The Skill Is Perfect, My Liver Is the Martial Saint!

The writing is good, but the writing style is a bit inferior. I like to use natural words to elaborate. It can be seen that I am not good at writing about fighting. The settings are relatively complete, and the writing style is plain and simple. After reading too many tomato novels, it's good to occasionally read some speed bumps to calm your heart. Some small suggestions. I hope the author can optimize the plot. The protagonist of Jianghu Sinister currently has no highlight moments. He spends 80% of his time practicing behind closed doors. The simple writing style is a bit conflicting with the current martial arts background. Come on, author, Gangbadei!

It's okay, there are some things that don't feel good, but overall it's pretty good, and I feel like the author still has a lot of potential.

It looks good. This is a normal novel. The protagonist is clear-headed. Unlike other novels, the protagonist in this book knows that he will become a top powerhouse if he has a golden hand. I hate the kind of mindless mocking of the protagonist and slapping him in the face. The novel is normal. As long as there is no conflict of interest, who cares whether you live or die?

The plot is good, but the practice of skills is a bit slow.

It's pretty good. The most important thing is that there are no pretense, slaps in the face, pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger, and all kinds of messy plots, which is great.

Except that the protagonist's progress is too slow and the plot is a bit bland, everything else is pretty good.

It's okay, I'm practicing normally. Last time I looked at Changing Gengu, it was still the Taoist master who wanted to ascend.

He is a hard-working protagonist, not too toxic, but relatively beautiful and a bit cool. He is relatively bland and suitable for killing time.

It's very good, but the plot is a bit tight. When you're in a book shortage and haven't found a book you like, it's very good to pick up one and make do with it.

You can still take a look

Just like telling a story

Well written and worth listening to and reading!

The snake-shaped villain was eaten by the author?

Only 30 chapters are too few, come on✊

Overall, it's fine, with quite a few minor flaws.

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It's well written, but the output is too low. I strongly urge you to update it 5 times a day.

Don't stop updating, support your author, there will be 2 updates tomorrow

There was no touching of corpses in that book. The family was wiped out, and then the protagonist got some martial arts skills. I thought he killed his opponent without touching the body.

It's still ok, but the output is a bit slow.

It's pretty good, but none of the author's works exceeds 100 chapters. If it fails to complete 100 chapters, it will be given five stars.

I like this style of writing, cheers for the author [smile]

There are a lot of interesting articles on Tomato now, and it's okay to read bland ones like this once in a while. The protagonist has no problem so far.

The logic is okay, and so is the setting. The shortcoming is that there is a bit of a question in the shaping of the protagonist. When will he develop his state of mind? , I feel a little lacking and a little anxious.

The pacing is well controlled, a very good novel

Not salty but not bland. It is neither refreshing nor toxic, so it is suitable as a leisure book to pass the time. Such an ideal society. It seems to ignore the turmoil and focus on calm writing.

It's well written, and it's the first time I've given it a positive review. It's refreshing without any brainless or bloody plot.