Naruto Became a Disciple of Seriai and Used Magic to Overturn the Ninja World.

The writing is quite good, but why did Naruto become wise instantly after spending three months with Seriai? Naruto and Jiraiya have been training for three years and have become a little more stable. It is only after Jiraiya's death that he really became as smart as written now.

I have read Chapter 35 so far. I like the subject matter, but there is a problem with the setting. I didn't read it carefully, but I saw two obvious loopholes. 1. Defensive magic is more about defending against magical attacks (magic damage), and is actually not very effective against mass attacks. Therefore, mass attacks are more popular in modern magic. The animation specifically emphasizes [face covering] 2. It was also the case with Duncan's wife before. Chun Ai's wife died before the Magic Association was established. Because her wife was already dead, she did not come to Magic City. Before sweeping the grave, she was only a second-level magician (it is not stated where she took the second-level exam). Although the setting of the fanfic is subject to the setting of the fanfic, it must be explained, otherwise who has not seen it knows whether it is the original setting or a second setting [what] Finally, I would like to ask the author, is the world of Fulian covered in one go and only used as a golden finger, or is it two parallel lines?

The writing is average, but the content is super interesting [laughs], come on Well, the meaning of "general writing style" is not derogatory, but normal writing style [laughs]

The setting of running between two worlds is actually not new, but the author added his own ideas to it, and the story attracts attention and makes people unable to help but continue reading. The writing style should have been polished with AI, but this does not affect it. It can be seen in each chapter that the author has put his heart into it and his attitude is clear. Come on, I hope it won't collapse later.

Look, the relationship between Naruto and his master is handled very well. The plot switching between the two worlds is also smooth. Looking forward to when Naruto and Fulilian meet

Speaking of which, Hinata seems to be the heroine in this book, unlike the previous one without a heroine, so will Xiang Ling and Hikaru have a chance here? [Think]

The writing is fine, but don't use too many women, don't have too many women, don't have too many women! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's very interesting. I rarely see this kind of book on Kuaishou. I don't know why I haven't rated it yet.

Wonderful and wonderful. I never knew who Celie was before. After reading this book, I want to make up for it. Thank you to the author.

Not bad, not bad. Don't cut it. Come on, come on.

All in all, this book is to my liking

Very thoughtful, I hope it doesn't end badly

A very creative book, an alternative invincible style, but you can feel Naruto's growth, interesting [like]

The subject matter is very attractive and the content is also good. I hope it will become more and more exciting in the future.[Already planted][Already planted][Already planted]

Great, really beautiful

[Laughing evilly] I misread it. I thought I was going to save Celia and fill it with 70,000 yuan.

Okay, it looks pretty, but it's too short.

Why don't you just take the AI ​​and run away, I'll eat it. I update 10 and 20 chapters in one day [please update]

I beg you, you must keep updating. The author updates too slowly, you damn two-update beast. If you don't hurry up, I'll let you try Konoha's specialties. [Anger]

I've read Chapter 26 so far, and it's quite interesting.

Very nice, don't stop updating

Looks pretty good

Very good, I like it

It's more palatable to everyone. .

Very nice, good luck to the author!

Big cheers for the author

Not bad, looking forward to continuing

It feels okay. It's just that Naruto's mental progress has improved a bit in the past three months after meeting Konoha for the first time. It feels like it's a bug.

When I listen to books, I always feel that the sentence fragmentation is strange. Is it because AI is used?

It's quite good. There are no problems with the plot or setting. It's not a purely mindless novel. I still recommend it.