[Power fantasy] [Protagonist: Naruto Uzumaki] [Main world: Naruto] [Secondary world: Frieren's world of magic]
Serie, a great mage who had lived since the age of myth and whose lifespan was all but eternal, decided to establish a magic association.
Before doing so, she met Naruto Uzumaki, a boy from another world, and took him on as her apprentice.
Naruto resolved to reach the pinnacle of magic.
His junior fellow apprentice, Lai Er En, smiled bitterly. “Master never expects anything from us. After all, a human lifespan is no more than a fleeting moment to her.”
Gazing at Serie's solitary figure, Naruto fell silent for the first time.
Serie summoned Naruto before her. “Your recent achievements are worthy of being recorded in the annals of history. I can grant you any one spell you desire.”
Naruto did not hesitate. “I want the spell of immortality.”
Serie raised an eyebrow slightly. “Why?”
Naruto answered candidly. “That way, I can stay by your side forever. From now on, you won't ever have to feel lonely again.”
Many years later.
Naruto, who possessed the Six Paths Power, stood at the pinnacle of magic.
Looking down upon the shinobi world, bound by an endless cycle of hatred, he finally spoke. “Let me destroy this ugly shinobi system!”
I have read Chapter 35 so far. I like the subject matter, but there is a problem with the setting. I didn't read it carefully, but I saw two obvious loopholes. 1. Defensive magic is more about defending against magical attacks (magic damage), and is actually not very effective against mass attacks. Therefore, mass attacks are more popular in modern magic. The animation specifically emphasizes 🤦 2. It was also the case with Duncan's wife before. Chun Ai's wife died before the Magic Association was established. Because her wife was already dead, she did not come to Magic City. Before sweeping the grave, she was only a second-level magician (it is not stated where she took the second-level exam). Although the setting of the fanfic is subject to the setting of the fanfic, it must be explained, otherwise who has not seen it knows whether it is the original setting or a second setting [what] Finally, I would like to ask the author, is the world of Fulian covered in one go and only used as a golden finger, or is it two parallel lines?
The writing is quite good, but why did Naruto become wise instantly after spending three months with Seriai? Naruto and Jiraiya have been training for three years and have become a little more stable. It is only after Jiraiya's death that he really became as smart as written now.
The setting of running between two worlds is actually not new, but the author added his own ideas to it, and the story attracts attention and makes people unable to help but continue reading. The writing style should have been polished with AI, but this does not affect it. It can be seen in each chapter that the author has put his heart into it and his attitude is clear. Come on, I hope it won't collapse later.
The writing is average, but the content is super interesting [laughs], come on Well, the meaning of "general writing style" is not derogatory, but normal writing style [laughs]
Look, the relationship between Naruto and his master is handled very well. The plot switching between the two worlds is also smooth. Looking forward to when Naruto and Fulilian meet
In the follow-up, can Naruto travel to all the worlds? I feel that this Naruto is very good. The world he travels to does not need to be too common such as the sea of death and fire. It would also be good to go to unpopular worlds to gain other knowledge.
Speaking of which, Hinata seems to be the heroine in this book, unlike the previous one without a heroine, so will Xiang Ling and Hikaru have a chance here? 🤔
Okay, it looks pretty, but it's too short.
The writing is fine, but don't use too many women, don't have too many women, don't have too many women!!!!!!!
It's very interesting. I rarely see this kind of book on Kuaishou. I don't know why I haven't rated it yet.