[Early half-stage] + [Invincible at night]
The undercover cultist at the beginning is actually Jin Yiwei, but secretly he also has another identity - Lord Yin Sifu.
He is a royal guard during the day, and no one in the world knows Master Liu.
Ye is the Lord of Yin Si Mansion, and all the heroes in the world are frightened by the news.
"What do you say is true and what is false?"
"This scene is fake, but the people in the scene are real?"
"Is this your confidence?"
"Little god on earth? Are you provoking the majesty of the underworld?"
Reader comments
I think it still looks good. The first point: Although there are some mistakes and typos, the overall writing is complete and friendly. For example: the time conversion is clearly written in the article so that readers can correspond to real time. Second point: Judging from the existing characters, the protagonist's character is close to the title of the book, and other characters can also be considered distinctive. The third point: As for the current fate of the country Zhou Dynasty, it can effectively draw on the history of Li Longji in the Tang Dynasty of China, and it can also create an impression on the corresponding characters that is suitable for the public, which is great!
Finally, I hope that I can write the complete story [laughing]
Not bad, but a Yin Division cannot only have Yin Shuai, King of Hell, these positions, there should be more positions below, such as Black and White Wuchang, there is more than just one Black Wuchang and one Bai Wuchang, these two are just the biggest, there should be more Hei Wuchang and Bai Wuchang below, they are just ordinary, not Yin Shuai [Chigua]
Please be merciful, thank you
Okay, it's very good, nothing to complain about.
The plot is also quite smooth, and Tomato is a rare masterpiece, with at least a score of 7.5 Or above.
Not bad, I just like to see this kind of power building behind the scenes
Not bad, suitable for reading in a book-hungry world
Super beautiful, half behind the scenes
Personally, I think it's okay. There are no obvious poisonous points. In the middle of the scene, the protagonist is too weak and has to do some things by himself. The author also writes carefully.
It's a very good book, with a different perspective.
Okay. The book is of good quality. Don't let it get cold.
There are basically no poisonous points, it is relatively logical, and it does not make a certain setting appear too abrupt. It is worth a look.
I think it still looks good. The first point: Although there are some mistakes and typos, the overall writing is complete and friendly. For example: the time conversion is clearly written in the article so that readers can correspond to real time. Second point: Judging from the existing characters, the protagonist's character is close to the title of the book, and other characters can also be considered distinctive. The third point: As for the current fate of the country Zhou Dynasty, it can effectively draw on the history of Li Longji in the Tang Dynasty of China, and it can also create an impression on the corresponding characters that is suitable for the public, which is great! Finally, I hope that I can write the complete story [laughing]
Not bad, but a Yin Division cannot only have Yin Shuai, King of Hell, these positions, there should be more positions below, such as Black and White Wuchang, there is more than just one Black Wuchang and one Bai Wuchang, these two are just the biggest, there should be more Hei Wuchang and Bai Wuchang below, they are just ordinary, not Yin Shuai [Chigua]
Please be merciful, thank you
Okay, it's very good, nothing to complain about. The plot is also quite smooth, and Tomato is a rare masterpiece, with at least a score of 7.5 Or above.
Not bad, I just like to see this kind of power building behind the scenes
Not bad, suitable for reading in a book-hungry world
Super beautiful, half behind the scenes
Personally, I think it's okay. There are no obvious poisonous points. In the middle of the scene, the protagonist is too weak and has to do some things by himself. The author also writes carefully.
It's a very good book, with a different perspective.
Okay. The book is of good quality. Don't let it get cold.
There are basically no poisonous points, it is relatively logical, and it does not make a certain setting appear too abrupt. It is worth a look.