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The author must have read Qidian Zhenjun, and so far, there are basically traces of this book. My advice to the author is: 1. You can learn from it, but don't be too similar to this book. 2. The combat power system must not be borrowed from Zhenjun Huiyuan. Later, his combat power will directly reach another level, and then I will give up the book. 3. The creation of the protagonist can be more lively, too human-machine, and the world view of the book "Under One Man", the growth and development of ordinary people is in line with reality, so even if the protagonist has memories of past lives, it should be more or less affected by body hormones (especially between the ages of zero and ten. Anyway, the protagonist I watched is a human-computer, and I don't see how many mood swings there are. This kind of shaping is not possible) After reading so far, I have thought of the above suggestions. If other suggestions come to mind, I will put them under this comment.

The writing is good, but the slowness is a small problem. I am afraid that some people will not be able to bear it. The description is also very good. I have the meaning of description in my mind, but there is no way to describe it. I can only say that 1000 people have 1000 Harry Potters. But for me, this novel is at least low-quality. You can regard its slowness as an exercise for you. You will feel very good when your sex calms down. [Sentiment]

At the beginning, it looks similar to Zhenjun Huiyuan at a certain point. It's just a practice of three filthy qi One practices Five Elements Gu

The idea is good and the idea is interesting. The art of voodoo is just a heretic among people. Coupled with the negative influence of the Yaoxian Society and the stereotypes of fandom and the main plot, it is indeed rare to write something new on voodoo. However, nine out of ten the wording in the article is wrong. If you say it is AI, there are many typos and inconsistencies. If you say it is handwritten, the wording and sentences have a human-machine flavor. If I want to rate it, I personally feel that around 8.0 Is pretty good.

It's okay [laughs] But the dialogue was too Al-flavored, which made me laugh. Other than that, the idea is still okay. Let's see later.

Play with the one next door💩, the plot is the same, very different [what]

Cai, when I saw 30 pictures, I began to worry that he only had 60. I took a look at chapter 35 and chapter 38. I was not afraid that it was not enough. Indeed, I have read many books and they have been discontinued. I hope you will not discontinue them.

It's very interesting. It was a little dull in the early stage, but it's okay when it comes to writing about training. It just depends on how it goes when it comes to writing the plot.

The author's writing is pretty good. Although it hasn't reached the comic plot yet, I feel it's not bad. I hope he can keep reading [Read carefully]

The beginning was pretty good, but from chapter 30 to 40 it started to feel like it was written by AI.

Colorful! Good writing so far.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Overall, good

Not bad, the writing is quite interesting.

Very good, I can watch it

Relatively slow to heat up. Quite interesting

Okay, follow more.

Feeling pretty good so far

Didn't you say that you only need to learn the Five Treasures Body Protection Technique? Why do you want to learn alchemy again? I haven't mastered the Gu technique yet. Do you have time to practice other things?

It's average. The themes and ideas aren't new. They're bland, which is a good thing.

I think it's okay in humanities. Why do you get such a low score [face covering]

It's beautiful, please don't stop updating.

The writing is great, but it's just not enough to read.

Very nice, five-star praise

The author must not stop updating. It's really good to read and the ideas are so awesome. It's the first time I've seen such an interesting article [crying]

It's worth reading. It's a well-written book.

It's well written. Good luck to the author. I'll give you 5 stars.

Yes, it's quite beautiful. I read it in one sitting. It's well written and has a lot of foreshadowing. If nothing else, it's at least readable and quite novel.

The writing is delicate and deserves five stars. If I update it earlier, it won't be enough [laughing]

The writing is beautiful and the pacing is well controlled, that is. The timeline is a little too slow, which may cause some readers to be lost. Come on, author, I think it's really good.