First comes the story of the Old Nine Gates. This chapter is fairly short and serves as a transition. After that comes the third generation of the Nine Gates.
Just after Yang Hualuo transmigrates to the Prince Lu Palace at Guazi Temple in Shandong, he witnesses the eerie sight of five ghosts bowing in worship.
Wu Xie sees this person silently appear behind their group of five, and a chill crawls up his spine.
Wu Xie: “Are you human or a ghost?” Wu Sansheng: “There’s a shadow standing right there, and you’ve got two eggs hanging under your eyebrows. Can you do nothing but fan the air, or are you blind?”
Wu Xie looks aggrieved. “I panicked. Besides, aren’t humans scary too?”
Wu Sansheng is at a loss for words, thinking that he actually has a point.
Yang Hualuo: This guy just showed up and shone his flashlight in my eyes. Is he trying to provoke me?
Yang Hualuo glances at the quest description: Find “Little Baby” beneath Shatou Reef in the Xisha Islands, Hainan.
Yang Hualuo: ?
Yang Hualuo is confused. Little Baby? A little baby? A little darling?
Darling? Treasure? A child?
What kind of nonsense is this?
It's pretty good to read, but I'm sure the author has polished it with AI. I feel that everyone is a little too cautious and serious. The AI is a little bad, and the writing is too much like a bystander. The overall book is still very good. Maybe I read too many AI articles. I feel that the background of all the characters is the same, and they lack a bit of human vitality.
It would be better without AI polishing
It's good-looking, and the character of the main character is awesome, with a calm and unrestrained feeling. No CP, no ambiguity, feel free to rush😳
Immortal, Huahua has her own style of acting, and her magic pen and speaking spirit are almost the same. She saves everyone when she can, does not put pressure on herself, and is free from plans to record the same personality as all living beings. Super love 🥰 🥰
He is a new author, his writing style is very average, he lacks psychological description of the characters, and his sense of substitution is not strong. , And when the protagonist knew that he might not be able to go back after entering the game, he should have been a little panicked, but this was not shown in the article. The protagonist's speech and behavior in the full text did not conform to the logic of the world. It may be that the author wanted to create an image of the protagonist as an outsider, but there was no foreshadowing, which was a bit abrupt. However, the author's character setting is quite novel. I hope the author's writing style can be improved a bit, and I look forward to more exciting writing in the future.
It's too bland, there are no ups and downs, including the description of the characters, the personality is too flat The timing is a bit messed up, and some of the descriptions in the sentences are not consistent with the common sense of the protagonist, so I made this tomb robber world as a dungeon, and then traveled through time and space between his world and the tomb robber dungeon. The author may have wanted to write a little bit of a bland feeling where the protagonist is very bland and indifferent to everything, but if it is too bland, there is nothing interesting, and the whole article is a bit boring.
Hey, I want to ask if there is any CP in this?
The protagonist of the classic pen-stealing tool man, after watching it for a long time, I didn't see any personality. It is an artificial intelligence-type protagonist. He can do whatever others ask him to do. Not to mention the benefits, he also gives away treasures for free (haha, and Buddha and his gang trust the protagonist so much when they first come up. Probably because they don't know how to deal with it, they just clear everyone's wariness ()
AI, everyone got to know each other in the last chapter, and they get to know each other again in the next chapter.
I checked 25 reviews, but except for the good reviews, the rest of the reviews were missing. Haha, what else can I say? You said you traveled through time, but this time-traveling is not that time-traveling. It looked boring and left.