Comprehensive Comic: Little Devil Game World

As the first book I have written, I feel that the main plot, connecting points and character descriptions are very good. Apart from being a little too fast and the description being a bit stiff, I don't think there are any big problems. Next, I want Mrs. Wang to sell melons and boast about herself.>ᗜ<˶: In fact, I feel that my writing style is very good! As for the characters and plots, the descriptions are very beautiful (◍•ᴗ•◍), and the character characteristics of the people who are appearing now are basically clear. There are some confusions but not a big problem😊 And I feel great about myself. A person who has to rack his brains to write an 800-word essay can write so many words. I'm really awesome. •͈ᴗ⁃͈ ✧. In fact, I originally wrote it just for fun, but because I really couldn't find a good variety comic, I decided to produce it myself. I didn't expect anyone to read it, but I was still very happy ૮₍ ྀི∩៸៸៸∩ ྀི₎ა! Finally, let me conclude with: Come on, move forward to a better future! Thanks for watching♡

This is the first book I have written. Actually, I feel pretty good about myself. The writing style is still a bit immature, that is, sometimes the plot is too fast and not coherent, but I feel that the language is pretty good, and the character descriptions are okay, a little stiff. I feel like it was very difficult to compile when I was writing. I just had no inspiration and had a weird feeling, but it should be much better next time I write ^⎚˕⎚^ Finally, come on, old man! Welcome everyone to read (๓´˘`๓)