Handcrafted from scratch, ruthless, action-packed.
Nami: “He saved my village, and I still misunderstood him. I’m the worst!”
Usopp: “Shadi’s pretty much a good guy, I guess. I just don’t really dare stand next to him…”
Tashigi: “He’s a menace to the sea! He almost cut me in half! I still have the scar he left on my chest!”
Crocodile: “I can’t figure that guy out. I offered to share Pluton with him, and all he wanted was to cut me down!”
Luffy: “Shadi, how can you be so cruel? You wiped out an entire island again!”
Alvida: “I saved him, and he abandoned me…”
“Is it true you seduced Alvida and then dumped her?”
“Lies! That’s a complete fabrication!”
“Then is it true that you have absolutely no interest in women?”
“Women only slow down my sword!”
“Ooooooh!”
“So your sword is so fast that you can slice fish-men into pieces without even trying?”
“Cutting them into pieces is too much trouble. I’ll turn them into takoyaki!”
I like this kind of thing. It's better than many pirates nowadays that are looking for women everywhere. I don't know what to think about the time-travel belt system and the ship. There is no need for love in a passionate novel. Of course a person wants to do what he wants to do when he travels through time. Be the leader of a red revolution, or be the enjoyer of capital operation of harvest, or want to have a war that destroys the world. I put everything there and stab Wang Oda in the back.
After reading it, it's really good. This is the mentality that a time traveler should have. If you don't follow the ship, some things feel very outrageous. For example, Arrita still ate the fruit after being defeated by the protagonist. She was originally beaten to an island before eating the fruit. Nami also joined Luffy's pirate group inexplicably. Then that's not Nami, let me explain (Nami's perspective in this book: A pirate wearing a straw hat who doesn't look like a pirate yells at me to be his partner every day, and then he also says that I and the benefactor of the village are bad people, and he wants to fight with the protagonist Fight, there is no redemption for Nami Village, no help for Keya, maybe even took her family's Meili number, and then was chased by Smoker for a long time. It can be said that most of the bonds were broken by the protagonist) It depends on what the author writes later.
The creativity is very good, the character design of the protagonist is also good, there is nothing poisonous, and there are too few of them at present. It is very smooth when rubbed by hand. I support it with five stars. I hope the author will keep writing, 🤭
Not bad, please update the author soon
The plot has a tight rhythm and develops quickly, and the story is strong. I feel that it will develop into the world later.
My five-star standard is very low. The plot is smooth. It's not about following a boat halfway. I start drifting on the sea in my dream, meet Luffy and then break up. I walk and fly in advance. It's okay but it's outrageous or very poisonous.
The protagonist's character is very appealing
It's okay. Come on and update it. I'll keep it for a while. I hope I won't die of it.
So far it looks pretty good, Goldfinger is considered super strong. The strength is like riding a rocket. Brother, control the combat power structure and don't collapse.
Come on, the writing is good.