[RE0 Fan] [No System] [Not the Virgin] [Dual Protagonist] [Fudo Original]
He once used a strange object to travel back in time. When he opened his eyes again, all his old skills were lost and he was left in a mortal body, falling into the capital of Lugnica.
There are unspeakable secrets of death, a foreign boy who is repeatedly pushed back to the starting point by fate, a silver-haired half-elf caught up in the storm of king selection, a white whale swallowing his name in the fog, and a witch cult reaching out from the dark.
Natsuki Subaru can come back after death, but he cannot.
So he can only peel the truth out inch by inch from the fears, lies, scars and people's hearts.
Losing strength is not terrible, but what is terrible is losing the heart to regain the path.
And he never lacks this heart.
[Note: Natsuki Subaru's mentality growth rate has been adjusted]
Reader comments
Let's talk about the pros and cons.
① It is true that no one has written about this track. In fact, Subaru and Genko are two completely opposite protagonists in terms of personality. This difference is naturally the fuel for creating plot conflicts. The author's portrayal of the two protagonists does not overly favor one side.
② It fills in some details that were not described in detail in the original work, especially the political game between the five kings and the Emilia camp, and the impact of White Whale on the destruction of the world. Due to the title of the book, if you have only read one of the original works, 90% of the time it will be re0. With this in mind, this kind of operation of quickly skipping the relevant details that have been described in the original work and describing new things can still gain a lot of points.
③The outline is not too different from the original re0, but many setting details are still slightly different, but the deviation is not big. The author's modifications will not affect the plot development. (Brother Genko has never seen the original work, so I don't know what it is like, but I have seen the title and editing of Daai Xianzun)
④The biggest shortcoming at this stage is that there is nothing wrong with the author's writing style, but from my personal perspective, the description of many plots does not have a sense of picture. To use a photography work as an example, the photos are colorful and gorgeous, but there is no way for people to see the subject at a glance. This feeling is most obvious in the crusade against laziness stage. Often, only by reading carefully can the context be clarified.
To sum up, let's give it a 5 points.
This is the Great Love Immortal. Even if there is no power, the overall view of overall analysis is no different from that of open mind (this brain is really useful). Subaru's growth has become calmer, and the group portraits are well described. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot development.
Overall, it's pretty good. The writing style is quite stylish. It gives a different sense of oppression to Moby Dick and Sloth than the original text. But the author gave me a very strange feeling, as if he had not read the original work carefully. For example, Betty must know Jus. Unlike Emilia, whose memory can be said to be sealed, Betty should be able to recognize him even if he is lazy and crazy. For example, Garfiel and Ram should have known each other for a long time. For example, Emilia must have been unconscious before entering the sanctuary. These are all details. Although it may not affect the look and feel in general, if there are too many details like this, it will look vague and easy to get scolded.
It's okay, but it's a bit difficult to read and it's troublesome to make turns in many places. The male protagonist's character is written more like Genko's. Then there is the fact that the Sanctuary seems to only restrict mixed blood.
When will Genko use dirty tricks? [Sneaky smile] I haven't seen it for a long time. Regardless of whether it is for use or conspiracy, the male protagonist is still mainly analyzing intelligence and finding tricks, and does not engage in a large-scale plan to actively make profits.
There may still be flaws, but among the same type (everyone understands it) it is relatively restored🤓
Mariko was too cold from beginning to end
In fact, Mariko's human flavor was quite strong before she became an immortal in her second life🤔🤔
It's fun to watch, and the plot is not dragging at all [like], but Fang Yuan's rationality makes this novel feel like you can finish it at a glance. I'm very curious about what Fang Yuan will do after he gets eternal life. Will he go back to find his first true love, be with Betty in this world, or will it end immediately? [Eat melon]
Many of Fangyuan's dialogues could actually be softer. He is unlikely to be so sharp when he has no power. In addition, I don't think it would be good if he didn't remove the original partner. If someone like Fangyuan enters the plot, he will definitely change the original plot. Otherwise, it will appear that the author is too deliberate. This is not good. I worry that the author will not remove the original partner and force the plot in the direction of the original. I think it should follow the normal development of the plot and not consider the issue of the original partner in advance.
Fangyuan in this book is more like an AI robot with Fangyuan's memory. His speech is too weird and impersonal. This is indeed the essence of Fangyuan, but he will not deliberately show it in front of others. Now it gives me the feeling that the protagonist deliberately expresses his realistic way of thinking to surprise others. It's really commendable. Seriously
Well, it must be because the number of people is limited, so there aren't that many people.
As one of the few fanfics, I think the writing is very good and the pace is not sluggish. I have read other fanfics before, but Genko replaced 486. The author can forcefully insert a character into the original plot without showing any plot conflict. I think This is very good. I want to know how the book will be developed in the future. After all, 486 and Genko are two extremes. Should we maintain it in this way, or should we seize the opportunity to replace it? 486 Can continue to grow🤔
It's good-looking (♥∀♥) much better than those mindless books. It has strict logic and is written with great feeling. Summary: It's good-looking! ! ! ! !
