow, the falcon spreads its wings, the falcon lands on the ground , the lion prays to the sky, the cheetah gallops, the hungry wolf advances, the jackal hunts the rabbit, the sleeping bear wakes up, the bear paws, the orangutan breaks the branch, the rabbit punches, the mule kicks, the elephant kicks, the flying elephant steps on the mouse, the kangaroo jumps, the antelope leaps, the gazelle Leap, Ponytail Goshawk, Ponytail Swatter, Whale's Tail Wag, Angry Octopus, Small Fish Swimming, Lobster Claw, Cobra, Snake Step, Scorpion Paw, Turtle Punch, Sloth Kick, Rat Walking in the Ditch, Rat Walking astray Palace, mice steal cheese, sharks eat bait, buffalo fights mice, marmots throw weasels, herring kills, monkeys perform kung fu, stubborn monkeys magical kung fu, mantis fist, mantis god kung fu, cunning rabbit attacks, Mount Tai presses the top, two dragons play with pearls, lotus floats , Mountain Splitting Palm, Giant Ax to Cut Down Trees, Sickle to Sweep the Ground, Sickle to Goug the Ground, Melon Fist, Thunder Fist, Earthquake Fist, Asteroid Belt, Meteor Hit the Mountain, Super Planet Burning, Meteor Destruction, Spiral Scroll, Sweeping Kick, Hurricane Kick, Tiger Fighting Pose, Double Wind Pierced Ears, Eagle Claw Kung Fu, Flying Dragon in the Sky, Dragon Gripping Hands, Long Arms in the Sky, Flamenco Dance Steps, Flying Hammer, Cat Landing, Cat Shaking Water, Cat Turning, Flying Crane Catching Shrimps, Head Smashing Walnuts, Electric Eyes, Oysters shell, phoenix flying to the moon, tyrannosaurus flying, pterosaurs snatching cattle, volcano erupting, volcano burning farm, tornado destroying parking lot, caught jumping, spider eating fly, running rhinoceros, wheel hamster, wind blowing in the ears, me Become a lame goose, donkey kick, shadow run, shadow strangle, fangs of night, ghost impact, dark mist, shadow punch, black claw, night falcon dive, shadow lock, sty river collision, flying monkey clever treasure box
The writing is very good. The fact that Valon is not a modern time traveler but an original time traveler sets the tone within the world view and is not too outrageous. The American humor in the dialogue between the characters in Jackie Chan's Adventures is just right.
It's really good and very, very worth watching. There are no annoying clichéd plots, and there are no deliberate "slobbers" to portray the image. It is very reasonable and fits the character. I like it very much. It's gold. Oh! "Elders Never Lie" is also written by the author. They are very good, very good [Like][Like][Like]
(Chew Chew Chew) Very good, very perfect. It is a very good fanfic of Walon in The Adventures of Jackie Chan. This Walon is the real boss [Like]. The level is a large cup. If it were not for the slow update of two chapters a day, this would be a super large cup. In short, it is highly recommended to watch (Chew Chew Chew) 😋
It's so beautiful, the characters are all very realistic, and the writing is very powerful. But the author has too few updates, so I finished it in one go. There are too few updates, and it's easy for everyone to read the book if they can't get enough of it. It's also difficult to give a rating. It is recommended to update three or four times a day.
Five-star food, the author writes about Boss Walong's temperament, and his behavior is very well-organized, which is very enjoyable. I almost want to be Boss Walong's younger brother [face covering]. Boss Walong, Ah Fen, Zhou, and La Su have a high degree of trust in each other. Even if he confessed the secret that he had obtained the memory of another world and could travel to another world, the brothers still chose to follow him unconditionally. The writing was very good and was not estranged or inconsistent at all. The rhythm is very comfortable and the laughs are dense, so I give it five stars.
Very good. Keep it up. This book is the best one I have read among Jackie Chan's adventures.
The writing is quite good, but there are too many sensational parts.
