(Multiple heroines) (There is also a Guda heroine) (1.1, 1.2, 1.3, Etc. Will have certain degree of magic changes)
Watching Li at night, an old player of FGO launched the server. On a night of shipwreck, he wrote an article of 10,000 words and cursed Ye Liangshu. The next day, he was hit by a truck when he went out.
When he opened his eyes again, he was lying in the corridor of Chaldea, and in front of him squatted a girl with short pink hair - Mash Kirilet, alive.
Good news: He traveled back in time with all his memories of the plot. The bad news: The butterfly effect started spinning out of control from the get-go. The explosion was premature. The plot line is shifting. Everything he knew was heading towards the unknown at a speed visible to the naked eye.
What's even more terrible is - what does Alaya think? A candidate whose magic circuit has not been activated, with the second-to-last number, only a piece of compressed biscuit and a sour lemon candy in his pocket. Save humanity? Let's first think about how to survive the first night at Singularity F.
Fortunately, Matthew held his hand. My hands are warm.
"... Okay." He stood up and looked at the burning Fuyuki, "Come and save Renri."
Reader comments
The writing is okay, the writing style and plot are good, but there are two things that could be improved.
First, for us veterans, we know what the author is writing without having to explain the settings, but for some newcomers, it may not be very friendly. The author can consider adding some settings and background explanations. For example, in the previous chapter, Heidi made Mash take a cannon and then stopped. It did not clearly explain what Heidi was thinking, why Fuyuki's singularity appeared, what are the differences, and some of the most basic servant data can also be supplemented.
The second is Guda's problem. He is currently in a weak position, but he should also assign several servants to Guda to use, otherwise it will be a waste of command spells.
The protagonist is a bit human-machine, but that's okay. At the beginning, the protagonist Zero Second accepted the fact of becoming the Master, and started to conquer the singularity quite naturally... As naturally as taking a lighter from a friend.
Come on, author. Don't worry about the intensity. If someone asks the protagonist how the situation is, he points to the person next door to explain the (bad) luck of hell EⅩ. Moderate modifications and enhancements are absolutely fine.
The writing is still very good, keep up the good work
It looks okay, but there are still obvious traces of AI.
So far it looks pretty good
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It's very good, but there are some things that are not mentioned. For example, who is Gudazi's follower, but readers all agree with Matthew. Another point seems to be an early route, promoting the main plot, and accepting the heroine at the same time. That is to say, there may not be a situation where the heroine responds to the call, or the heroine who is very fond of the heroine will turn to the hero [eating melon]
The bomb exploded prematurely. Shouldn't the prisoner be still alive if it didn't enter the frame? Where did the person go?
It's okay, but the author clearly stated that Mashu is the wife, so I can only go so far. The author can go on with blessings.
My favorite muzimi, continue to watch ads to feed you
I don't know whether it is the AI writer who polishes it, or the author who writes the AI polish. Anyway, the traces of AI are a bit obvious (you can get the first clues from the introduction)
It's good to finally have the heroine Guda😇😇
I have read not too many FGO fanfics but not too few. This one gave me a good impression. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
It's very good, better than some FGO fan fiction, come on, come on
It feels pretty good for now. If there are any problems, come back and make changes [Like][Like][Shy]
Don't interrupt updates and don't finish it too quickly.
The author must persevere [Like]
The writing is good, but the writing style is ok but too little. I discovered it too early.
It's good to read, I love to read it, please update more from the author, preferably 100 chapters a day [Sending my heart]
The writing is okay, the writing style and plot are good, but there are two things that could be improved. First, for us veterans, we know what the author is writing without having to explain the settings, but for some newcomers, it may not be very friendly. The author can consider adding some settings and background explanations. For example, in the previous chapter, Heidi made Mash take a cannon and then stopped. It did not clearly explain what Heidi was thinking, why Fuyuki's singularity appeared, what are the differences, and some of the most basic servant data can also be supplemented. The second is Guda's problem. He is currently in a weak position, but he should also assign several servants to Guda to use, otherwise it will be a waste of command spells.
The protagonist is a bit human-machine, but that's okay. At the beginning, the protagonist Zero Second accepted the fact of becoming the Master, and started to conquer the singularity quite naturally... As naturally as taking a lighter from a friend.
Come on, author. Don't worry about the intensity. If someone asks the protagonist how the situation is, he points to the person next door to explain the (bad) luck of hell EⅩ. Moderate modifications and enhancements are absolutely fine.
The writing is still very good, keep up the good work
It looks okay, but there are still obvious traces of AI.
So far it looks pretty good ʕ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʔ•̫͡•ʕ•̫͡•ʔ I've finished reading, please update soon [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]
It's very good, but there are some things that are not mentioned. For example, who is Gudazi's follower, but readers all agree with Matthew. Another point seems to be an early route, promoting the main plot, and accepting the heroine at the same time. That is to say, there may not be a situation where the heroine responds to the call, or the heroine who is very fond of the heroine will turn to the hero [eating melon]
The bomb exploded prematurely. Shouldn't the prisoner be still alive if it didn't enter the frame? Where did the person go?
It's okay, but the author clearly stated that Mashu is the wife, so I can only go so far. The author can go on with blessings.
My favorite muzimi, continue to watch ads to feed you
I don't know whether it is the AI writer who polishes it, or the author who writes the AI polish. Anyway, the traces of AI are a bit obvious (you can get the first clues from the introduction)
It's good to finally have the heroine Guda😇😇
I have read not too many FGO fanfics but not too few. This one gave me a good impression. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
It's very good, better than some FGO fan fiction, come on, come on
It feels pretty good for now. If there are any problems, come back and make changes [Like][Like][Shy]
Don't interrupt updates and don't finish it too quickly.
The author must persevere [Like]
The writing is good, but the writing style is ok but too little. I discovered it too early.
It's good to read, I love to read it, please update more from the author, preferably 100 chapters a day [Sending my heart]