It looks good, I hope to interact more with Betty [laughs]
God!
Sigh!
The work attached to this bamboo script is a text from heaven, and it has the flavor of ancient Gu books. Catching the words and eating them is not enough to fill the stomach, so the writer quickly adds words to the book!
I also want to ask something, is there any poisonous insect born in the book?
This book needs my five stars, this book deserves my five stars
Brother, do you like my dirty experience in the Gu world, reducing dimensions to attack the circle of gods and humans in other worlds?
The part about Moby Dick is really more oppressive than the original version. It seems like it was written from the perspective of a local in re0.
As expected, the children rated 6 to 8 said that the plot of the masterpiece progressed quite naturally. And there is a plot and story development. It's more interesting than 99% of Tomato's AI-like articles. The author must continue writing. After all, most books read by Tomato nowadays are too boring to be written for entertainment.
When will Fang Yuan have strength?
Well written and restored plot
It fits very well with what the Immortal Lord in my heart would say, so kind.
Why are there only so few people? This is really beautiful
Personally, I feel good. Please support me.
Persist or persevere
. ? . ! ? ! .
Encourage young authors
Not bad👌worth watching
It's okay that the model worker is so cold-blooded and much kinder than the original novel, but it's really rare that there is no plot without Otto.
The degree of [face-covering] in writing Fangyuan fanfics is worse than expected. There are also several Re Fangyuan fanfic series. I strongly recommend the author to read them.
But why did the legendary author Fangyuan backstab Wang Yandao's cultivation base disappear?
It can be said that RE0 has the peak IQ.
Not many characters like Fangyuan can be recreated well, but the writing in this work is very realistic, and the answers to various questions are revealed faster than Conan's father.
By the way, I have also trained the gods of Emilia's camp, and there is no internal friction like the original work that made people black out. I only have the sense of smoothness that I know you want to do this plan, so I have been waiting for it for a long time.
It's just that Fangyuan came up with a bunch of riddles on his own, but the length was too short and it was not enjoyable to read.
(Light spoiler alert) Four stars because I haven't finished watching it yet.
It's so delicious... Master Fang Yuan directly led the 486 speed pass plot, pushing the death return in one second, and revealing the truth and solutions in one episode, so diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent... Ah... My brain is trembling...
Very well written. Never arrange any CP or the like later [to send your heart]
It's well written and well written. It's a fan fiction worth reading.
A top-notch book. I hope the author insists. This is the second best source-free fanfic I have seen.
I'll go, it's pretty cool, because you can see from Fangyuan's various behaviors that he's very intelligent, and he's very comfortable. It's very exciting to watch [angry][angry][angry][angry]
Let's talk about the pros and cons. ① It is true that no one has written about this track. In fact, Subaru and Genko are two completely opposite protagonists in terms of personality. This difference is naturally the fuel for creating plot conflicts. The author's portrayal of the two protagonists does not overly favor one side. ② It fills in some details that were not described in detail in the original work, especially the political game between the five kings and the Emilia camp, and the impact of White Whale on the destruction of the world. Due to the title of the book, if you have only read one of the original works, 90% of the time it will be re0. With this in mind, this kind of operation of quickly skipping the relevant details that have been described in the original work and describing new things can still gain a lot of points. ③The outline is not too different from the original re0, but many setting details are still slightly different, but the deviation is not big. The author's modifications will not affect the plot development. (Brother Genko has never seen the original work, so I don't know what it is like, but I have seen the title and editing of Daai Xianzun) ④The biggest shortcoming at this stage is that there is nothing wrong with the author's writing style, but from my personal perspective, the description of many plots does not have a sense of picture. To use a photography work as an example, the photos are colorful and gorgeous, but there is no way for people to see the subject at a glance. This feeling is most obvious in the crusade against laziness stage. Often, only by reading carefully can the context be clarified. To sum up, let's give it a 5 points.
This is the Great Love Immortal. Even if there is no power, the overall view of overall analysis is no different from that of open mind (this brain is really useful). Subaru's growth has become calmer, and the group portraits are well described. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot development.
Overall, it's pretty good. The writing style is quite stylish. It gives a different sense of oppression to Moby Dick and Sloth than the original text. But the author gave me a very strange feeling, as if he had not read the original work carefully. For example, Betty must know Jus. Unlike Emilia, whose memory can be said to be sealed, Betty should be able to recognize him even if he is lazy and crazy. For example, Garfiel and Ram should have known each other for a long time. For example, Emilia must have been unconscious before entering the sanctuary. These are all details. Although it may not affect the look and feel in general, if there are too many details like this, it will look vague and easy to get scolded.