Objectively speaking, the content of the book is quite good. From the perspective of fan fiction, there is no character breakdown. However, the process does not develop quickly enough. There are too many descriptions of inner thoughts and shocks. There are only two updates per day, resulting in a slow development of the story. Every time you enter a new world, you have to waste a lot of pen and ink to write about other people's reactions. It is not very friendly for follow-up, but it will be smoother when you read it after one or two hundred chapters. It's far north. Why can I write two pages of a conversation when I enter the office, half aura and half psychological description? The soul egg must be detailed and proper. The previous books actually had this problem, but when I read it, it was 200 chapters long and it wasn't so obvious. Now that I see the story development speed is really ridiculously slow, I suggest you keep reading.
The theme of the novel is very good. I have wanted to read a novel with him as the protagonist for a long time, but I can't find it. Now it is available. The author please don't stop updating it.
Valon is indeed one of the most charismatic villains in my opinion [laughing]
This book is really good. I personally feel it is better than the Cursed Blue book. I hope the author will work harder and look forward to the next article.
It turned out to be the author of the book Curse Blue. I said it was so well written. The five stars will not be included in the rating until the rating comes out (if I remember correctly), and the five stars will be changed after the rating comes out [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Please update me quickly, Kouya! ! !
It's very cool. The main thing is their brotherhood. The boss is loyal to his subordinates, and the subordinates are loyal to the boss. Then it's normal, you know [face covering]. There are funny parts, but it doesn't break away from the logic of his world. Now, I have entered a new world. In Jackie Chan's world, I think the logic is quite self-consistent. What is very funny is that after he finished what he wanted to do, he patted his butt and left, and changed to another world. It was so cool. Well, I hope that there will be some more familiar worlds in the follow-up world, whether it is a magical world or any other world, something that is familiar to the public, because I haven't seen the New World, and I have to go to Douyin to find clips to preview [face covering]
A friend recommended me to read this book, and I came here because of its reputation. I originally thought that the characters in the author's writing might be different from the original work, but now that I see it, there are no bad points, and it is highly consistent with the characters in the original work. It's like reading the extra. The Adventures of Jackie Chan in Tomato is a good book.
The author turns out to be you
He is simply superman
The beginning is considered complete, maintaining the original flavor of the author. Looking forward to future updates
It is indeed much better than other Jackie Chan Adventures fics in Tomato. The author's last book was very good. I hope this book will continue to be great.
The author, the elder, is the first and only one of the three adventures I have read. When I first started reading this book, I thought it was rare to encounter a book with the same high quality as the elder. When I looked at the author's name, it turned out to be you. Big brother, I will always support you!
Super urgent magazine, Wallon's life speed. Change the name of the proposal to something nicer. This name is too common. Change it to "One Hundred Contingency Plans for Time Travel, Big Brother Valon Teaches You How to Speed Through Life" [laughs]
It's unexpectedly good. It's not a time travel, but it's a local. The fact that it's not a time travel, but a local is particularly good. Before those women come over to kowtow to Nantong, and the atmosphere in the comment area is still normal, this is one of the few, extremely rare novels without mushrooms. The descriptions are very graphic. I hope I can keep writing.
I feel like it's a well-written novel. Although the protagonist chosen is Valon, the image created in the original work is a bit too strong. But it was well compensated in terms of subsequent plot development. That's about it. I think the novel is quite good and has no obvious shortcomings.
It looks good, but still tastes the same
It's so perfect, I hope it stays
For me, I like articles that are sure to win without setbacks and experience life. Peace of mind and peace of mind. Plus, elders are great
It's great, the taste is familiar and the characters fit perfectly. Do you know why it's only about six o'clock? [I understand] [Attention] Because there are too few, so I'll update it quickly [please update]
Written by an experienced author, guaranteed [Like]
It's so embarrassing bro, looking forward to the update
Nice! ! Looking forward to the next plot