I Founded the Underworld, Yet Had to Hide Among the Imperial Guards

I think it still looks good. The first point: Although there are some mistakes and typos, the overall writing is complete and friendly. For example: the time conversion is clearly written in the article so that readers can correspond to real time. Second point: Judging from the existing characters, the protagonist's character is close to the title of the book, and other characters can also be considered distinctive. The third point: As for the current fate of the country Zhou Dynasty, it can effectively draw on the history of Li Longji in the Tang Dynasty of China, and it can also create an impression on the corresponding characters that is suitable for the public, which is great! Finally, I hope that I can write the complete story 🤭

Please be merciful, thank you

Not bad, but a Yin Division cannot only have Yin Shuai, King of Hell, these positions, there should be more positions below, such as Black and White Wuchang, there is more than just one Black Wuchang and one Bai Wuchang, these two are just the biggest, there should be more Hei Wuchang and Bai Wuchang below, they are just ordinary, not Yin Shuai [Chigua]

Okay, it's very good, nothing to complain about. The plot is also quite smooth, and Tomato is a rare masterpiece, with at least a score of 7.5 Or above.

Not bad, I just like to see this kind of power building behind the scenes

Personally, I think it's okay. There are no obvious poisonous points. In the middle of the scene, the protagonist is too weak and has to do some things by himself. The author also writes carefully.

Super beautiful, half behind the scenes

Not bad, suitable for reading in a book-hungry world

It looks good, it looks good, I really like this type of style, don't stop updating it 😘

Not bad, a little problem, but acceptable, 9 points