It's okay, but it's a bit difficult to read and it's troublesome to make turns in many places. The male protagonist's character is written more like Genko's. Then there is the fact that the Sanctuary seems to only restrict mixed blood. When will Genko use dirty tricks? [Sneaky smile] I haven't seen it for a long time. Regardless of whether it is for use or conspiracy, the male protagonist is still mainly analyzing intelligence and finding tricks, and does not engage in a large-scale plan to actively make profits.
There may still be flaws, but among the same type (everyone understands it) it is relatively restored🤓 Mariko was too cold from beginning to end In fact, Mariko's human flavor was quite strong before she became an immortal in her second life🤔🤔
It's fun to watch, and the plot is not dragging at all [like], but Fang Yuan's rationality makes this novel feel like you can finish it at a glance. I'm very curious about what Fang Yuan will do after he gets eternal life. Will he go back to find his first true love, be with Betty in this world, or will it end immediately? [Eat melon]
Many of Fangyuan's dialogues could actually be softer. He is unlikely to be so sharp when he has no power. In addition, I don't think it would be good if he didn't remove the original partner. If someone like Fangyuan enters the plot, he will definitely change the original plot. Otherwise, it will appear that the author is too deliberate. This is not good. I worry that the author will not remove the original partner and force the plot in the direction of the original. I think it should follow the normal development of the plot and not consider the issue of the original partner in advance. Fangyuan in this book is more like an AI robot with Fangyuan's memory. His speech is too weird and impersonal. This is indeed the essence of Fangyuan, but he will not deliberately show it in front of others. Now it gives me the feeling that the protagonist deliberately expresses his realistic way of thinking to surprise others. It's really commendable. Seriously
Well, it must be because the number of people is limited, so there aren't that many people.
As one of the few fanfics, I think the writing is very good and the pace is not sluggish. I have read other fanfics before, but Genko replaced 486. The author can forcefully insert a character into the original plot without showing any plot conflict. I think This is very good. I want to know how the book will be developed in the future. After all, 486 and Genko are two extremes. Should we maintain it in this way, or should we seize the opportunity to replace it? 486 Can continue to grow🤔
It's good-looking (♥∀♥) much better than those mindless books. It has strict logic and is written with great feeling. Summary: It's good-looking! ! ! ! !
It looks good, I hope to interact more with Betty [laughs]
God! Sigh! The work attached to this bamboo script is a text from heaven, and it has the flavor of ancient Gu books. Catching the words and eating them is not enough to fill the stomach, so the writer quickly adds words to the book! I also want to ask something, is there any poisonous insect born in the book?
This book needs my five stars, this book deserves my five stars Brother, do you like my dirty experience in the Gu world, reducing dimensions to attack the circle of gods and humans in other worlds? The part about Moby Dick is really more oppressive than the original version. It seems like it was written from the perspective of a local in re0.
As expected, the children rated 6 to 8 said that the plot of the masterpiece progressed quite naturally. And there is a plot and story development. It's more interesting than 99% of Tomato's AI-like articles. The author must continue writing. After all, most books read by Tomato nowadays are too boring to be written for entertainment.
When will Fang Yuan have strength?
Well written and restored plot
It fits very well with what the Immortal Lord in my heart would say, so kind.
Why are there only so few people? This is really beautiful
Personally, I feel good. Please support me.
Persist or persevere . ? . ! ? ! .
Encourage young authors
Not bad👌worth watching
It's okay that the model worker is so cold-blooded and much kinder than the original novel, but it's really rare that there is no plot without Otto.
The degree of [face-covering] in writing Fangyuan fanfics is worse than expected. There are also several Re Fangyuan fanfic series. I strongly recommend the author to read them. But why did the legendary author Fangyuan backstab Wang Yandao's cultivation base disappear?
It can be said that RE0 has the peak IQ. Not many characters like Fangyuan can be recreated well, but the writing in this work is very realistic, and the answers to various questions are revealed faster than Conan's father. By the way, I have also trained the gods of Emilia's camp, and there is no internal friction like the original work that made people black out. I only have the sense of smoothness that I know you want to do this plan, so I have been waiting for it for a long time. It's just that Fangyuan came up with a bunch of riddles on his own, but the length was too short and it was not enjoyable to read.
(Light spoiler alert) Four stars because I haven't finished watching it yet. It's so delicious... Master Fang Yuan directly led the 486 speed pass plot, pushing the death return in one second, and revealing the truth and solutions in one episode, so diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent, diligent... Ah... My brain is trembling...
Very well written. Never arrange any CP or the like later [to send your heart]
It's well written and well written. It's a fan fiction worth reading.
A top-notch book. I hope the author insists. This is the second best source-free fanfic I have seen.
I'll go, it's pretty cool, because you can see from Fangyuan's various behaviors that he's very intelligent, and he's very comfortable. It's very exciting to watch [angry][angry][angry][angry]