A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: The Primordial Chaos Pearl

After following it for so long, I feel like I have to leave a review so that no one misses this book. First of all, let me give it a five-star review. After all, I quite like it. Secondly, the author's writing style feels a bit mediocre. He can't make people feel ups and downs, but it just makes me feel sleepy. But it is precisely because of this that I like it, because it can be said that there are almost no poisonous points. What I want to see is a mediocre and happy ending. After all, you have traveled through time and don't fight with the sky. Who will you fight with? The portrayal of the protagonist is much better than many other mortals I have seen. After all, he dares to grab and fight, instead of hugging Han Li's lap and giving various gifts to girls like other works. The protagonist always walks in front of Han Li and dares to compete with Han Li. He will not suffer or sacrifice. This is also the reason why I like this book. At least this is the reason why I pursue this book. After all, the author mostly follows anime, so I really like the female characters in it. At least they are not annoying. Finally, the plot is not boring anymore, but your update is too boring. I want to criticize you on this point, and I also hope that the author can strengthen the character of the protagonist. After all, he is a Nascent Soul in his 130s. What's wrong with me being more high-profile?? Be proud of being a genius😳

Tomato is flooded with AI articles now, so I'll give you five stars😠

Not to mention too much, just highlight some key points of the original work in the plot. This is a good way to add a little bit of the male protagonist's perspective. I also have the concept of gods and demons. I wonder if the mortal world has been deprived of its spiritual consciousness. How can it at least transform into gods? Anyway, this Chaos Bead is too strong. I can imagine it. It was broken into pieces and transformed into 24 Dinghai Pearls. After undergoing several changes, it finally gathered the power of the 24 Worlds and the Qi of Hongmeng (not the Purple Qi) to synthesize the Chaos Pearl. It is a mystery). Acquired/Innate/Chaos/Hongmeng (whether there is merit or not is like a special Hongmeng celestial ruler) If you enter Luohou, you will definitely reach Tiannan, and I will fuck you directly to Wulonghai.

The protagonist's real super nanny Wouldn't you be able to write without Han Li? This request is a pity to throw away the food if it is tasteless, but I still have it, a nanny

I'm speechless even though I know it's a trap but I still want to touch it. Why does this mean that your combat power can't be so high?

The best fanfic I've ever seen about a mortal cultivating immortality is nothing but this. It's just that the number of words is too short. I recommend updating it five times a day 🤔🤔🤔 There are too few updates in one day, or 50,000 words of updates in one day 🤔🤔🤔 It's simply not enough to read.

Very well written!

Come on, author, update soon. I hope to include Mening and Wen Si later.

Okay, it makes up for some regrets

I read two and it was okay, but some long sentences were troublesome and I had to add punctuation marks.