The Whole Saga of Me Being Reborn

One day, the sky was torn apart, and monsters with blue-green faces and fangs flew out. They were monsters who knew nothing but how to eat, and they loved human entrails. In an instant, they devoured everyone in an entire city.

A boy's family was among those they ate. He was born for revenge, and lived for revenge.

But in the end, he still died, just before dawn.

Yet it seemed the heavens sensed his unwillingness to give up and gave him another chance. This time, he would protect the people he wanted to protect.

This is the author's first novel. Please forgive me if the writing isn't very good. My writing is at an elementary school level, maybe even worse, so please be understanding.

If you think the story is good, please tell me. If you think it's bad, please go easy on me. Thank you.